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I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




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Part 84




Maan and Geet got down from car at little distance away from her house. They walked toward the home holding hands. Both had contrasting thoughts running in minds. Both were thoughtful for upcoming. Maan watched Geet. She was silent and lost. "She must be worrying about what should reply her father" he thought. Maan became tensed for her that she has to face Mohan's anger to come late. "It's my fault. I'm sorry Angel, because of me you would've to confront his temper". Maan wanted to make her feel relax, wanted to hold her in arms and caressing her back to assure, everything will be alright. She doesn't need to think regarding but they were in crowd and it supposed not to do what he wanted. Maan downcast gaze on road feeling upset that could do nothing.

Geet caught his brief look. He was looking worried and she guessed for what. He must be thinking about the papers. How he had wished to remove her father worry without hesitating to transfer his only property to her name. "Baba must know about it. What he sacrificed" she thought. Geet wanted her father to know Maan. She wished Mohan could see the reality of this man who was doing his last bit of effort to keep her and her family happy. She wished she could have a magic wand and could wipe Maan's entire worry with one stroke in air. She wanted to become his Angel.

Maan felt her eyes on him. He looked her and found she was smiling as like her eyes wanted to talk to him but he ignored her anticipated look. He didn't want to feel his incapability again that couldn't even give her happiness what she deserves. He didn't want to feel failure once again.

"Geet your house.." he paused for a while seemed was preparing himself for separation. "I should go now"

"You won't go back" Geet answered. Maan looked her watchfully and she appeared determined. "Let me go Angel" Maan said softly but she shook head. She didn't leave him, let him go. She kept continuing her walk pulling him forcefully that they reached just a ten walks away from home. Maan feared what if someone see them, he again tried to be freed but Geet tightened the hold. "What are you doing? Leave me Angel somebody will see us" he was not worried for ownself but for her and it was literal.

"I don't care and you're coming with me. We will talk to Baba"

"What? Geet you really lost your brain. We can't!"

"We can, and you are coming with me. Ab Chaliye!!"

"Geet it's not right time. Why you're not understanding..."

But she ignored his appeal. They had reached to the entrance. She rung the bell without giving attention to his dangerous glares and pressed bell again.

"Geet where were you Beta.." They heard Mohan voice and both heart started hastening. Mohan opened one side of the door and moved back giving Geet space to step in but she was paused. Moahn wondered as her behavior was strange and why she was looking nervous when she pushed another door-frame aside making Maan sight in focus.

"You?" Mohan got shocked to see Maan and he looked Geet expecting her to clarify this situation when his eyes tripped on their hands which were yet combined. Geet freed him at once.

"Why he's here Geet and what you're doing with him at this time?" Mohan questioned sternly.

"Baba we need to tell you something"

"I don't want to hear anything Geet, and you go to your room" He raised his tone.

"Baba please once listen me.. " Geet walked to him, but Mohan cut her off,

"I said you to go to your room Geet. We'll talk tomorrow" Mohan turned to go but Geet shouted, "No, I will not!" Then she balanced her voice in gentle, she held Mohan hand and requested

"Please baba, once listen me. I have brought him here and I really need to tell you something. Please.."

Jagan hurriedly came out when heard their quarrel. He also appealed Mohan to hear them once if she is saying there is something important, he should know. Mohan without answering them walked in.

"Go Geet.." Jagan whispered when looked her stood in doubt. She nodded and followed Mohan. "Baba" Mohan was sitting on chair in dark room. Geet switched on the lights. She came and sat on the floor beside his chair and held his knee.

"Baba I know, I'm not a good daughter but please just once listen me. I promise I'll never bother you ever. I promise you, I will do whatever you will want for me, I swear" she pinched her throat. "God promise Baba, will never meet Maan again if you will not like but please, just one time listen me. Please"

Maan and Jagan looked her shocked and so was Mohan. His heart melted when he saw anticipating tears in her eyes but couldn't show his soft side. He had to show he was strong. he nodded in affirmation.

Happily Geet looked at Maan. She gestured him to get the paper and showed it to Mohan.

"What's this?'

But Geet remained silent. She just waited for him to finish his reading and she studied his expression that was changing parallel as his eyes had been moving on lines written on sheet. Mohan stood up. He looked Geet surprised and then to Maan and it was damn clear with his face that he wanted the clarification from both.



Precap : Mohan's decision





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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello..mona,lakshu,priya,lily and sona..🤗





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😊 u r amazing writer mona ,,,,osm going,,,
maan did hs part by signing cmpany in geets name
nw geet took maan 2 mohan 2 show paprs 2 hm
egerly waiting 4 mohans dicision,,hope a positive one 4 mneet,,,😊

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😆 😆



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mona... howz ur holiday going on??
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

😊 u r amazing writer mona ,,,,osm going,,,

maan did hs part by signing cmpany in geets name
nw geet took maan 2 mohan 2 show paprs 2 hm
egerly waiting 4 mohans dicision,,hope a positive one 4 mneet,,,😊



Thank you 😳


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Originally posted by: singh24


Hello..mona,lakshu,priya,lily and sona..🤗












Hii babbie 😃
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mona... howz ur holiday going on??




Badhiyaa 😃😛

Per aaj se thand badh gayi

babbie teri city me toh aur bhi jyada cold hogi na.. snowfall bhi hoti h kya
Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




Badhiyaa 😃😛

Per aaj se thand badh gayi

babbie teri city me toh aur bhi jyada cold hogi na.. snowfall bhi hoti h kya


😊 😊 High hills per hoti hei..
my place is a plane area..so chilling weather hei..😊

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