THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 106

Originally posted by: spvd

part 68
awesome dear...
excellent...
hahaha Maan thought that was his dream again...
but twas reality and Geet had heard that...
Geet and her cute gussa...
so madam was ignoring Maan...
and Maan is so irritated...
his plan flopped...
Geet gave him royal ignorance...
and Maan came for lunch but Geet has gone to visit Maithili...
hahaha bechara Maan...
loved the update so much...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

previous two updates were fab

too dreamy

daadi is way too smart then maan, sab kuch nikalwa hi liya maan ke muh se but she helps him too for his plan of proposing geet in a proper way

Part-67

that was way too awesome, one of my fav update in this ff

maan proposing geet on Taj Mahal & his letter to her

love it...

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

67 Part 2

Dreamy, intense, beautiful...I don't have enough words to describe it. it was just so beautiful. The proposal was special not because it was at taj but because of the purity of their hearts and love. I think I had visited taj years ago and still I remember this symbol of love. Taj itself has become the icon of love and The way you described everything made me actually feel like I am watching it in front of my eyes. Thank you di for such lovely update.

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

Part 68

It was mindblowing di!!! I mean it had everything, intense passion, spice, romance just about everything. Geet's reaction was natural. I won't go to the fact of it being right or wrong. Different people have different opinions regarding this and you showed us just one of the face.

so msk the hungry lion and wounded even. Two of his plans have felt. dearest bambi, better buck up because MSK is not going to b easy to handle now. But then love can do wonders!!!

loved the last paragraph especially where you expressed Geet's turmoils and inner thughts. Jus loved it di!!!!😊

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovey cute emotional update.. te way my maaneet in sleep cant control themselves and my maan ki touches and geet too like his touches was lovely cute.. te way geet wen she realize and she pushed him and my maan blabbering abt his dream making her gussa was lovely cute.. te way she said she is good girl, bad boy maan, ha ha.. te way my maan want to be msk in front of his geet will he?.. infront of his sherni?.. te way geet avoiding him and my maan longing to be with his geet and te way nakul thinking he should be his shadow oh god nakul, pls dont face my maan ki gussa, bechare nakul... te way geet too was affecetd by my maan ki look but avoid him and te way she was fighting between her innocence and her love for him was lovely.. my maan will not leave u geet and once u r married he will lock u in ur room for 24*7..lovely song selection...i love te update

Originally posted by: Shruti_Goyal

luved it...luved it...luved it so much👏
ohh emm jee😆kitni asani se giit ne maan ko hi suna diya😆it will be real fun to see wht hpn next[:p]who is going to loose their contrl first😆
bechare maan ki sari perfection check waste ho gayi🤣
oh how i wish ki is baar nakul hi lucky hota🤣
maan..omg...whr will his rstlesns go☺️
very very very good update😃
it ll b best if u can make 20 more update of this FF rather than 2 update😃
dev and naintara's mrg and then maaneet's😳

Originally posted by: honeygrape

lovvvly paart...jhalli geet is impossible😆😆😆 bande ne dream kiya aur uske liye bi geett naaraz 😆😆

loved the part Avii...