DARK TEMPTATION #2:Mod note pg52

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

May be Geet has some painful past.. But why diid maan hate her in school too.. he hates her like she is his janam janam ki dushman.. Maan only wants her body now..😲 may be he will realize it soon that he is wrong in that.. May be first time today he has shown his emotions for her... when he used bad words abt her..

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

awesome update

maan getting attracted towards geet...

update next part soon!!!!

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

superb update..so maaneet knw eachother from there childhood maan trying to understand wht he is feeling for geet...opss maan angry n geet a lil emotional,maan hurting geet with words...n again fighting..lovely update continue soon baby

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Dragon-Heart

@Dragon-Heart

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
May be Geet has some painful past.. But why diid maan hate her in school too.. he hates her like she is his janam janam ki dushman.. Maan only wants her body now..😲 may be he will realize it soon that he is wrong in that.. May be first time today he has shown his emotions for her... when he used bad words abt her..

very sonnvu will get all ans sweety

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

richa it was amazing. maan is attracting toward geet. he wants her very badly. maan become so much angry without knowing the reason. thankfully maneet has solved the problem. maan's harsh word make geet very sad. i think there is something which is she hiding. waiting for next dear.

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Dragon-Heart

@Dragon-Heart

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shalinimaaneet
OMG Itni nafrat
maaneet to kuch jyada hi nafrat krte hai ek dusre se
aur geet ke past mai kya hua tha jisse woa aisei ho gyi hai
kuch to gadbad hai
ek ne kuch ehna hai to desre ne uski baat ko ct krna hai hai

geet kka behaviour to juch alg hi hai

aur wo kitna drink kri hai
maan ko sirf baby ki wajh se geet ko dekhna pad rha hai

nhi to wo dono ek dusre ka face bi na deken

hayee mujhe to us din ka wait hai jb maaneet ek dusre se pyar krne lagege 😳 😳

wating for nxt

sweety wait for right time only😉

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

That ws superb. Maan want geet it may be out of lust but, very soon he may want her for himself by heart, soul.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

wow lovely emotional update.. te way my maan left his geet and geet waking with her darkeness was lovely emotional..te way my maan ki thoughts was occupied with his geet and te way he wants to get rid of it so engrossing himself in his work was lovely emotional.. te way dev and geet ki conversation my maan ki gussa and te way dev trying to coveicing my maan and te way he barging to geet's house and te way both arguing and geet pointing te mistake but my buddhu maan's ego not allowing was lovely..te way my maan cuming to see his geet and te way both fighting and my maan ki harsh words which hurt his geet and her tears which pricks my maan and te way he hate himself for drowning in her was lovely emotional..te way my maan locking his geet in her room and swimming and te way geet irritated was lovely emotional.. so geet is alone and she have some dark past with painful memories witll my maan cums to know..i love te update

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rishabala@maaneet

@drashtiMyAnGeL

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

i had been reading it for half hour.bcoz i read every line 2/3 times.so much passion.still can fill maaneet passion.hats off to u.especially maan.can't wait for next.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Interesting part.Maan with his conflicting emotions is driven towards Geet time & again and Geet with her share of miseries trying to move Maan aways but failing.Maan by being harsh with Geet is just trying to fool himself,though he is saying that he only cares for d baby but its not true otherwise he wouldnt have given Geet two day's time.Her tears have also started effecting him.Story in progress 😉

Curious about Geet's past.