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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi laks mom aa gayee kya,,??



hai lils pie

haan aa gayi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mona aaj koi nahi aaya ab tak... i thought i was late...

kaisi ho mishreee




mai bhi wait kar rhi hu.. aaj priya nahi aayegi function me gayi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hai lils pie

haan aa gayi



kiski mom aayi hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago


meri saasu mom😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
sewa karing,,,kya khila rehii ho,,??
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Posted: 11 years ago


great .. kasi hai wo?? akeli aayi ya sath me bhi koi aaya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



great .. kasi hai wo?? akeli aayi ya sath me bhi koi aaya



after my FIL 's death she is staying for some mon with her daughter and then with us... yest she reached her for a 3 mon stay

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Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 80


"Maan where are we?"

Geet wondered looking around. It was a small cottage building being situated in outskirt. She was not scared though but not so relaxed as well as she was seeing this place for the first time.

"Relax Geet, I'm here" Maan held her hand. She stared him and studied his expression. He was relaxed and so she as well composed her heart. She nodded. Maan led her inside.

Inside it was a refined place which seemed like a small house. Well maintained and warm. It was only one room but it was big and she could easily feel his excitement to be there. She doubted. "Why you're smiling?

"Why can't I" Maan closed the door. He comfortably came and lay down on the bed pillowing his hands beneath head. The bed had been kept in center of room. He appeared carefree and his face was glowing in delight.

"Why is he so happy?" Geet thought. "Maan are you going to tell me why we are here?" she followed him but stood near the bed.

"I already told you Angel. Didn't I?"

Her irritation went up with every passing second. "Why you're behaving so wired Maan" she was frustrated and rushed to door to see where were they or was anyone around?.

"what you're trying to do Geet?"

"I want to leave this place" She shook the door but it was locked.

"You can't" Maan calmly stood up and walked to her. Geet stared him in disbelief. Her amazement increased when Maan pulled her and tugged near at once. She collided with his chest where his rapid heartbeats were hitting against her palm. She pulled hand back in unknown fear. Her face showed how her mind was racing disorderly.

"Don't fear Geet, you're safe here" he caressed her face to make her relaxed.

"I'm not fearing" she whispered lost in turmoil, "Why did you have to bring me here?"

"As I'd said.. " he left her and turned, walked to the table. He picked a paper and looked over to his shoulder, "You have to sign here"

"What's this"..she spoke out then suddenly her eyes widened, "Marriage papers!!"

Maan smiled. She couldn't believe, he was really doing this. He had threatened which came true. "Are you gone mad!!" she stumped in anger. "Maan it's not fun what you're doing. Let's leave from here I don't want to be here" she tried to snatch the paper from his hand but Maan raised it up. He shook head. "We'll not. Neither I nor you will leave Geet. You'll sign on this and we can leave together"

"It's just.. just.. unbelievable. Maan you really have gone mad doing such things. You know it's not right we can't have this marriage happen like this" She was in real shock why was he behaving weird.

"That I don't think. I just want this to be happened and this will happen whether you like it or not" Maan responded stubborn. He kept the paper on table and laid down on the previous place. Furious Geet rushed to take the paper and crushed in hand,

"I have another Xerox Geet, no benefit"

"Urghh!!!" She couldn't believe it was happening. She banged on all windows to make them open or not if then break them but failed. Everything was well secured and she was well trapped. Alone. With him. She turned and found Maan sleeping calmly and having naughty smile. She felt like to bang on his head. Her anger escalated on extreme. She lifted a glass from table and dropped on floor. Maan jumped up with the annoying sound. Geet threw an angry glare to him but Maan ignored. He slept again.

"Maan I'll not sign on any paper. Now will you drop me home!!" she leaped on bed and sat crossing arms over chest and kept her face side.

"We'll stay here overnight if you don't do what I said Geet. Now let me sleep, entire night you had kept me awaken" he turned backing to her.

"When did I kept you awoke Maan?" She startled. She turned him to face her. "It was you who ignored my calls" she said angrily. Her face was puffed and red. Maan smirked and next second he pulled her at once that she fell over him. Maan rolled her down. Geet was dumbfounded.

"Then why did you have to make me angry Geet?" He curled her fallen strands in his finger and stared her face keeping her so near. His words fell on Geet ears like mere whispers, her senses stirred simulating.

"I did nothing" she whispered back but couldn't keep track of thoughts. His warm breathes covered her face as he bent nearer. "You did everything" he brushed his mouth on her throat. Her breathe stuck there at once.

"You brought me here without my wish. You are forcing me to sign the paper.. you didn't hear what I said and now blaming me.." She closed eyes in reflex but argued even though her voice felt vanishing in air.

"Because I have right on you.. " he caressed thumb on her lips "for everything..."

"And where is my right Maan.." she asked staring him hardly gathering her senses. "So that I can stop you.." her breathes were excited and chest rose and fell on the same rhythm of his heartbeats.

"Sign those paper Geet, you'll have every right on me.." he replaced his thumb with his lips. Geet felt she was being kept on blazing fire but she had to control. If she lose her strength this battle will be lost without even fighting it. She pushed him back forcefully. "I won't sign anything" She tried to stood up but Maan held her tighter.

"And you'll not go anywhere till sign them"

"Leave me Maan I'm not going to talk to you!!" she struggled in his hold. She didn't want to be harsh but he was making her do it. She bit his hand and pushed him from her. Without collecting her Dupatta she hastened to the door. She pounded shouting "Help me!!! Is someone outside?"

"What are you doing!!" Maan yanked her at once. "What do you think of me!!"

"You kidnapped me Maan what you want me to think of you!!" she blasted out without thinking but then gasped. She shouldn't have said those words. She felt his fingers piercing through her arm in anger.

"I won't force you Geet. You don't need to fear from me" His voice had pain of disbelief.

"I'm sorry. I know and I trust you"

Maan calmed his anger down. He knew she was not on fault. "Then what's your problem you to sign it Angel"

"Because I know it will bring misfortune of future. Why don't you understand Maan?"

"And why don't you believe me. Whatever I'm going to do is the best for us" he released her.

"Urgh!! You are being such a stubborn child Maan" She animated hands in air.

"And you're my cry baby. Now sign it"

"I'm not crybaby and I will not!!" she said keeping both hands on both sides of waist.

"You will" he advanced to her.

"I won't!!" she ignored his nearness and crossed arms over chest.

"Will see!!" he was just a inch away from her, "I'm hungry" Geet spoke turning face side. Maan shook haed. He smiled and walked toward fridge kept at a corner and took out a bowl. He kept it on table.

"It's cold. I'll not eat it!!" she said grumpily and sat down on bed resting back to pillows and stretched legs at front. She looked him from cornered eyes. There was a small kitchen place. Maan put the gas on and warmed the food. He placed the dish in a plate and brought to Geet. She liked his attention but ignored.

"Now what? Take this, it's warm now" Maan said when looked her sitting still.

"Where is your plate? I'm not going to share from mine" she showed her attitude.

"I'm not hungry" Maan walked and shared the other side of bed. He copied her position and crossed arms over chest and said.

"Why not hungry? I don't want you to blame me later that I kept you starved." she lifted the plate and walked in his direction. Maan heart bounced thinking she is coming to feed him with her hand but for his dismay she passed his way and brought food in another plate from kitchen and placed before him on bed. "Now I can eat without tension" she said and finished her plate.



Precap : A big surprise for Geet



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Posted: 11 years ago
😛 aaj maine sixer maara yaron,,,😆
misree aaj to kush meherbaniii ki hei lov dis mneet ,,,childhood wale lag rehe hein
maan ka srprise kya hein,,,??

Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
laks ne bhi choka maara,,,
hum dono ke liye thoko taaliii...👏

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