SS: O Sanam Bekhabar--part 8 pg 47 9/12 - Page 22

Originally posted by: ashakavyam

Hai

Silent reader of the fiction. Please do not make geet to come back to maan. At least he has to recognize her importance. I don't know when Manav will understand about his mother not getting the logic of why he is not missing her

Love

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

maan missing his wife and daughter...what promise did he make to muskan that he cannot even express his love to his daughter...hope geet won't come running back to him...may be maan should take a step this time...waiting...

Originally posted by: sanum23

Awesome pt

Geet also have crush on maan

he insulted geet by giving divorce

so he have to go a d find geet

WAITING

Originally posted by: spvd

part 7
awesome...
so Geet are Kushi are traveling in the train and they have met Arnav...
interesting...
Kushi is a kid here...
17 years...
what is Arnav's age?
Geet's persistence made Arnav to open up...
poor him...
Kushi didnt like that but later didnt mind him...
and Maan now hes going to their rooms...
why?
let him suffer...
and Muskaan what the hell was thinking and doing?
isnt Geet a kid and way too innocent to be shared with such things?
seriously this Muskaan character is too much...
oh no Geet is gonna stay at KM...
already shes suffering so much...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: preeti.1

Geet should never come back to maan ..he never cared about geet felings usko sirf us selfish muskaan ki promise ki hi chinta thi
..jo har pal uska ghar uska bachcha aur usko sambhal raha tha tab kyu nahi dyan aaya..20 yearse jabhi usko anniversary yaad nahi rahi to ab kyu geet wapas chahiye. ..maan should remorce badly

Originally posted by: gurti30

why is maan still thinking it wrong to think about geet when he knows dadima chose geet for him

so that stranger in the train is arnav who has lost his mom and geet's loving gestures reminded him of his mom

i dont understand muskan on ine side she dont like maan looking at geet and now she wants geet to stay with them. does she want to show geet how maan loves her

geet having feelings for maan so dont want to live in km

khusi forgot her diary in km and maan found it.

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Geet going 2 maan or

Maan Comming 2 geet.. as long as they r together kya fark padta h !😉

Waiting for the next!

Originally posted by: diadecember

Waiting

thank you guys for waiting.. i am going to update this story.. will try to give updates every week.

Next part:

Sleep was the last thing on Maan's mind. He twisted and turned on the bed unable to get a good position. He felt as though age has at last caught up onto him. He knew well why he was getting disturbed. He felt very lonely now. His heart and suddenly his life felt empty. For the first time in years he did not plan what he would do the next day. He did not try to recollect what he did today. The only thought that stuck in his mind was her heart broken face and unshed tears that glistered on that girl's face. This was not the first time he was being rude with her but somehow he felt he had overdone everything this time. His heart told him that this would be the last time he would ever be rude with her. She was gone. Emptiness slammed into him again with this thought.

Past

Geet was feeling restless. She was irritated with her family for ordering her to stay in Muskan's house. She loved her Di a lot but somehow the thought of seeing her Jijaji was making her worried. She knew that he dint like her a lot and was somewhere scared of getting hurt by his indifference. She thought she had to devise a plan thereby she would not face him at all.

There was a loud knock on her door and she opened it to find her close friend.

Geetu ready to start college in Delhi?? He asked her smiling

Yes yaar.. She said distracted.

Tu worry kyu karthi hai. I have friends who will take care of you. Moreover me hun na waha. He said as he placed a hand on her shoulder. He thought she was worried abt college, seeing her face.

I know Raj.. par mom dad ke bina kese. She said successfully hiding her emotions.

Chall pagli.. your parents are so proud of you. Moreover tu to Muskan ke sath rahne wali ho na?? Then what cheer up.

Hmmm I am trying...

Packing ho gaya kya? He asked seeing her bags.

Almost. Mom is packing something for Didi that is the last thing I have to keep in.

Ok I am going for shopping thought you'd need anything that is why I came. Anyways be ready by 6 today train ke liye. Saying Raj left.

Geet sat down with a sigh. She knew this was inevitable.

...

Meanwhile Maan was feeling the same. He knew he had to avoid Geet at all cost. He now understood that there was something with Geet that attracted him and he was determined to never make such a mistake like that. He felt awfully ashamed for his behaviour and even more when he realised that Muskan has seen it. He felt he has somehow let his elders down by giving into a minute of weakness. His only option remained is to ignore her when she is around and to avoid seeing her to the max. With this thought he settled down feeling a bit confident.

Next day morning came. The whole house was awake and busy. Muskan was excited as her sister was coming and Maan was forced to wait for her. The time came when the cab stopped and Geet got out of it. Following her was a boy Maan dint know or liked to know.

Geetu Muskan yelled excited as she rushed and hugged her smiling sister.

Maan's eyes did not leave that guy and saw how comfortable he was with the sisters.

After every one settled Maan left to work but his mind was still glued on that guy whose name was Rajvir.

Evening came and Maan was home. He freshen up and was in his study when Muskan came in.

Why are you not taking with Geet? She asked

There is nothing to talk to her. Maan dismissed her

Hmm. Anyway she settled down in the next room to dev. She said

Aur wo ladka? Maan asked not able to stop himself

Rajvir? Wo tho challa gaya

Ho.. You seemed to be very comfortable with him.. He asked as he typed on his laptop

Me?? Why?? Muskan was confused

You were laughing and giggling with him as though he was your long lost friend. Maan grumbled not knowing why he was annoyed to see Rajvir making the sisters laugh,

Oho.. My Maan is jealous? Don't worry.. Muskan laughed. He is a very close friend of our family. She said then stopped. And he is Geet's boyfriend she lied.

Maan stopped typing Geet's boyfriend? Aur wo bhi is umer me? He asked shocked and somewhere angry

Han.. aur nahi tho you thought all will be as boring as your wife?? She giggled. But her eyes were glued on him noting his actions

You are not boring Muski. It is good you don't have a boyfriend otherwise how would you have married me?? Maan replied with a smile. He understood that Muski added the last part as she was insecure again.

Ha ha.. teek hai.. anyway got to go.. dinner at 8. Saying she left happy. She lied to Maan abt Raj as she dint want him to have any thought of Geet.

But Maan was angry. What kind of girl flaunted her boyfriend in front of her sister's in laws? Dint she have any shame he thought as she furiously typed something in his laptop.

...

Present:

Maan got up from his sleep. It was morning and for the first time in his married life there was not Geet. He got up and freshen up. He had his regular jogging and yoga. He got down the stairs and walked towards the table. His regular green tea was missing. This spiked his anger and he called out Geet.. Where the hell is my tea? A servant rushed towards him. Sir?? Wo sorry sir.. Please wait I'll get it. The man shivered seeing the anger in Maan's face.

Maan sat down waiting. He would be late he knew it. What was that girl doing anyway he thought when it stuck him suddenly. She is not here anymore. This thought bought in the sorrow of last night. His daughter has also gone. He hated how he had spewed out words when that girl had talked back to him.

Sir tea. Saying a cup of green tea was kept in front of him. One sip and he hated it. It was not like how she used to make. He was about to leave it when his mother came

Beta you did not drink it?

Wo ma..

You dint like it no? But it is going to be like this only from now on. Geet is gone you know that don't you? Pammi asked poking at him. She wanted to know if he was as heartless as he behaved.

Maan closed his eyes to control his irritation. He took the cup and gulped down the awful liquid.

Ab teek hai.. Saying he left with a bitter taste in his tongue which the tea had very little to do from.

Geet was awake by the time Kushi got up.

Mumma did you sleep?

Yes beta.. Now go and brush. Saying she turn her head looking out. Kushi sighed as she did as her mother said. She knew it was going to take time for her mother to move on. But she was determined to push her mother more.

Geet looked outside but she dint register any site. Her mind was wondering if Maan had got up or did he have his morning tea? Most importantly did he realise she was gone. She knew from day one that Maan dint want this relation but still why her stupid had feels for him why does it beat hard when he is around why does it feel lifeless now that things have broken off between them.

Past:

Geet was quiet apprehensive about today's shopping. Muskan had forced her to buy jeans and tops along with skirts (this story is 20years back yaar.) she had bought clothes with her but Muskan had forced her to come. Collage was starting in a week. She gulped when Muskan cheerfully started showing all their purchase to Dadi ma.

Arrey wa bete.. You'd look good in these clothes Dadi praised with a smile. Muskan why dint you get one for yourself?

Nahi Dadi. I don't like to wear all these. She said coyly.

Just then Geet saw Maan entering the hall the minute he saw the clothes and heard it was for Geet she saw his face hardening. He then left to his room.

Geet signed. She dint know what she did to make him hate her so much.

It was night when Geet completed arranging her things in the cupboard. She realised that few of her stationary was missing. She went to ask Muskan and was told it was in her bag. Muskan was busy talking in the phone so asked Geet to get it from her room. Geet, not thinking too much entered the room and started searching for her things. Just then the bathroom door opened to reveal a half-naked Maan. He dint see her first but Geet defo saw him. She was transfixed in her place and her heart was beating hard. She tried to turn her head but couldn't.

What are you doing here? Maan's angry voice brought her back

Ji. Wo... she stammered.

Maan quickly wore his shirt and glared at her.

See Geet you are not a kid. You should know well not to enter anyone's room like this. He growled angrily

No..wo I asked Didi.. I just wanted something that is all. Geet said trying to keep herself from crying.

I want to tell you something. You should have understood well that I don't like you a lot. So kindly stay away from me and this room when your sister is not there. Understood. He glared again at her as thought she was the worst thing in this world

Ji.. I understand. She stammered as she turned around and ran from the room in tears. She knew he dint like her but hearing it from his mouth was heart breaking.

As she left the room she saw Muskan standing there looking at her sadly. But Geet dint stop she ran to her room and cried lying on the bed. She knew coming here was a mistake and this incident proved it.

Present:

Aunty?? She heard a voice and turned to see Arnav calling her.

Han beta? She said, managing a smile

Chai saying he placed two cups on the small table

Thank you

Mereliye? Kushi asked coming

That is for you only. Arnav said pointing at the other cup. I don't drink tea

Oh... you remembered me when you got that.. Hmm not bad buddy. She smirked as she grabbed the tea from the table.

Arnav looked the other side trying to hide the small smile on his face.

...

That is all.. hope you like it.

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