THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 93

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Pari said sorry to Tara N Dev.. Friendly hug has happened.. Finally there will be no past scars on trios mind... Aww.. Maneet romance.. N Nakul is back...🤗 He is the only one who can irk Maan with his innocence..🤣 Poor guy.. he doesn't even know why his maan sir is angry on him? Maan nakul ke sath bhi apani MU khatam karo..😉 😆 Kabir's mom.. Loved the way savitriji made her understand don't get involved in ur past n spoil ur present.. She has started living happily.. N that moron came back again..😡 What right Summet has to rule on her life.. moron.. I want Kabir to stand for his ma this time very strongly.. I want him to throw out man like Sumeet from his n his ma's life.. he doesn't even deserve to be called human.. father is long away thing..😡 Now getting precap meaning.. angry MSK for his sis Megha.. Sumeet must have said something abt her... But now this time Sumeet N brij will face real MSK.. Brij too attcked on Geet.. so he too deserve punishment..Wooho band bajoaon do in dono ki Avi.. Gosh Avi.. meine kitana lamba comment likha.. I can't believe this..First long comment on this story..Aap aise updates degi toh mein essays likhana start karoongi..😉

@underlined: lol... isse long kehti ho toh meri updates ko kya kahogi...😆😆
Thanks Teju. It was indeed nice to write such a long comment from you.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

Buddha🤣 ye gaana sahi tha..

ab ye sumit yaha kyu aa gaya..😡

i want kabeer to thrash him.😈

lovely update avi.

Thanks Mannu😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome update
love the way pari came and said sorry and tara made dev to forgive pari as well
love the dadi who was support for maithili and directed her how come out of her suffering and become strong

omggg I hope she is ok. why that 😡 has to come now😭😭😭 when she is feeling happy finally

and maaneet omggg love each single interaction between them provided via eyes, pouting lips or talking
her singing song and maan's getting angry but he still came behind her in kitchen to get some sweet moments but kya mile white hair🤣🤣
omggg i love the geet's monologue the way she complain to baba ji about him being gussa, raising her hopes and then scolding her self and
then her saying that she is going to get mask for maan's eyes sooo he will not make her crazy😆😆😆😆

ufff I just laugh like hell avi


then their want to come close but holding back. sooo hard but maan did it. he was teasing her but did not cross any limit as he promised.
what a cliff hanger avi

ab agar mein bolungee waiting for next update to u will say wait but how to
jab tum aise modh pe update ko shodogee😕😕😕

precap is kind of sad
judai yehhh geet has to go and
wonder what happen to megha, it sounds like maan is talking😕😕
then omggg brij is back😡😡

😃 so you don't like cliffhangers...😆😆 Oh oh! Aissi cheez Avi ko nahi kehni chahiye...😆😆
Thanks Jas😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

pari ki maafi maangna aur tara maaf karna aur dev ko convince karna sab kuch itna achanak huwa expect nahi kiya pari aisa karegi.
Ab Pari ke liye ladka dhundha hai toh use theek toh karni padegi na..
maithili's and dadi convo is so emotional.

yeh kya sumanth phirse wapas aagaya😡

haaye haaye giit ko budda milgaya😳😳😆😆

aur usne thodi der keliye sach sabat kiya unintentionally uske baal ko white karke😆😆😆😆cute romantic moments in kitchen😳😳
Thanks! My hubby hates that song..😆😆
maan ne giit ko apne jaal may phasa diya par usne apna limit cross nahi kiya😳😳

precap may brij aur sumeet😡

Ab ending mein band bajani padegi na..
Thanks Priya.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



Main kya karoon Ram mujhe budha mil gaya
haay budha mil gaya

ab to Maan ko dikhana hi padega ki woh kitna jawaan hai...Geet ko to romance karke samjha dega but Nakul ko kaise samjhayega ki uske baal abhi safed ahin hue hain...

precap---judaii...kiski...please yaar Maaneet ko juda mat karna...unke bajai baaki kisi jodi ko kardo I care least but Maan-Geet badi mushkil se nazdeek aaye hain firse judaii nahin...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


@underlined: 😲 Itni mehnat karti hu par tum padhti hi nahi ho unke parts..😕
Judaii choti wali hai... story khatam jo hone aayi hai.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

I liked how pari sought forgiveness from dev - tara and both very broad mindedly forgave her.

So SD helped maithili at her needy time and boosted her confidence to stand on her feet...
Loved their enjoying - teasing time with each other...oh my...what song geet chose for maan...loved their bedroom part also...
Seems sumeet & brij both are back in maithili's life...

Thanks Madhuri. Pari was too young to punish for long. Kuch stupidity, kuch nadani teenage years mein ho jaati hai.
Sumeet and Brij have to be sorted out. I have two weeks to finish but am not finding too much time.
Glad you are liking it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: docgurti

I m forced to repeat my words dat u r one of the finest writers i hve seen on this forum...no matter d no. of likes bt u r one of the best writers here...dadi's interaction with maithili was touching and just awesome...👏

loved maan geet romance...

ll be waiting for the next update.

Thank you so much. Likes and comments are the only way to know if I am being read at all. I have to say that I may have fewer readers but my readers are there for me. Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashi0504

And you are the most amazing writer on this forum😊

Thanks so much😃 Please keep up comments for all writers so that Geet forum stays active and is not removed.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

The portion of Dadima encouraging Maithali Maa was really superb.Dadima just awed me once.A lady so full of life,so fun-loving yet so strong and wise,has to be saluted.And its so good that Maithali Maa listened to her and started living her life.But ye kya hua,his impotent ex-husband is bk,now who will save her??????

The Dev-Tara-Pari part was also gud.M glad that Dev forgave Pari,and now Teji-Pari equation may be seen.

The Antankshari,was superb as always.I love dis game[It happens only in India] And Geet singing "Budha mil gaya" 😆And then d kitchen romance,haiii...aur iss Nakul ki toh mai!!!!!!

In d bedroom also,the temperature was super hottt.The part was so beautifully written dat I was mesmerised.

In total,great part.Loved d song and d VM.

Strength cannot be established unless it is tested. Maithili will find out just how strong she is.
Thanks Sampa.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zafarahim

i like way u giv importance to all the characters... the part with pari was too good... there is a prominent place for every character in the story.. thats the best thing abt ur story... its more into real life ... kudoos girl...👍🏼

maithili is a common face of women ...but not every1 is lucky to have mentors n supporters for them like she had ...wish every1 women like her had some1 like geet or savithri Khurana who can help them come bak to normal life... that was every emotional part... its painful to realise that when i write this , there r many women out there, who face this creulity this very moment 😔. God please help them all...

our bambi is sooo cute n sweet ... ur rite... bambi n karate ,...hmm no use... y bambi.. even MARY KOM wont b able to do anything in front of our hero... n i lov the " THUDs"... u r too good... keep up the good work...👏

as always waiting for more/...🤗

Thanks Zaf. I did want my characters to have "character". That is what took me a while to make this OS into an FF.

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