THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 50

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

nice part

maan asking dev's help to team against dadi😆
maan kitne jooth bol rahe ho geet ke bareme dadi se😛
he is worried that why geet didn't come to meet him
but geet to ai hai aur maan ko dekh kar bechaari ka haal kya hogaya😳😳
loved dev-poonam scenes
ok pinky came to know the truth about adi
loved it
eargely waiting for next part

Ishq chupaye nahi chup sakta... aur Daadi bhi toh CID hai...😆
Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh, there is a part 4 too!! Did not expect that!
Loved Dev! He is such a charmer, always knows what to say to make people comfortable and get them involved. His intercation with Poonam was so beautiful. His surprise for her was perfect. Only love for a child can bring parents together, love for a child makes it easy to forgive the other. The developing of a bond between Chandan and Poonam is so very well written. This was the most beautiful part of the update.
Maan toying around with Dadima was fun to read, but I think she is too smart. She will figure things out with one call to Sukhi!

Adi-Pinky MU also cleared.

Great update!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
I was busy in a wedding in the family, but today when I logged in I was in for a pleasant surprise. Two updates and one part completely for Maneet. Can't ask for more.
Part 4
Dev shows his maturity, affectionate and caring side while dealing with poonam.
This is why they say hope springs eternal. Hope chandan gets his share of happiness.

Poor Adi never imagined he had undergone so much of pain.

Another jatka waiting for Maan. Poor guy.

Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: siyana

maan dadi convo was funny
poor dadi apne potoki lovestory ke liye kitni mehnat ki but instead of saying thanks they r giving tension to dadi
koina daarji he na unke khabari
maybe he will provide latest maaneet news to her
then dadima can take her sweet revenge on maan by telling geet what he said abt her
it will be real fun
loved the way dev mingled with medhas parents
it will ease their heart that their daughtes childhood was not that bad n khuranas loved her like their own child
that was really nice part
n poor adi facing all problems nice that pinky knows abt it now
fab update
btw u r not updating maaneet scenes on ur blog right i am little confused abt it


Thanks. Glad you liked it.

About the blog, I will send access to you by PM. There will be a post on IF. Please post your comments here.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Chap 63, part 3.

Loved it. I am floating in Maneet land after reading it.
Good that Geet decided to confront Maan.
Atlast MSK becomes Maan again, and confesses his love. Geet's acceptance of his love and taking the blame on herself was the best. No one except Geet can do that.
Their romance was filled with freshness.

Do you have to finish it off?


Sadly yes.. my workload increases to double after xmas. as it is I am up till two at night to write..

Thanks 😃 for the support
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

Oh, there is a part 4 too!! Did not expect that!
Loved Dev! He is such a charmer, always knows what to say to make people comfortable and get them involved. His intercation with Poonam was so beautiful. His surprise for her was perfect. Only love for a child can bring parents together, love for a child makes it easy to forgive the other. The developing of a bond between Chandan and Poonam is so very well written. This was the most beautiful part of the update.
Maan toying around with Dadima was fun to read, but I think she is too smart. She will figure things out with one call to Sukhi!

Adi-Pinky MU also cleared.

Great update!!



Thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

Oh, there is a part 4 too!! Did not expect that!
Loved Dev! He is such a charmer, always knows what to say to make people comfortable and get them involved. His intercation with Poonam was so beautiful. His surprise for her was perfect. Only love for a child can bring parents together, love for a child makes it easy to forgive the other. The developing of a bond between Chandan and Poonam is so very well written. This was the most beautiful part of the update.
Maan toying around with Dadima was fun to read, but I think she is too smart. She will figure things out with one call to Sukhi!

Adi-Pinky MU also cleared.

Great update!!



it is a long part. part 5 will be on the blog tomorrow. Access will be Pm'd. Please leave comments here.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

I was busy in a wedding in the family, but today when I logged in I was in for a pleasant surprise. Two updates and one part completely for Maneet. Can't ask for more.

Part 4
Dev shows his maturity, affectionate and caring side while dealing with poonam.
This is why they say hope springs eternal. Hope chandan gets his share of happiness.

Poor Adi never imagined he had undergone so much of pain.

Another jatka waiting for Maan. Poor guy.

Waiting for the next update.


Jatka for Maan? kyun? I did not understand.

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the whole update
naughty maan
mature dev
cute geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the update... loved it very much... 😊

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