THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 26

Originally posted by: SonalikaSingh

god !! i have died and officially gone to heaven ! this is the most beautiful fan fiction of MG and the characters of Maan and Geet are fantabulous.

Thanx Avi for recreating the magic of GHSP in ur own miraculous way.

luv u.😃😃

Originally posted by: spvd

part 63
part 2
excellent dear...
loved it so much...
my God even in villages such girls are there?
but Geet is still the lovely innocent one...
and Maan has understood...
i wanted to post in the previous comment it self but forgot...
if Maan tries to jalaofy Geet then he can forget giving him looking at him too...
oh wow Maan was planning to make Get jalous but Taji came there...
too good and Geet and Taji's friendship is so so so lovely and adorable...
in fact Geet is so lucky to have such people in her life where ever she goes...
Darji is too much...
so Teji knows about Maan...
interesting...
loved it so much...

😃

Originally posted by: heytal

Part 58

Feeling so bad for Thakur's

specially Poonam and Chandan they have actually lost a whole lifetime for others doings

Avi agar inn dono ko alag kiya toh katti!

nahi karungi baba...

Geet is one piece😆 Maan ke dimaag pe shots maarti hain😎

Bechaara ek jhatke se ubharta nahi toh dusra de jaati hain

Yeh ladki sach much tujhe paagal kar degi Maan🤢

The best was "Katenge nahin na?"

🤣 🤣 🤣

And there he goes again DD😡

Poor Geet ignorant to the fact what her DD has planned for her

Tara calls Dev to confide in him

She is so scared of her new found happiness being snatched away😭

Loved the way how Dev maturely handled Tara and her fears.

He is naughty as a child but with such ease he managed to comfort as well as assure her😳

Dev tara have found their groove.. and under it all they have a hard fought love, which they will not let go so easily.

Geet witnessed their love and the term her Maan had once stated brought a new ray of hope in her only to be ruthlessly snatched away by The Maan Singh Khurana😡

My heart went out for Geet🥺

Maan's behavior is disgusting!

Megha-Kabir moments were so cute

There joy and feelings so clearly depicted😊

Loved Geet-Pinky convo how both are trying to see the silver linning of the dark clouds looming in their life😕

Superb update Avi

just amazingly compiled and penned😊

Precap 😳😎

Originally posted by: maanland

Thankyou thank you thank you so much dear

for the update

It was so so so good

loved each and every word of Maan and Geet

their anger. their love their confessions everything

superbly written

👏

and thanks for daily updates even when u are so occupied with ur work

the reflection of a couple in love in the mirror was so beautiful

so Maan's naughtiness has also awakened

naughtiness runs in their blood😆

It would be so nice when the newest CID will chase the so experienced CID daadi

once again thanks so much for such a dreamy update

even the precap is interesting

Originally posted by: heytal

Chapter 59

Oh my poor Geet she was all alone on the graduation ceremony🥺

She felt so lonely in the crowd the balloon symbolism was just so touching😭

Their moments of togetherness flashed in her eyes, the sky too crying along with her, so much pain buried deep in her heart

Even though she is a mighty spirited girl who never gives up hope, finds positivity in every negative situation👍🏼

Her self thoughs and her quick prayer oops revised prayer to her Babaji was so heart warming!

Truly Meeshti😳

Khotta Maan put her through all this😡

Fantastic update

Though it made me sad but still I loved it

😃

Thanks Heytal😃

Originally posted by: fffanatic

Mahiii Mahiii mahiii mahi ve mahi mahi ve
Loved how stubbornly geet demanded him to delete her pic and remove the locket ot tabeez
Finally its all said from both the ends
Maan knows she never got the letter and geet's sam mystery is solved
They are too cute with each other. ... they both sure do know how to tease each other
Finally darji and dadi had to play their card to make them meet alone. ...yeh dono toh kuch karne se rahe...sukhi savi ke bina inka kya hota
Maan made her wear the locked and connected a few dots related to his cid dadi..rofl
Plan inke(maaneet) pass bhi hai...plan unke(sukvi) pass bhi hai...yeh kya silsile ho gaye...:p
Geet agreed ro work with him
Finally maaneet in each others arms...where they belong
Maan told her when he saw her frst and how he fell for her...dreamyyy
can't wait to read more...

Originally posted by: heytal

Chapter 60

Maan slowly getting hints of his folly but...

dimaag dil pe haavi ho jaata hain😕

He reached her college not able to stop himself her tears slit his heart but...

again his big fat ego emerged victorious and he broke the thread of their unconditional, silent bond...The Locket!

Finally merawala precap aa gaya🥳

Dev got to know about Maaneet ki prem kahaani😳

Not wasting anymore time he updated his partner in crime to give the required push to their otherwise confused and stilled lovestory👏

Tara played her part perfectly planting the seed of Jealousy in The MSK's mind and there he goes straight to his lady love in the party😉

Aisha, Sharmeen re-entered what about Nauri and Mari?

Yeh Bilal kaun hain😕

Mujhe kisi ne bataya hi nahi😭

Haaye Maan ki dhamekedaar entry and Gorgeous Geet ko dekh ke hosh udd jaana...😳

Awesome song and superbly merged with KH pics👍🏼

Dreamy dance and passion unleashed☺️

Fabulous update

Loved it so much

Hope khotta paani na fer de😡

Brij ko Geet se door rakhna ok🤢

Originally posted by: heytal

Part 61

As expected Khotte ne raita fela diya😡

Poor Geet shattered beyond repair all her wait, her dreams, her love just crashed down in matter of seconds

The Locket which was so precious to both, bound them together has now shunned them apart

His behavior, his repulsion all making sense now and Geet feeling ashamed of herself 😭

Reality slaps his face hard

Much deserved realization dawns upon him but at what cost

He ruined everything by his own doings breaking an innocent soul🥺

Ranbir was so cute like he knew Maan has some connection to him😳

Afterall he is Geet ka Maan😛

Sona too makes her entry with her Yash and their twins😳

Pinky and Geet both pained by their love

Thank God Geet is safe and Brij ki dhulaai😆

But I still want Maan and Dev to do the honours of breaking his bones!

Geet going back to HP😕

Geet overhears Daadi-Maan convo for Sameera's wedding and misunderstands

Returning The Locket she leaves

Dev sees it and decides to end the game once and for all

Maan ko zor ke jhatke ki zaroorat hain!

But I guess its good Maan ko bahot papad belne hain😡

Avi agar jaldi compro karaya toh dekh

Totally gripping update

superbly planned

Enjoyed finally truth is out!

😃

part 63
part 3
awesome dear...
excellent...
loved it so much...
finally Maan told her about his feelings from the start...
but that was so lovely...
but i want Geet to tease Maan and trouble him so much...
haye the romance was so lovely and beautiful...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: dqno1

THANK YOU LAKSHMI FOR THE NEW BANNER

🤗

Kya yeh baat sahi hai?

Someone actually likes my story

enough to make me so many banners, isshhh...