THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 106

Originally posted by: dqno1

no maafi needed..

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Originally posted by: heytal

It was a total dramatic update!

Poor Pari was so guilty

glad both Dev and NT forgave her 😊

Oops Maithili in trouble😲

That good for nothing husband of hers is back in their life to create havoc😡

Hope Kabir-Megha's life doesn't go for a toss😕

Antakshari was superb

and Geet toh super cool😳

Maan ko budha bana diya🤣😆

Bechaara Maan ab toh full life Jhalli Geet ki shaitaani jhelni hi padegi😛

Par uski yeh hi shararatein life ko aur interesting or romantic banati hain☺️

Maan the hunter and Geet the prey😳

and Nakul

Their moments and the song

Haaye so dreamy

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Thanks for the lovely update

worried for Maithili

hope she is safe

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Glad you liked it Heytal. Maithili has moved so much away from who she used to be. After the initial shock she should be fine

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

i have to ...im sorry

btw..im still mad at u...😡

but is it possible to be mad at my DQ??!!!

avi y u want to end da?? i know im not regular..but i do..i swear..i do read each and every update of urs...and the feel u provide with ur songs..characters..be it tara...or dev...(bcoz all thru i hated them core)

is it really needed to end?? is there any alternative to follow u?? to dissolve in love with ur maanu and geetu...

and darji..how badly i wish i had a dadaji like this... ( well...i dint receive any grandpa's love ...bcoz they are with god even before i came into this world)

the madness in tara...and her stability...

the innocence in geet..and rudeness in maanu... flirtous attitude of dev..and his charm...how could i leave them ??

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Happy Holidays Avi and apologies for late comments...

awesome update as usual...

finally pari got chance to ask her sorry and she got it too...

Daadima=Maithali's part was very touching and i truly loved it and then...ahaan...

aisa budha ho toh mein budhe ke liye bhi tayar hoon...😉

awesome blossom romance...funnies was when she says mein karate kar ke dikhaaon...it reminded me of jab we met...lol...

very cute and sweet update

Originally posted by: nihatri

Awesome

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

hey Avi

realllyyy sorrryyy for commenting so late i was out of station for work and bloody hell dint have internet so couldnt read or comment .

now coming to your updates man you are one hell of a writer.

i just realized how strong ur characters are. part 63 -its good to know that pari has been forgiven and dev and naintara are off the trouble of suraj. and maithili man after going thru domestic violence she has become a strong woman because of geet, megha and kabir and most important our CID daadi. and maan man he is damn sexy in every avatar of his and geet ne maan ko budda kaha hahahaha...

anyways mind blowing keep it up

ABINAYA

Originally posted by: swati_su

Hi Avi,

Loved your ff, can u please send me a link.

Thanks