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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.











Part - 47


They were in d car and Maan was sipping water again and again * his mouth was burning coz of teekha paani * Geet sensed his plight and opened her bag * she took out a jelly candy and offered him * he denied but Geet opened d candy and brought that near his mouth to eat mouthing please..

He took that and got some relief after chewing that * he thought that today was d very lucky day for him .. he got a big tender and then spent beautiful time with Geet * though he postponed his two meeting for Mon but he was satisfied with d achievements of d day.


They were in d compound of KC after half an hour and he went to take his office bag * Geet remained in d car and she was thinking about him and his change behaviour . She liked his company and his caring nature ... Itna bhi bura nahi hei .. mere kahane per itna teekha golgappa kha liya .. Bechara ab tak iska muh jal raha hei chilly se .. maan bhi jaldi jata hei ... lekin gussa naak per rahata hei . sach mei angry bird hei.


Maan came back and settled near her * she offered him one more candy and this time he took that without a fuss * now he was feeling better . He was checking his mails in his phone and Geet got busy in her suddenly driver applied hard break to stop d car to save a running doggy and Geet bumped in front seat * Maan controlled himself and caught Geet . Ramesh dhyaan se , kya ker rahe ho ?


Sorry sir... dog tha..


Maan: Geet , r u OK ? ... Bolo na , tum theek ho ?

Geet didn't say anything and pressed her forehead * Maan removed her hand and caressed that place blowing air on that place * their faces were very close and Geet was feeling a tingling in her tummy in this proximity * her breathes became uneven and it was going very hard for her to reply . He asked again ... Geet jyada lagi kya , kuch bolo na ? He cupped her face and lifted to get a proper look * she lifted her heavy lashes and looked in those honey brown eyes * both were looking deep and trying to read d emotions which were floating there * their warm breaths were mingling and both were inhaling each other fragrances . He caressed her cheek with his thumb in a trance * his whole body felt a tensile and an urge to capture her lil parted lips forced him to minify d gap but d shriek voice of his phone broke their reverie.


Maan parted with a jerk .. damn .. ye mei kya ker raha tha ? I was going to kiss her in d car .. damn me ... He took his phone and replied * it was from YSK who wanted to meet him but Maan informed him that he is on d way to home. They talked for few min and this conversation gave them a good time to control their effusing feelings.


Geet was looking outside nonplussed on her feelings .. ye mujhe kya ho raha hei ? ye kaisa ajeeb sa ahasaas hei ? ye kaisi bechaini hei ? essa to pahale kabhi mahasoos nahi kiya? She shrunk towards d car door to maintain a gap between them .


Maan stole some quick glances of her while talking on phone * he cursed him for losing his control like that ... kya sochti hogi wo mere bare mei ? maine ku esse behave kiya? She was opening up and i ruined everything .. Maan tu koi kam theek se nahi ker sakta * ab ho gai na dur * pata nahi ab theek se baat bhi karegi ya nahi ? usse chot lagi hogi aur pooch bhi nahi sakta .. grrr .. Maan .


They reached home lost in their thoughts * She came out quietly and Maan ordered to his driver to bring all bags in d room * Geet took 2-3 bags and moved in * Maan followed her and find Dadima , GD and Pam in d living hall. Geet wished all and sat near Dadima * Maan to wished all and moved to his room .


Dadima asked about her shopping and Geet showed her d stuffs and said that Maan helped her to select d things. Dadima was surprised at this news that Maan was with Geet and helped her * her heart jumped with joy * she was very happy that Maan was trying to move on .


Geet : Dadima mei aap sab ke liye golgappe lai hu ,, abhi lati hu .


She rushed towards kitchen and placed them in plates * she handover d samosha pack to Nakul for all of them . Nakul became very happy and thanked her for that .


Geet placed d plates on d table and excused to change * Dadima thanked her and enjoyed d golgappa treat with GD.


Geet came in her room and slumped on d settee due to tiredness and didn't know when she doze off .


Maan came there and find her in deep sleep * a smile creep up on his lips * putt all d scattered bags aside and gave her a look * he saw a lil bump on her forehead .. God!! Esse to lagi hei * he went to his room and came back with an ointment * sat near her and applied d cream smoothly on her forehead . Geet opened her eyes with d feel of touch and pain * she tried to get up but Maan stopped her .


Maan: Geet uttho matt , so jao thodi der ,,, tumhe chot lagi hei ,, maine cream laga di hei ... kuch der araam karo ,,, mei bhi work out ke liye ja raha hu.


Geet was feeling lethargic and slept again to take some more rest * she got up after an hour with a jerk * Maan forgot his phone near her and that was ringing . She took that and saw d name Adi ... shayad office se koi hoga ? She got up and went to freshen up * she was hankering for a strong coffee but first decided to give his phone . Geet went to his room but he was not there then she remembered that he went for d work out * she came down and moved towards his gym * his gym was near d pool after crossing d corridor * she was near d door when she heard his hard voice like he was scolding someone ... ye kise per gussa ho raha hei ? right then she heard Pam's voice which forced her to stop there .


Pam: Maan u can't hide it from me , i knew that u have differences with ur wife dear * she has nothing to attract a man .. no sex appeal .


Maan: Pam ,,,, mind ur language ,, not a single word against her from ur filthy mouth . I warned u to stay away from our family matters .


Pam: which matters ? Everything is opened * i never saw bond of love between u 2, even she is not wearing d wedding ring * she is refusing ur relation then why r u pretending to be a honest hubby . Enjoy man , why r u destroying ur life for others.


There hot talk disturbed with d ringing sound of Maan's phone and they looked at the door. Geet entered in d gym and gave a hard look to Pam * she handed d phone to Maan and he replied Adi to call him back after few min and cut d call. He was hell worried for Geet's reactions * he was not sure what she overheard but her hard look was alarming him ... kahin ye sab kuch galat na samjh le * esse to pahale hi mujh per trust nahi hei * Please God , help me , he gave a helpless look to Geet and nodded in a NO.


Precap --- Geet's reaction ...??

Part - 48

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3832914/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-122-10-dec?pn=45





Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
angry bird control man control seedha kiss karne socha😛itni bhi jaldi kya hai beta thoda aur intezaar karlo wo bhi hojayega😆😆😆😆


aag tho dono taraf barabar lagi hai 😉

kitna pyaar se ointment laga raha hai


arey waah next pam ki band bajne waali hai
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛 mein doosree payydan pe aayee hun ,,dekha jaaye to yeh bhi buriii nehi ,,,,to yaaron party tym,,,🥳
pahle per priya ji brajmaan hein,,,congo shongo ji,,,,😳
ab updtt pe tipny tym,,,,😛
maan to shatabdi pe swaar hote hote reh gaya,,,kitnii jaldi hei isko kiss ki,,,😆
geet pe bhi effect ho reha hei,,,,😳 cady treat ho rehii hei,,,,😉

b rdy pam ki band baje walii hei geet ke haaton,,,,😆😆
Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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tera net teek ho gaya babie... good... missed u yes
priya111111 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago


kal tho koi bhi nahi aaye hai kya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



kal tho koi bhi nahi aaye hai kya



thide der ke liye lils and mona the
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😲😲 kahan gaye sab...???
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Originally posted by: singh24




😲😲 kahan gaye sab...???



aagayi hoon ek update thi padkar aayi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



aagayi hoon ek update thi padkar aayi


😛 good .. dusri party kahan hei..?😉

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