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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 43




They had a very bitter past and a wrack base of relation ... A relation which is very sacred and bounded two souls for next seven births. Any relation could develop only on d base of love and trust and it needs a good amount of time * u can't trust a person in hours or in a day ... Katra - Katra, Lamha -Lamha ye Vishwash panapta hei .

Maan was looking at her with hopes and Geet nodded her head in a yes . He beamed and hugged her in a flow saying .. Thanku. Geet was shocked with his sudden action * he parted after few seconds and cupped her face .


Maan: Geet .. i don't have anything to give u for this favour but i promise u i won't let u down * ab to iss jewellery ko friendship ka token samajh ker rakh lo.


Geet: nahi MK , kuch cheeje haq se lee aur dee jaati hein * jab aapke paas mere sawalon ke jawab ho tab dene ki sochna . Kisi aur ke saye mei mai apni zindgi nahi jee sakti . She left from there with moist eyes and Maan stood there with lots of questions .

belly chain

Maan came in her room and find her laying on her settee without change * she was lying on her stomach hiding her face * her dupatta was half hanging down and rest was under her * her milky white waist was clearly visible and Yes her golden belly chain * now that was clearly visible .. a Bful golden chain with some black beads ... black beads ?? He came near her and watched that carefully * it was in a pattern of Mangalsutra ... Gosh!!!! She modified d mangalsutra in a belly chain to hide it from people . Maan was amazed to see this reality * she was living a life of a married girl from d day one hiding it from outer world * doing all her duties as a Khurana Bahu * respecting and caring his family but far away from d happiness of a newly Wed girl and what is she getting in return .. insecurities , isolation , insult and pain of compromise. Maan felt a lump in his throat and thought that she was his in all manner but he deprived her from all happiness and rights in his anger * he was cursing him for his deeds * how would i cover up this gap ?How would i change this bitterness into love ... Love !!!! and his heart skipped a beat on this word .


He wanted to hug her , console her and wanted to wipe all her tears * he bent down and called her Geet ... Geet ...


When she didn't move he turned her holding her shoulder * she was crying and tears were wetting her face * his heart cried seeing her like this .. Geet Please ro matt * apna gussa , apna dukh mujh per nikaal lo * i'm here to listen every accuse , lekin please ro matt. He wiped her cheeks and cupped with his hands .

Geet broke down with his warm support * she hugged him and cried out hiding her face in his crook * he shuddered and felt her warm tears on her skin * he hugged her back .. Geet , please don't cry * she was pouring out her pain on him and her whimpers were stabbing him . After few min when Geet felt lil light tried to parted but she was snuffing .


Maan wiped her tears with his thumbs , cupped her face ... Geet , please ab aur aansu nahi .. bas * apne aap ko aur dukhi matt kero ,, shhh bas and hugged her * she was so much tired and broken * finding a warm and tender support she slack off her body on him * he was caressing her face ,head and back to console her * he moved her lil and sat on d settee * adjusting his back taking a support and holding her close to him in his arms * both were finding solace in this closeness * she slept after few min clinging to him and he too love this feeling to have her so close to him * he rested his face on her head and slept there with a content heart .


Though there were many differences between them but d feel of belonging to each other forcing them to think for each other * d seed of affection sprouted in d warmth of care and trust . He got up in d morning with d chirping of her buddies in d balcony and felt lil ache in his back coz he was sleeping in a half laying position and Geet was also sleeping peacefully resting her face on his chest * his shirt was in her grip . When he registered their position , a bful smile adored his face * he looked at her face which was very close to him * she was in deep sleep in his protective fastness of arms and this was d most beautiful morning of his life * he couldn't hold back and placed a feather kiss on her forehead * this lil gesture filled his heart with immense pleasure and a feel of possession. After cherishing this bful morning he carefully made her sleep on d settee and covered her with a blanket * he moved to his room to freshen up .


Geet steered in sleep after losing d warmth , slightly opened her eyes and find herself in her bed covered * she looked around but didn't find Maan there * she realised that she was still in her last night dress and remembered her and Maan's convo then felt embarrass remembering how she broke down in front of him * she was cursing and chiding on her for her showing this weakness .. sab kuch jante - samjhte hue bhi mei itni kamzor kaise pad gai, Wo bhi usske samne ? kya sochta hoga wo mere bare mei ? Ab kaise samna karoongi uska ?


She got up and went to get ready for office * took her readymade BF and came down to meet Dadima and then to office. When she was coming from Dadima's room she saw Maan in corridor talking to Pam and his face expressions were showing that he was very angry * he was saying something to her pointing his finger at her * Geet couldn't hear their convo coz of fair distance but she became curious ... ye Pam per ku gussa ho raha hei? She left from there with a confusing mind .



Precap --- Geet got something interesting ...😛


Part - 44

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3823432/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-5-updated-pt45-pg125-1-dec





Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
maan didnt bring any gift for geet but dadi handled the situation in front of everyone but geet can read maan's face . she know he didnt brought the gift
maan asked sorry from geet from his past behaviour and want to give a chance to him and this marriage😊
hope geet will accept his friendship and with time trust and love will happen too😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet breaking down😭😭chalo kam se kam kuch pain tho kam huwa

arey waah maan noticed her belly chain and came to conclusion that it is mangalsutra

angry bird ab majnu bird banne jaaraha hai.


Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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aaj kisi ka muh dikhayi nahi huwa kya baat hai
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Originally posted by: priya111111



aaj kisi ka muh dikhayi nahi huwa kya baat hai



i'm too waiting for lakshu... pics di hei usse edit kerne ko..😛
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Originally posted by: singh24



i'm too waiting for lakshu... pics di hei usse edit kerne ko..😛



shayad ussi kaam may busy hogi
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai babie and priya..
babie abhi aayi ans just saw the pics... gice me some min... kar rahi hoon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lakpm

hai babie and priya..

babie abhi aayi ans just saw the pics... gice me some min... kar rahi hoon



hi laks baby
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lakpm

hai babie and priya..

babie abhi aayi ans just saw the pics... gice me some min... kar rahi hoon


😃 Thanku my sweetie pie...😛

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