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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

interesting
waiting for the update

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Omg!!! That was horrible
Last part of prologue was damn shocking
Was that maan???
How could he!!!???
Geet is no where at fault but got punishment for her brothers sin??
Now her family is treating her like that!!???
What's her fault in this!!
N rajji!!?? How cruel a sister can be??
Gosh that was so intense :(

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

wow what a start!
its amazing!
the story is quite interesting and in the first part my heart went out to geet, she became a helpless victim in a ruthless game of vengeance!
waiting for more please continue soon

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

maaan raped geet ...big mu hogi lagta he ,,,,,,,,,

waiting for update

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Heart wrenching part.Fabulously written.The pain and helplessness was so evident.

Superb starting.

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OsheenDGr8

@OsheenDGr8

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
kissi ne zakhm woh diya ke
mera zameer bhi taar taar ho gaya
khoon ke aasu bahe aankho se
par muh se aah ,na nikali
aur hum bezuba ho gaye

ee khuda !
jab deni thi ,zinda rahne ki yeh sazaa
toh phir ,
kyu tha mujhe paida kiya
kahne ke liye ,sab the mere paas
par kissi ko ,
na main apna kahu
is liye rishto ne tha nujhe bezuba kiya

na koi aise jiye
jab maangani chahi maut
to zindagi ne bhi
bezuba kar diya
aur yeh dard umar bhar ka
mere daman main bhar diya

hi dear,
hope you like it
waise mujhe doubt hai
ke yeh nice hai bhi ya nahi
as [practice khatam ho gay hai
but still
tell me kAISI LAGI