Secretly Smitten#8 (Thread 9 Link @ Pg 140)

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Superb update. That was a really painful and sad departure. Gosh the seperation was so well written that you captured the emotions perfectly. It was nice that Mohan had expectations from Maan after seeing him such a long time ago. Fab job as always and can't wait to see what is in store next.

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: LILY111144
iss dil ke tukre hajar huae koi yanha gira koi vnha gira ,,aur har tukre se awaz aayee Mona yeh tune kya kia,,,,,😭😭,,,,,

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maine kaha kuch kiya.. jo bhi kiya un budhoo ne kiya

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

I won't say Mohan is wrong.. he is scared for his daughter.. he very well knows yash..Anyone could be at his place will behave like this.. but now liked that he is making maan understand.. hope soon maan will create his own world soon.. N be aware from singhnias..hope apani angel ko bhul na jaye business k chakkar mein.. because they will be in real danger if Maan won't be with them.. Nice part..

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

part 68

awesome update

loved maaneet's moments

mohan came to know about maaneet😲

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

ufff...they have to separate and mohan took away geet with him...he did not want to go shirtless in front of mohan and I liked that maan came back again

waiting for twist

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Beautiful update..so Maan came to meet Mohan and convince him, He has to now prove himself regarding the responsibilities for handling business. What's the twist..hope it to be a positive one.

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

itnaaa Painfull update:(((((((

abb kya hoga:((((((((

tujh se Towel wala NPM manga tha aur tu Twist de rahi hai Mona:(((((

Me Scraed:(((((

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mehak173

@mehak173

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

maan did not want to leave geet but was helpless geet freaking out and maan tried to mke her relax when he was himself not able to control him
Mohan did not like maan staying in car and not stepping out
Geet crying her heart out hugging maan's gifted teddy
Now what is the twist i hate twists they are not good most of the time hope this is not one of it