The Locket (14) MG FF, new thread link pg1, COMPLETED

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Muskan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

After a very long time u have written part explaining like this wait will pm u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: muskanp
After a very long time u have written part explaining like this wait will pm u

i have this song on my playlist since it was released. If I say that I go to see Rahat Fateh Ali Khan's concerts just for this song, though I love all his songs I won't be lying.

That is what I was trying in this chapter. Geet's state of mind. The desperate plea of a young girl in love whose Piya has suddenly abandoned her. She does not know why or how but she longs for him with each cell within her.

Hope that's what it conveyed.

I needed the readers to be aware of this so that the next chapter makes sense. Bholi Geet passionate dance kaise karti?

Thanks Muskan. I did respond to the PM also.

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

EMOTIONAL UPDATE SO SAD POOR GEET FEELING SO HURT ALONE AND SHE FINALLY OPENED THE LOCKET AWESOME UPDATE BEAUTIFULLY DONE LOVED THE SONG THANKS FOR THE PM

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LM1991

@LM1991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Avi,

Beautiful! Geet's pain & anguish is so palatable!

I'm happy with small & frequent updates rather than long & delayed updates.

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Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

nyc update... felt it wz tooo short !!! waitin fa d nxt

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love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

maan plz solve d mu...feeling bad fr geet...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: priya111111
oh poor geet akeli padgayi hai 😭aur maan ko miss karrahi hai
iss akudu ko kab akal aayega😡

Thanks Priya😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: gurti30
beautiful dear
felt so bad for geet everybody has found their family and love and geet is feeling lonely without family and love which is so close yet so far
hope she will not loose hope and trust she has on their love😊
waiting for party dhmaka😊

Thank You😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: annbell
update is fab ..
u just portrayed geet feelings very nicely nd i loved it ...
its soo emotional ..
she is lonely .. no one is der for her to hear out .. her confusions .. sadness ..
d part dat i really felt sad was dat she thinks der is no reason for her to stay in delhi ..
but in all d things happened she thinks positively .. nd no complaints at all ..
i love geet's character very very much .. she is soo sweet .. n innocent ..
i know i have written dis many tymes .. but can't help .. 😉 ...
nd finally she got to see wat was inside dat locket she was wearing for 2 years ..

simply awesome .. 😃 ..

I love her character too. She is modeled after some people I know.

Things in life sometimes are not easy but the quiet courage with which some women conduct their lives with a smile on their face not even wincing when in pain, makes them someone special. Truly people whose hope and faith carry them through life.

Thanks Annbell.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: anjalisen85
awesome👏👏

geet is remembering her sweet memories with maan😳

geet is breaking from inside due to maans indifferent behaviour😭😭

geet is trying to think what went wrong btw them😭😭

at last the locket is opened to manofy her confuced heart😃

update soon

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