The Locket (14) MG FF, new thread link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago


lovely update avi...


my heart goes for our bambi... i so much felt her loneliness when she was gazing at the lone balloon drifting away...


and u were hell bent on making me senti along with geet who was reminiscing her moments with maan... but as am anticipating our DD to come later on the party... am keeping a hard face😆... maan se rasiya naach kar geet ka mood teek ho hi jaayega


what an apt name u chose... bambi... for the past 2 yrs she is having that locket with her... but she saw the content only today... ufff...


next part... after the precap u can imagine how eagerly i will be waiting for it...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



lovely update avi...


my heart goes for our bambi... i so much felt her loneliness when she was gazing at the lone balloon drifting away...


and u were hell bent on making me senti along with geet who was reminiscing her moments with maan... but as am anticipating our DD to come later on the party... am keeping a hard face😆... maan se rasiya naach kar geet ka mood teek ho hi jaayega


what an apt name u chose... bambi... for the past 2 yrs she is having that locket with her... but she saw the content only today... ufff...


next part... after the precap u can imagine how eagerly i will be waiting for it...

I wanted to keep this separate from that..
Better that the updates are shorter. I can focus on the feelings of each character that way.
Glad you liked it. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh so touching that was
so she seems to be so lonely
her tara di is gonna live with her parents
megha has kabir and his mother
but she has no one
and his actions arent helping
and all because of one mu
oh well what you say is try
he is more passionate when he knows she isnt his which is silly
no really he is
she is confused whats happening with him
hmmm so she is hoping all will be well in the reunion part huh
lets see what jealous and possessive maan does
hmm so she finally opened the locket
wonder if thats symbolic i wonder
cant wait for more

cheers for pm
waise i dont mind what you do as long as you manage to post some of the story
even little by little will do then

You caught that very early Chavvi👏
Yes, it is an opening of the acceptance that is coming. To examine the relationship more closely.
Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divya22

nyc part..
oh geet is slowly losing hr hopes...
she is feeling lonely..
well ek taraf se dekhe toh geet for sumtym u shlu leave maan n go to hp.
aane do usse piche piche...
n m ok with short n frequent updates.

My readers are ahead of me😆
Lets do the party first..
Thanks Divya
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update...👏...waiting 4 the next part......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ittu sa...i wanted a big update...but dis one was also gud!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
simply amazing...
waiting for the rest part...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome👏👏



geet is remembering her sweet memories with maan😳



geet is breaking from inside due to maans indifferent behaviour😭😭



geet is trying to think what went wrong btw them😭😭



at last the locket is opened to manofy her confuced heart😃



update soon

😭



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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Geet she is feeling disheartened as Maan is successfully avoiding her. She has waited for so long and now feels that she doesn't have the strength to wait anymore. Everyone has a purpose and a loved one with then except her; Geet is feeling lonely and unloved. We will all wait with her to see how Maan reacts at the party. Hopefully he will see her wearing the locket and understand her love for him. Waiting for the next update and Maans reaction. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't know like not working

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