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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Res😃

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Wow things are changing rapidly here , the turbulence is taking twists and turns within a blink of eye

The more Maan think of his relation with geet the more he discovers about his unleash feelings .

Loving their real yet virtual equation , Maan can feel the tingling sensations but geet is far away from responding to them ,but I m loving the way the story is moulding through Maan perspective ,though we have a miles to go right now 😆

The dream sequences instigated Maan already not - so- in -control emotions , the way u penned down the prose was amazing I am still reeling out of its effects , now I think even Maan intuitions have got a hang of his inner turmoil ,the care factor is slowly changing to the state of attraction or rather i would like to call it as adoration , this part was enough to tigger the Maans realisation mode ( I guess ) , geet's inattentiveness is adding its own essence becoz the more u see something special distant from u the more u run behind it .

Ahh I was waiting for that guilt session and finally saw a slight shadow of it ,I knew this session was inevitable wasn't it ?? Well when brain and heart are at war such things come out as side effects but here the effects are not lethal, rather they are fortunate .😆

Geet's immense trust on Maan reminds me constantly that the journey is not that tough, Maan is thinking out of box when it comes to geet and this is excellent , he is taking baby steps towards his ultimate destination .his retrospection on geet's not - so-relevant moves is highlighting the fact that he is falling for her .

Aww poor receptionist , she had a very bad day good that Maan took her case , she badly needed one

Thank u for the pm

Love

Aanya 😛

Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago