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sona...😊
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mehmaan ki seva giri ki aaj?? how was ur day???
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Updating...



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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 37


It was Geet bad luck that Nakul left for his quarter to take her lil daughter to doc coz she was in fever and he didn't diliver Geet's msg to Dadima. When time crossed 9.00pm , all became tense .. where is she without informing anybody ? YSK and Dadima were very restless and only bad things were hiting their minds * Maan was getting hyper for her carelessness of not picking d phone and not informing at home * her phone was ringing but she was not replying ... kahan hei wo itni raat mei? Kahan ja sakti hei ? Some more time dragged and Dadima getting impatient and forcing to do something to search her.

All were hell worried for her *GD and Pam were advising to contect Geet's friends but they didn't have anyone's number. Dadima knew only Jadoo and Pari * she and YSK didn't know anything about her colleagues . Old memories were stricking Maan's mind .. how that B**** Sam vanished... kahin ye bhi to nahi? his temper was rising every passing second * his mind was surrounded with old memories .. kisi per yakeen nahi kiya ja sakta ? Pata nahi ab ye kya scene creat kerne wali hei? * Dadima and Annie were on d verge of crying.


Mahinder's car stopped at KM's gate and Geet came out with some packets in her hand * Mahinder was busy to collect other packs when Geet entered in Living hall and wished Dadima but she and YSK rushed to her and started their questions . Maan came like a storm to her , held her arm tightly giving her a jerk and yelled .


Maan: kahan thi tum ? time dekha hei? Informed nahi ker sakti thi jaane se pahale lekin nahi akad kam ho jayegi na * aur phone ku nahi uttha rahi ho apna ?


Dadima and YSK tried to stop him but he didn't listen and cut their words .. please aap beech mei matt boliye ... ye aapke laad -pyaar ka nateeza hei * she didn't think about ur worries and enjoying .


Geet was staring at him puzzled and somewhere felt insulted * he was scolding her without asking any reason in front of all.


Maan: tumhe idea bhi hei yahan Dadima aur Dad kitne pareshan hei ... kitne phone kiye hei tumhe ? informe ku nahi kiya agar jaana tha ya late ho rahi thi? Kahan thi tum ab tak , bolti ku nahi? He shook her again and she stumbled .


Mahinder entered in d hall followed by watch-man with some packs and baskets in his hands * he rooted at his place watching d scene in front of him * Maan was shooking and yelling at his Guddu. Maan and all looked at him surprised . Mahinder came closer dragging his feet with lots of question in his eyes and looked at all .


YSK: Mahi , tum is time ?


Mahi composed himself and replied: haan wo thodi late ho gaye .. sorry, lekin hua kya hei?


YSK collected d dots and asked :Tum Guddu ke sath thy?


Mahi: haan , isse office se pick kiya aur fir shopping, to late ho gaye, lekin baat kya hei?


YSK: wo Guddu office se ab tak ghar nahi aai to sab kaafi tense ho gaye , issne phone bhi nahi uthaya .


Daidma came forward and said: Geet kabhi late nahi hoti aur aaj itni der tak nahi aai to sab ghabra gaey * isne na infome kiya aur na hi phone ka reply mil raha tha * hum sab bada derr gaye thy.


Mahi: haan , Guddu ka phone aaj ghar per hi choot gaya , wo mei force kerke isse le gaya shopping ke liye , mujhe to kuch idea nahi hei * Karwachoth ke shagan dena tha to Rajji phone per batati gai aur humn lete rahe bas ussi mei late ho gaye, lekin Maan Guddu per ku naraz ho raha tha?


Dadima : Geet beta aapne hume inform ku nahi kya?


Geet: sabhi number cell mei thy Dadima aur maine phone kiya tha ... Aap ghar per nahi thy ,,, Nakul Dada ko maine aapko msg dene ko kaha tha , aap puch lijiye unse.


Dadima: Nakul ghar per nahi hei , wo humare aane se pahale hi chala gaya tha.


Maan felt very bad listening d truth , but d damage is done * he left from there ashamed on his act.


Dadima: hum bahot derr gaye the beta , aap itni raat tak nahi aai to . she cupped her face lovingly .


Annie and Dev too came close and hugged her showing their worries .


All settled in d hall saying sorry mahi and Guddu for Maan's outburst. But Geet felt insulted and hurt * she quietly sat there and Mahinder handed over all d things of Shagun to Dadima saying ... Maaji ye karwachoth aur Diwali ka Shagun hei . Dadima was overwhelmed by his respect and she thanked Mahi for all those things and gifts. GD and Pam were looking everything with curiocity .


Mahinder left from there after spending some time * Dadima requested him for dinner but he said that he and Guddu took that outside. Geet excused herself .


Geet: Dadima i'm going to change and feeling very tired too * she wish GN to all and came in her room with a heavy heart * Maan's rude behaviour was hurting her .


She changed , searched her cell phone and find that in washroom * checked missed calls * preapered a coffee and sat in d balcony with a grumpy mood * her eyes were burning and she was on d verge of crying . She was adjusting everything for their respect in front of their guests , but he was insulting her in their presence ... Kya meri koi izzat nahi hei ? agar iizzat nahi ker sakta,. to be-izzati bhi kerne ka bhi haq nahi hei.


Maan was in his room and cursing himself for his outburst on her without any fault* ye kya ho gaya mujhse ? Gusse mei kya kuch nahi keha diya usse ? usse bolne ka .. apni baat kehane ka moka tak nahi diya... Kisi aur ka gussa ussper nikal diya .. ab kaise face karunga usse? Mei to usse function ke liye request kerna chahata tha .. aur jab wo khud hi adjust kerne ko aage aai to maine aur dur ker diya. I hurt her and insulted her ... wo to pahale hi apne ko alag rakhti hei , ab aur ho jayegi ... God!!! Ye meine kya ker diya?

Maan didn't come to take his meal and remained in d room regreting and ashamed over his bad behaviour. He came in her room with a thudding heart * looked around and find her sitting in d chair immersed in her thoughts * he observed her for few min and sighed ... again on square * he moved back and settled on d bed quietly but his heart was criying seeing her like that .. hurt and alone . Whole night passed like that ... she didn't move from there and he didn't have d courage to talk her. Maan got up early and hit his gym in frustration and started his tai-chi , he was hurting himself to pour out his anger * he was hell tired and sweating hard after vigorous exercises when Pam entered there *



Precap - Maan manaofying Geet ...


Part - 38

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3812181/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-4-updated-pt38-pg136-24-nov






Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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am first yahaan bhi... yahoo...

uff... yeh angry bird... jab jab yeh angry bird bantha hain... he hurts geet and also pushes herself more far away...this time like the previous slap... it was real hurting... though this time he didnt physically hurt her... but he insulted her in front of the whole family including the guests... 😡

aur yeh maan ... sirf gussa karna aatha hain... manaane ke liye agla update tak wait kyu kar raha hain... muhurat hain kya??? tabhi raat ko kyu nahi sorry bola???

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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mehmaan ki seva giri ki aaj?? how was ur day???


😊 haan yaar.. ussi chakker mei late ho gai...
2 days se writing work bhi nahi ho raha hai...
kaise manage karungi updates...
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Originally posted by: singh24


😊 haan yaar.. ussi chakker mei late ho gai...
2 days se writing work bhi nahi ho raha hai...
kaise manage karungi updates...



sun ko tho wo jaa rahe haina... tab tak stocked updates nahi hain kya??
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



sun ko tho wo jaa rahe haina... tab tak stocked updates nahi hain kya??



hei .. but skul bhi to hota hei.. jyada time nahi milta..🥱

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