THE LOCKET (13) MG FF,new thread link pg 1,COMPLETED - Page 81

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Awesome superb muahhh update Avi:)

jhappiisss:)

Originally posted by: spvd

part 58 part 1
awesome dear...
lovely...
this baby will bring together Poonam and Chandan...
poor them...
they have suffered enough...
does Tara know about her parents' truth?

No Tara does not know what happened that night. Some things will stay only between them.

hmm Geet is so cute...
and Maan hes the Dusht Danav to its extent...
gadha...
hahaha she was telling about Teji like some programmed site...
my God...
well Maan if ur heart is saying shes ur Geet why the heck arent u clarifying with her u idiot?Kaisa puch sakta hai? If Daadima was blessing both of them, she seems happy with Dev and Dev is happy how would he break it all up? He has also seen Dev's heart break in London so he will def be the big brother.
sigh Dev had to call her at that time only...
now Geet should trouble Dev when hes romancing Tara...
OMG he gave the project to Sasha?
how could he?
poor Geet baby...
shes so hurt...
and hes trying to chuck her out from everything...
well let him beg her to comeback to him later...
Geet shouldnt forgive him easily...
he doubt her now let she also tell him has he fallen for some London gori...
Dev and Tara can never control themselves...
well no one can with Dev but Tara shes getting her happiness finally...
why is she so tensed?
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

sorry for the late comment... was down with fever...
Hum saath saath hain😆
poonam has suffered so much in her life that bitterness in her is not shocking... her firm decision (as per now😉) to leave chandan, is also due to this... i hope when she sees tara well settled with dev and gets back megha ... her bitterness gets reduced... and she is able to see chandans love towards her and daughters...and is able to trust him...

second letter... what is in that???😕
Bani banayi musibat taalne ka nuska! Solution to some or most problems. Will he read it? Will she want to know? Dekhte hain in coming updates, ting tong😆
though i loved bambis matrimonial recital... but the best was "kaatenge nahi na"😆 ... to be kiss was lovely!!!! DD tu bahut tarsane waala hain...he even removed geet from her project😭 avi am eager for badla time😈
Avi ka nazuk dil Maan se badla nahi le sakta hai.. 😳 Kitna pyaar se baarish mein ek nazar ke liye khada tha.. tum girls sab bhool gayi? 3 yrs ka pyar?😲
loved dev tara and megha kabir moments...

will be waiitng for the next part... but before that do get well soon... and fit avi banke update dena

tum bhi fit ho ke aa jao .. mostly Friday for the short update; if not then Sunday😃 Saturday poora din office hain. Thanks Lakshmi

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

so cute part...i loved geet & maan more than others...

hope poonam will understad chandan while he helping out for tara and finding megha...or may be megha is the one who will unite them...

geet to sach me bambi hai...tara se kuch sheeka nahi kya...? kantenge to nahi...? ROFL...sach me maan to geet aisehi paagal kar degi...loved her ranting teji's matromonial bio-data to maan...but still he is angry on her...poor geet ...he did not leave chance to humilate in office too... maan to geet ko KC, KF, KM se bahar karne wala hai...ab dinner kaise rahega..? hope he will come to know about dev-tara wedding...

megha is very happy with their new small new home...glad that they are happy with each other...

cont soon...waiting for maaneet moment

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

A beeeautiful mosaic of four amazing love stories.Loved each and every story but as I cant help myself fm being partial,Maaneet's part was loved more by me.

The proximity of both the lovers has been explained by such beautifully that I cant help but ask for more.Its hurting that Maan is deliberately hurting his love and in return getting hurt himself.

And Dev-Tara,and Mohan-Megha stories are also undergoing an outstangding phase.

I hope Poonam also develops soft corner for Chandan.

loved d part.

Originally posted by: alfik

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It was a bliss to see the union of Tara with her parents...then came the shocks for the thakurs...i am very happy that u have kept their daughter alive and now have to see who their daughter is...

Then the scene in Maan's bedroom very mushy it was...

Part 58

awesome part...there were intimate scenes in it and all were beautifully described...waiting eagerly for the next update...

Take good care of yourself...get well soon😃

Originally posted by: krati5

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😲itna sab kuch aacha aacha hone ke baad maan 😡arghhh... yeh aisa kyu ho gaya???? oh i know but ,dauffer hai maan... iss story se mujhe ek important lesson mila hai avi... always confront things if u think there is some loccha here... aab itna galat sochne ke baad aacha hai manish...a usko punishment me mila/mili... he desrve it.

kitni pyari setting thi.. geet was in cloud 9... aur maan aisi harkat kar rha hai to galiyaan to padengi hi... khud se bhi aur dusro se bhi...

geet sahi bola tumne sasha ko. but babes sasha kabhi nhi sudhregi

Originally posted by: krati5

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so is megha poonam & chandan's daughter... good goood... poor nakul kuch kare to fasse kuch na kare to fasse... maan ke chakar mein sab pagal ho jate hai😆

Writer aur readers bhi😆

geet ne kya pyari speech de hai... he has to talk me with love he wanna get married to me... so cute... aakhir haq bhi hai...

bholi si ladki ki sab speech out of the window when she sees him😳

waha maan bhi crazy hai geet ke liye. but aakhon ka hai dhoka aise tera pyar tera emotional attayachar... perfect song for this situation... plz koi VM banao is par😆

well aab geet ne yaha situation complicate bana di aur bhi jayada. geet puttar plz first explain ur relationship with any other male & then give them nicknames... its messing up with someone's already messed up brain...

Sab galti Geet ki nahi hai.. Avi bhi naughty hai toh Geet kya kare?😃

& how can i forgot dadi... bhagwan aise mast dadi sab ko de... i m a lil bit relieved that not to fear when dadi is here😉. kuch na kuch jugad to wo chala hi lengi

Originally posted by: krati5

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see i told u i m nt gng to ike poonam. & here she provs it... well now what can i do... jab hosh aana hai tab aayega but still in sab mein chandan aur bhi depressed ho jayega...

devtara r back... 😃. small part but they were present...

good that maan is doing all these wrong things coz aab to mere pass solid proof hai usko pitne ke liye...😈 oh do all that u can do maan singh khurana but what will u do when u'll come to know abt truth... which was infront of u all d time but u were busy in making assumptions...

megha & kabir scene was bliss... pure love...

i hope ki dining table par kuch battein khul jaye aur thodi bahot MU clear ho jaye. but opposite could happen too🤔

Originally posted by: crazyangel23

hey, sorry for late reply, my mid terms r going on. cuming to the update.

Best of luck😃

Part 57

it was nice to see tara so happy and reunited with her parents. loved the bond between tara and chandan. the revelation was such so unexpected-did not see that cuming. taras parents so shocked to know about their daughter. but good thing is that megha will get her family and know that she was not unwanted. hope this brings her parents closer. and feeling happy that brij and pammi r going to get what they deserve. just a matter of time before they r punished.

bechari geet making excuses for maans behavior and then getting angry. she must be so confused between the old maan and this maan. ye tou sahi dusht danav bana hua hai.

and dadimaa the great-so she knows that man loves geet and she will play matchmaker-love u dadimaa. (im confused about sumthing- in one of ur teasers dev read a printout which megha mistakenly printed and found out that maan loves geet-did that happen already and did I miss it? I so want to see dev and dadima plotting together against maaneet. will be so much fun )

and loved the last scene of maneet. it made me miss geet serial so much that I started to watch the episodes again instead of studying.

The printout part was planned for earlier but then I had to move it back since there was a demand for dusht danav..

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I hope poonam forgives chandan. he tries so much. will love to see them finally at peace and happy and together with their family.

I miss geets mumbling. and her non stop train when talking about teji. sach much matrimonial ad hi parh rhi thi.

maneets reactions when meeting each other- geet maan ko pagal kar deti hai and maan ki waja se geet ka dimagh kaam karna band kar deta hai-haaayyyeee mere pyare maneet.

oho dev, wrong time pe interrupt kia. bechari geet, maan apne dusht danav mode mein dono ke beech itna distance create kar rha hai. geet ka project bi le liya. im proud of geet being brave , she shud soo make maan pay for that.

dev taara-loved them as usual. don't be upset tara, dev will make all ur worries go far far away.

cute kabir and megha. kabir finally said it. and lots more happiness cuming their way.

eagerly waiting for the next update. it will be so much fun to read maan and geets journey. theyre both upset and angry with each other and we will get to see their scenes and making up

take care and get well soon

p.s. thanks for the pm

Thanks so much. I am hoping that the remaining of the story also makes all of you happy. A little MU but then more fun planned. Do well in your exams😃