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deepthich

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

u know... i feel so guilty for not being able to comment whnever u update!!!! 😒

but kya karu muje tumhari stories as a whole padna acha lagta hai... i get that essencce n it remain as my one of favourites!!

but this time when u update a new one.. i will try to be a regular reader 😃

sooo... coming to the story... ummm... first thing i didnt expect an os from u... i was thinking u will write a ss or ff... kyo ki tumhari stories na aur padne ka dil karta hai to os is really small... so is this... but its fantastic... again!!! 👏

first things first... u portrayed MAAN as playboy which though i dont like much... but i got angry on him in the first part whne GEET cries bcoz of him... n then dheere dheere GEET ke sath muje bi hot choclate se pyaar hogaya 😉 but seriousy i loved GEET more in this story...

but also loved MAAN's soft nature towards his family...

as it is a small story im unable to explain much... but all in all it was fabulous asusual 😳

their kiss in italy was too good 😉 but later even i too felt bad whne MAAN said we shouldnt do this again... it definitely hurt GEET!!!!
but MAAN ka family members to superb hai... loved his family though it was short describing abt them... 😛

n when GEET pushed MAAN in cabin n MAAN became unconscious i actually felt like laughing... but controlled seeing situation 😆

then finally the fashion show... oh i forgot to say loved chole also 😉

yeahh... the fashion show... 😆 loved MAAN's possesiveness... actually loved his possessiveness n his face whne he asked GEET who was chris!!!

aweee... that was beautiful how MAAN asked will u be mine... n GEET said yes... but again nakhra...

but loved their italian confession 😳 n MAAN taking ehr to his home which he built with his first salary... u know aise cheeje hi girls ko weak banati hai 😉

Ti voglio bene reshmi for this awesome story ❤️

will be waiting for ur next dhamaka 😊 n ofcourse epilogue for this 😃

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

haila... Maan kidnapped Geet & also confessed too good

waiting for next update😉😳

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

part 7
awesome dear...
nice...
so Maan has realized his feelings for Geet...
and Geet is the show stopper...
and Maan hes gonna do something now...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

part 8
last part
excellent...
that was so sweet and adorable...
cute one dear...
loved it so much...

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Superb!!!
Geet blasted on maan
Thn refused him :O
Lolzz the kidnapping part :P
Loved maan's confession :D
Ti amo!! Geet knows the meaning lolzz maan got embarrassed :P
Loved reading the story very much :)

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

will comment only i got epi up to then talak to this thread

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

first of all thanks a lot for recommending my thread to ur readers... 😳

grazie remspie😉

coming to the update... last one😭... but it was a sweet and cute journey... completely enjoyed it...

the ramp part was just dreamy... hayee human hot choclate ...

later the confession too was lovely... dreamy couples dreamy story...

will be "attesa"😉 for the epilogue dear