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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry Friends for disappearing😳...Some thing personal came up...
Updating today...Epilogue Part B😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for the second part of Epilogue
jaldi jaldi Jaldi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello friends...I am back with final part of the epilogue...hope this entertains you...and truly sorry for the delay...

and thank you for the love...likes and comments


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He was remembering how many of his plans failed. He heard the sound of someone entering the room...He slowly moved to the door and locked it. Geet turned around to see Maan locking the door...Maan aap na mujhe dara diya and started to do her work...Maan grabed her and pushed her to the wardrobe and started questioning with anger filled voice her...Kyun nahi aayi tum...Maine tumhe message kiya than a...toh phir kyun nahi aayi...main pagalonki tarah tumhare liye wait karta raha.

Geet -Maan aap kya bol rahe hain mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai, kaund=sa message ki baat karr rahe hain aap..maine koi message nahi dekha...

Maan - Jhoot mat bolo tum...tumhara reply bhi aaya tha mujhe...yeh dekho and he showed her the reply message...

Geet - Lekin yeh maine nahi kiya...mera phone toh anu ke paas hain...usne liya tha kyun ki uska mobile ki battery low hai aur use rohan se baat karni hain...

Maan - Jhoot mat bolo tum...main jaanta hoon yeh tumhari aur anu ki shararat hain...

Geet - Nahi maan maon jhoot nahi bol rahi hoon...main sach mein nahi jaanti ki aapka message aaya hain...Maan did'nt respond...

Geet felt bad...Aapko aisa kyun lagta hain Maan ki aapke saath (Paas) nahi aana chahti...Mujhe bhi aapke saath rehna hain maan...har pal, har lamha aapko hi dekhti rahoon...agar nahi ho paraha hain toh yeh meri galti hai kya...

Maan heard her and felt bad at raising his voice on her...seeing the change of expression...Geet continued...Yeh sab aapka kiya dhara hai...Agar aap Anu se vaada nahi karte toh yeh sab nahi hota...

Maan - Main kab wada kiya anu se...

Geet - Bhul gaye...Shaadi ki raat...usne paise ki jagah aapse wada liya tha ki woh jo bhi maangegi aap use denge...

Maan remembers his conversation with anu...he didn't pay attention to anus words then as he was eager to go into the room where Geet is waiting.

Geet - Yaad aaya kuch...He started remembering...how Anu asked for his word rather than some money or jewelry...

There was a lod knock at the Door and Geet pushed him and ran to the door to open it. Maan was irritated...Do pal bhi mujhe meri biwi ke paas rehna deta hain koi...kuch karna hoga...He turned to see who is at the door...

It was Garv who came there. Anu gave Garv and left saying he wanted to sleep with his Mom...

Garv is nearly 21/2 years old.

Garv - Mama aap kyun chaliaayi. Main darr gaya tha...said in his babyish tone...

Geet - Main kah oi nahi gayi Garv. Papa ko kuch chahiye that toh yaha aayi...Waha Anu bua hain na tumhare saath phir kyun darr laga..

Garmv - Bua toh phone baat karr rahi thi. Unhone mujhe dekha bhi nahi...main yaha aagaya...Main apke saath hi rahunga...Mama mujhe neend aarahi hain...to Maan...bade Papa aap Bua ko jaldi Bhej do...rohan uncle ke paas...

Maan - Haa mera bacha bua jaldi bhejdenge...woh har waqt kabab mein haddi banti rehti hain...he murmured ...

Garv soon slept...Even Geet was very tired and she also slept...Another sleepless nightpr rather say Geet less night for Maan singh khurana...He thought...Anu wait and watch main kya karta hoon.

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After One week...Finally Marriage was Done and Anu left for her Inlaws House. All the relatives also left to their respective places...

Maan and Geet are packing for their honeymoon...in shimla...They have to catch early morning flight...

Geet - Ghar kitna soona soona hogaya haina maan...

Maan - But my world is at peace...nahi toh kya...koi na koi aajata hain...mujhe meri biwi ko theek se dekhne bhi nahi diya...

Geet pulled his cheeks and said bechare patidev...

Maan's Mobile rang...he ignored it...

Geet - Maan aapka mobile baj raha hain...

Maan - Leave it Geet...pehle packing kare...

Maan's mobile again started ringing...Here Rohan is cursing Maan for not lifting his call.Maan did'nt bother to take the call. He switched his mobile to silent mode and kept his phone aside.

Maan kept the languages aside after packing . Geet made the bed and Maan fell on the bed taking her...Aaj koi disturbance nahi hogi...aaj tumhe main nahi choduga...Geet became red in shyness...

Geet - Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hain...

Maan - Bolo geet...kya kehna hain...

Geet - Aap bura toh nahi maanenge na...

Maan - Tum bolo pehle...

Geet - Can't we wait for another day...she closed her eyes immediately after saying...

Maan - What ek aur din...kyun geet...tumhe koi pareshani hain kya...doctor ko bulaon...

Geet - No Maan kuch nahi hua hain...

Maan - Toh aur kya reason hain...

Geet switched of the light and hugged him humming...yeh hasi waadiyan, yeh khula aasmaan...

Maan smiled understanding and wisheperd in geets ears...to meri biwi chahti hain ki main use khule aasmaan ke neeche pyaar karoon...Geet was red. she thanked herself for switching off the light...otherwise Maan would tease her more seeing her red face...

Geet's Mobile Rang...and she at once startled...Iss waqt kaun phone kar sakta hain...kahi garv toh tank nahi karr raha hain maa ko...she thought and checked her phone...It was from Rohan...She attended the call...

Rohan - Hello Geet, Main rohan Maan kahan hain aur mera phone kyun nahi utha raha hain...

Geet - Rohan, Maan ka mobile shayad silent pe hain...Main doon kya unhe phone...

Rohan - Haa...Abhi jaldi...

Maan who was listening their talk took the phone from her and said Hello...

Rohan - Maan I am going to kill u for sure...yeh tumne ne kya kiya...kis baat ka badla le raha hain...mujhe se aur anu se...

Maan - making an innocent face - Maine kya kiya Rohan...

Rohan - bano mat maan. Paditji ne mujhe sab kuch bataya...

Maan - Kya kaha paditji ne...

Rohan shouted Maaannn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maan at once removed the mobile from his ears...

Maan - yeh tumhe aur tumhari biwi ke liye meri taraf se marriage gift hain...enjoy ur bachelorhood for few more days...and Tell ur wife never to mess with MSK...he said and disconnected the call and switched off both their mobiles...and started laughing...

Geet - Aap kyun hass rahe hain...aur Rohan itne gusse mein kyun hain...

Maan - kuch nahi geet maine pandit ji se kehelwaya ki 10 din tak unki suhagraat ki koi muhurat nahi hain...yeh das din wali baat unhe pata nahi hain...aur aunty se kaha ki inn dono par nazar rahe...

Geet was shocked- aap anu ke saath aise kaise karr sakte hain...woh aap ki behen hain...

Maan - Aur main uska bada bhai hoon...I know how to give it back...and he pulled her tum bhi so jao...kal jaldi jaana hain...main aur intezar nahi karsakta...

Geet - Maan apko aise ideas aate kaha se hain...

Maan - Mere paas aur bhi ache ideas hain jo main shimla jaaneke baad bataunga tumhe...

Thank you guys...here ends the epilogue...hope u all enjoyed reading and give me ur opinion for the last time...



Dedicating my first writeup to my IF friends...Rashmi, Priya and Valli...love u girls...

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Posted: 11 years ago
It's time to edit the comment and I m obliging you by doing so

Ye kya Maan badal gaya?
Sweet sweet Maan se angry MSK ban gaya

He is scolding Geet for not spending the time with him Not fair Maan

Haila

Garv and Maan both are tired of Anu Jaldi se Anu ko bhagaao yahaan se

Aww Poor Maan still spending sleepless nights without his wife

Koi baat nahin Maan jaldi sab theek ho jaayega

Pheww Finally Anu ki shadi ho gayi and Maaneet are going for HM

Wow Geet wants him to love under the sky but I m confused what did that mean??

Hawww Maan took his revenge from Rohan and Anu

well done MSK.

Loved the epilogue Indu but Maaneet romance is missing

Now I want one more epilogue full of Maaneet love

That was an awesome story Indu

I loved it

some gifts for you





Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome epilogue...
poor rohan n anu 😆 😆
maan ne unki sr 10 days k liye postpond kara di 😆 😆
di it is indu di from fb????
m dona m nt able to identify u r u there in suhana's group chat ????
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Posted: 11 years ago
rofl fab ending yaar.. lol we would love anotger ss from u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww maanu is soo naughty..lol bechare rohan n anu
awesme end
vl miss it alots...
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Posted: 11 years ago
osm osm osm...
msk se panga ,,,anu nd rohan ,,,,,ko rula dia,,,,🤣
bst epi. til dt,,,,👏
waiting 4rm u another osm stry...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
dat was one of cute epilogue. ..
ll miss ur writing. .
please do write again...
wll wait for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maanu pareshan that he is not able to spend time with geet😡
grav is also fed up with anu😛😆
isliye maan and grav usko jaldi se bagana chahthe hai
wah MSK se panga liya ab dekho poor anu🤣
ye kya d thoda grav aur maaneets scenes dal diya hotha
aur maanu ko itna sathaya apne aur geet ke saath waqt bitaye bina katham kardi
not fair mai andolan shuru karungi apne maanu ke saath na insaafi nahi hone dungi😛😉
ek aur part do na please grav aur maaneet and only maaneet moments please
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago

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