MG SS Crazy for you!!! IMP Note pg 32 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow a bit of a shocking teaser can't wait for the update !
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Will be waiting for update dear
Update soon
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awesome
he is really crazy
is he obsessive or there is other reason behind his action
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Interesting story.. Loved it. Awesome teaser..Waiting for next..Pls add me to your PM list...
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Loving this one too amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A big hug 🤗 and thank you for all those who liked and commented on the previous updates!!! 😊

p.s. sorry for late update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Geet was totally devstated, she had never expected that her parents would do like that she was sitting and crying in the room. Maan saw that and smirked "maine kaha tha geet, mat jao koi faida nahi par tum mere baath sunti kaha ho, chalo accha hi hua ki ek hi baar main sab kuch clear ho gaya waise bhi ab rone ka koi faida nahi hain.." Geet looked at him and stood up wiping her tears and with confidence replied "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana yeh mat samajhna ki mere parents ne yeh marriage accept kar liya toh main bhi karoongi, haan jaise maine kaha ki agar meri parents yeh marriage accept karenge toh main aapke yaha aaungi toh aagayi par ek baath zaroon yaad rakhna ki aap zabardasti mujhse shaadi toh kar li par mera pyar khabi nahi milega aapko.. jab tak iss sharir main ek pal bhi life hoga tab tak main aapse pyar nahi karoongi.." Maan laughed looking at her confidence "woah cool down Mrs. Khurana itni hyper kyun ho rahi ho teekh hain dekhte hain par mera bhi ek vaada hain woh din door nahi hain jab tum mujhse kahogee ki 'I Love You Maan' "


Just then then door bell rings and Nakul their trusted servant goes to open the door. He smiles happily seeing the people standing at the door.. At the door stood two elegant ladies and a cute small boy. The two ladies were Maan's grandmother Savitri Devi Khurana who now was the head of the family, she loves her small family a lot especially maan. The other lady is Maan's mother Priya Khurana a very loving mother respects her mother-in-law Savitri a lot looks after the family. Finally the small boy of age around 5 is Aryan son of Priya Khurana who always tries to find love from his elder brother maan but fails miserably.


Aryan runs to the sofa and Nakul while taking their bags inside "Daadima iss bar itni der kardi humesha holidays sirf 10 din ke liye jaathe the par iss bar pure 25 din gaye the.." Daadima smiles at him "kyun Nakul sach batayiye hum miss kar rahe the yaha soch rahe ho ki kuch din aur late ana chahiye tha, hmm.." "arrey nahi nahi daadima maine aise nahi kaha.." "Arrey hum toh mazak kar rahe the sab kuch teekh hain na ghar main.." Nakul just looks down and does not say anything as Maan had strictly told him not to tell about geet... "Kya hua app jawab kyun nahi de rahe hain aur Maan kaha hain..." Maan comes down the stairs, seeing him Aryan comes near daadima "Main yaha hoon daadima..." he comes and hugs her "Aap kaise ho daadima aapka trip kaisa tha???" Before she replied little aryan spoke with excitement "bohat accha tha bhaiya humne bohat masti ki.. aur naa.." Maan saw him with an angry glare and full of hatredness.. He was about to shout at him when priya pulled him back "Aryan aap jao aur fresh ho jao aapko bhook lagi hain na.." Aryan just goes near priya and hugs her frightened.. "Maan yeh kya aate hi dara diya bechare ko, khair aapka kaam kaisa chal raha hain aur.." she stops and looks behind maan with confusion "Maan yeh kaun hain aur humare ghar main kya kar rahi hain".. Maan looks behind and introduces Geet to her "Daadima yeh aapki bahu hain aap kehate the na ki shaadi karo.. shaadi karo... toh maine karli"..


Everyone in the hall were stunned and were in shock.. Savitri Devi immediately retorts "yeh kya tamasha hain maan, hum yeh shaadi nai maante maan".. Geet gets happy listening to this but next moment she hears daadi she is shocked.. "Kya maan yeh koi tarika hain agar aapko shaadi karna hi tha toh kehte na hum karte aapki shaadi badi dhoom dhaam se.." Maan smiled "isiliye nahi kaha.." Maan goes near geet and putting his hand on her waist brings near Daadima "Daadima yeh hain geet aur geet yeh meri daadima hain pair chuho.." Geet and Maan takes blessings from her.. Daadima blesses them and touches geet's cheek "kush raho dono.." and gestures geet towards priya "Geet yeh priya hain Maan ki ma.." Geet tries to go near her but maan stops her, everyone notices that but geet angrily takes his hands off and takes blessings from Priya.. She happily blesses her "kush raho beta aur geet yeh aryan hain humare beta.." Geet was shocked as to how maan's brother was so small and young.. Aryan comes from behind priya seeing geet smiling at him.. Aryan tugs maan's pants and asks innocently.. "bhaiya kya yeh meri nayi bhabi hain??" Maan ignores him " Daadima mujhe office main kuch kaam hain main chalta hoon aur geet tum sirf daadima se baath karogi sirf daadima".. Now geet smirks "Meri marzi main kisi se bhi bhaat karo aap nahi rokenge"...She goes near aryan " aryan mera naam geet hain kya aap mere dost banoge" and tries to talk to him.. Small aryan was soo happy that someone other than his mom and daadi was talking to him so sweetly he tries to go forward but priya looks at maan and sees him looking at geet angrily immediately priya pulls him back nods at him indicating not to reply.. Frustrated maan just walks away.. With tears he looks at priya "mamma bhaiya mujhe baat kyun nahi karte??".. Priya looks at maan walking away and sadly tells "apni ma se usne paanch saal se baat nahi ki hain, toh aapse kya baat karenge chalo chalte hain hum aapko kuch khane ke liye dete hain..." and takes him away..


Daadima was all the while quite she knew maan was hiding something from about geet from her.. She had noticed how geet was behaving from the time they have entered. Geet was not at all afraid of her angry, egoistic grandson. She had even noticed how geet had gone against maan and had taken blessings from priya, smiled at aryan. She knew that she could team up with geet and bring that old jovial, loving maan back as how he was five years before..


Daadima thinking of all that wanted to talk to geet she went near her and held her hands "Geet aap humare saath chaliye hume aapse kuch baath karni hain.." Geet went with her wanting to get answers to some of her questions.

Edited by sandymg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
hi guys..

I know its a small update but was busy and it was a long long time i had updated so wrote this..
Please do let me know how was it..
To get pm for my works please add "sandypm" as pm is only from this id..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
nice update
maan challenged geet dat she gong 2 say i love u 2 him👍🏼
maan doesnt like his younger bro nd doesnt talk wit his mom😲
daadi is impressd by geet nd nw she wants 2 talk wit geet?😕
waitng 4 d nxt part dear update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
glad to see pm😆
small ud after so long gap
but at least u remember that we waiting
awesome ud now geet parent track finish
now maan's family track started
but maan will win after some days or months
geet will fall in love
so waiting

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