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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

mera net connect nhi ho rha :(



kya huwa teri net aajkal bohut satha rahi hai😡
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Posted: 11 years ago



Hi.. Mona,Priya,Lakshu,lily and Sona ..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
actually meri halat babbie waali hai.. uska hua tha na ek baar ki fast speed ki limit khatam ho gayi ab slow rahega kuch din tak :P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

actually meri halat babbie waali hai.. uska hua tha na ek baar ki fast speed ki limit khatam ho gayi ab slow rahega kuch din tak :P



oh no lekin kitni din tak yeh rahegi
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Posted: 11 years ago
hahhahaha geet was jealous
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
dekhti hu kuch din wait karke .. kabhi kabhi fast bhi wrk karti hai .. jab bahut jyada prob hogi toh recharge karwa lungi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

dekhti hu kuch din wait karke .. kabhi kabhi fast bhi wrk karti hai .. jab bahut jyada prob hogi toh recharge karwa lungi



data card ya wifi
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Posted: 11 years ago


data card hai
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Posted: 11 years ago


I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 43


Running off from Maan, Geet went directly into washroom and locked the door as no place could be safer where could hide the turbulence from her lover. She sprinkled water on her face and tried to calm down rocking heart. This new emotion was getting tougher for handling. Geet had been living in Maan dreams since childhood but never had felt the effect of carnal need. And when today experienced, it was now becoming worst managing by her naivety. Maan being so open in front of whole world made her feel insecure somewhere though she knew he loves her more than anything but still felt insecure though she couldn't name any of this insecurities but couldn't handle this thought. She knew it was madness still couldn't help.

"What he must be thinking about me that I'm fool', she started crying. It was not Maan who was forcing her to feel apprehensive but her own disturbed mind was puzzling her thoughts. She somewhere feared with his being so sophisticated, living a life style which not even she could dream off. She trusted him that was undeniable but what if she couldn't be able to govern this post in his heart for future altogether! She feared with her own silliness which she had shown just a little earlier. Her thoughts didn't remain rational now; it started taking twists and turns and at the end she fell down on floor putting shower on so no-one could have heard her weep outside.

Maan waited for her to come out and he could tease her. How much he loved her innocence couldn't have explained. This was the thing he had been carving for throughout the lifetime. Her naivety, her silly anger, her innocent confession about she was jealous and most important thing, her faith on him, everything made him mad for her more and more. It was becoming uncontrollable. In fast life style of metropolitan he always missed this kind of simplicity, but now Geet was filling the gap.

He raised hand to knock on washroom door why she took so long but then moved back. That wouldn't be good manner and also should give her some privacy in her own house. He smiled. How much he carved to spend every single second with her but for that he had to wait long,

"Come on Maan you had waited long years for her one glimpse and now when she is near, you can't even tolerate a small distance', he lectured to heart for being so desperate but as if it was going to listen. Failing with his own stubbornness he decided to get some change of atmosphere. He knocked the washroom door and told Geet that he going out for some time by locking door from outside and will be back in half an hour time. Geet was okay with this, anyways she needed some alone time.

Maan stepped out but then how could he leave his child-wife alone, instead of going out he rushed up toward terrace to feel fresh air, thought to spend some fresh time there and so Geet also would get some personal time for herself. Geet came out taking cold shower. She thought Maan was out and so was bit relaxed. She went up to her room to get ready. She looked at his given gifts; they appeared more wonderful after great morning encounter. With calm mind she took an extensive look to everything and finally opened the wardrobe. She selected a white suit given by Maan and wore the same red Dupatta over it; selected few simple white bangles and decorated her slick wrists. She wore a thick layer of kohl in eyes and light pink gloss on lips and a tiny red Bindi on forehead; she was all ready for Maan.

Standing alone on small window she started looking out on lane, if could get a glimpse of Maan, same like earlier night. Geet smiled shyly, taking relaxed steps she came down to prepare breakfast for him. Suddenly this home was feeling so vacuumed without Maan. She didn't know within few hours her life would be so addicted to him that a single minute was tough to spend alone.

"It's still time for his coming back', she whispered looking at the time. She didn't know what should make for him and so left idea for cook food and thought to dry her washed clothes on terrace. Keeping all clothes in a small bucket Geet stepped to up. Her walk was noiseless as she was lost in Maan thought. How life had been changed into so exciting and good. She reached there and pushed the unfastened door to make it opened and as she stepped in, she shocked, to find Maan there, alone, lying on swing with closed eyes. "Was she hallucinating him?' she pinched her arms, "ouch!!', no she was seeing him in actual!

Instantly she moved back and hid behind wall before Maan could see. Geet was breathing hard suddenly. Whether it was happiness to see him or a fear of his tease, whatever it was but it feels so beautiful. She peeped and stared him for long time though he was very far from her but still he was near. She forgot all insecurity after finding him, wished to cherish this time openly. She remembered Maan words that he missed that lively child in this adult Geet. "I will complete his wish', she self talked and smiled.

With soundless steps she walked toward Maan and stopped behind swing. She smirked looking at him sleeping and got an idea to annoy him. Geet took some water in palm and sprinkled on Maan face and hid under swing.

"Raining?', Maan suddenly sat up wiping drops from nose. He looked up to sky, when found it was just few drops he again laid down keeping arm on eyes. Geet giggles. She repeated her action twice. Now Maan was sure something was fishy. "I'm sure someone is here', he muttered and suddenly heard Geet giggle. He turned around and his eyes widen!

"Geeett.. Geettt don't.. Don't dare to think... Geett!!'',, he couldn't even shout when a water pipe started gushing water on him. He covered his face to escape and then he heard Geet free laugh like a child. "Geet I'll not leave you!!!.. Geet stop!!!', Maan was trying to walk in this torrent but force was very high and so her laugh was.

Suddenly Geet found him walking toward her cutting the flow with his arms, he had just reached there, was about a few steps away. Her eyes became bigger; she threw pipe on floor and runs off from there screaming. Instantly Maan picked up a water filled bucket and chased her but Geet escaped, she rushed out toward stairway when suddenly Maan stopped her way stretching his arms both sides. She gasped in fear still struggling to catch her breath and still laughing within gasps. She moved back in a small corridor space attached to stairway when found him stepping forward. He lifted the bucket and tilted toward her with dangerous grin.

Geet shook head, "No.. please.. Maan I have just taken shower.. She pouted in fear staring water bucket in his hand and his grin that was clarifying his not-so-good intention. She slipped back and hit the wall behind. "Maan please.. nooo!!! Maan hovered bucket toward her; Geet covered face with arms screaming.




Precap: And Geet feels the first touch of his lips over her lips... 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago


kaunsa wala use karrahi ho

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