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Posted: 11 years ago
megha n kabir part is cute. dev and naintara part is naughty and our ever jhalli geet ! but maan part is scary. kyon meri poor si pyari si jhalli geet ka dil tod raha hai apne ek assumption pe? why cant he talk to her directly.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ambili123

waiting for maneet part

😲 poore update ke liye sirf yeh hi bolna tha?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

CHAND-POONAM

a bit confused here... how they reached in a desert? what happened to poonams hand??
Brij had come for them and taken them away remember? Brij part after Maaneet will open the story up some more.
am definitely sad for chandan ... he just loved this lady unlimited and unconditionally ... yes indirectly he gave many sorrow to poonam and tara with his belief in brij and his wife ... but he do deserve some happiness... atleast a life with his love at his old age !!! but i do feel happy for poonam that she is trying to build confidence in her for her and taras future! the desire to live in her after facing so many problems is really appreciable...
The first step is for her to come out of her depression. Now she wants to live. The next thing will be to really see him for what he is. Their story has the most sorrows but there is more to come for them.😃
KABIR-MEGHA

so happy for this couple... they have seen so much in their short life... and now happiness is on their threshold! i loved the way u described how kabirs mom just understood the victorious news he brought home just by glancing him! maa hothi hi aisi!!😃
Exactly.. Ma aissi hi hoti hai...
DEV-TARA-GEET

the lovers is going to have a tough time to keep their blossoming relation hidden as per their agenda from our agent khurana and bambi!!! loved their sms talk... so true love is an addiction...
😳Yes. I had to find a way to keep Dev naughty since you guys are so in love with his naughtiness..😆
MAAN -NAKUL

bechaara maan trying his level best to control himself and not to reveal his broken hearts state to anyone (avi... maan ko tho fevicol wholesale main lena padega... abi joda tha ab phir chaahiye hoga na😆)
Abhi toh MU is only a few hours now. You think Geet will let him get away with it? Then you seriously are underestimating how much he loves her... DD pighlega like a moti mombatti...😆
PRECAP

maaneet se bhara update... wont ask for any thing more now🤗
bambi, uska BF, nakul sab kam the kya jo u r bringing on manisha too!!😆 man am going to order popcorn for the next update to read u😉
Hope acche se likh saku.. am nervous about it. Still stuck in bhola Maan mode..

Thanks Lakshmi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geetan15

I'm becoming fan of your writing...it's just awesome..

but this maan...always over thinking and overreacting... but i like it😊

Thanks so much. I am glad you decided to break your silence. Please continue the support.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Ch 54 - Soory yaara once again for late comments and like...Hopefully now things will be better and I will be on time

Maan - in his complete dusht daanav mode...khud ko toh sazaa dega hi par usko bhi nahi chodega jo bechari kab se uska intezaar kar rahi hai...I wonder how will he feel when he will know hoe he has broken her heart and brought tears to her eyes uselessly...ek toh bechari kab se intezaar akr rahi thi patiently aur ab yeh tewar ufff...
as usual Maan doesnt listen to anyone and forms his own opinion...is baari bahut bhaari padne wala hai yeh attitude...
loved Geet and her self talks...why is he so angry...that was so cute...she doesnt know but still trying to pacify him...
Teji...BF...lol... lo ek aur mirchi...dhuaan dhuaan...

Abhi MU is only a few hours old. She is also not fully aware of his thoughts, probably thinking that he is upset about the farewell party part.
Giving what he has assumed that Dev and Geet have Daadima's blessings, he has no one to ask about it either.
Let's see if he can resist her😉 Itne saal tak toh nahi kar paaya... chances are few..😃
Thanks Ritzy.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Long update. Poonam-Chandan's story took the cake.

Thank you I think.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome part...bas ek shikayat...kaash ki Poonam bhi Chandan ko thoda sa samjh paati...he doesnt wnat her to walk away...i feel so much for him and Poonam both...

but things at least moving in right direction...God has finally heard her and also Dev knows about who is Tara...I am sure he will be not only a husband but a good son as well toh Thakurs and set what had been wrong since long...
Megha and her story is equally touching...i loved how she doesn't forget her roots and still asked for Maan's permission...
Geet is innocence personofied...Sr toh chodo us se pehle hi she will be death of Maan with her BF and such talks...
Text messages between Dev and Tara were so cute...
waiting now eagerly for DD and Bambi...pata nahi kaun kis se bachaye...our Bambi in her complete innocence is no less of a torture...

Poonam had to get out of her depression first. Now that she is getting better, she will probably see things more clearly. Baaki toh Dev and NT are there and more revelations. Their part is not done yet.
Maan ko pura pagal banane ka plan hai..😆
Hopefully I will be able to write it. Am very nervous about this part.
Thanks Ritzy🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
1 hi update me charo luv stories
ye jhali geet ko kab akal aayegi :D
"Di? Kya Devji ko bhi macchar ne kata hai?🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

yeh kam to brij nd pammi ka hei,poonm aur chndan ko desrt mein fankna ka,,,,bt yeh kia kaise hei..at last pnam gaind cnfidnce nd decided 2 move on wid tara,,,hope tara bring p nd c 2 close...poonams talks wid god s very emotional...chndans lov 4 poonm s byond dscription,,, he did mistake in strt.i wish pnishmnt 2 de clprits shud b given by chndan,,,,megha,kabir nd hs mther prt s just osm...lovd each wrd,,,,fir aayee apni geet chali hei rserch karne ac mein mashr aaye knha se,,,??...😆maan ka gussa utare jaldi se babaji jhalli ko gyan bhi dena hei vrna yeh shadi ke baad kya kaand kregiii,,,,,🤣nakuls replacmnt,,,,manesha,,,,😆😆,,waiting 4 dat...nakul -maan combo ws suprb ab dekho maan-mneesha kya gul khilate hein,,,,,next prt,,,,,full of mneet ,,,,egrly waiting,,,,,😛kab dogiii,,,,,aviii,,,,,,,,,???????

Abhi Poonam and Chandan ki story baki hai.. more to come... some shocking.. some nice
Geet... ab kya karu iss jhalli ka?
Maan and Nakul was hit toh socha Maan and Manish-a ka bhi try kar leti hu..
After Diwali... if possible I meet squeeze in a teaser..
Thanks Lily for supporting so much😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever

Interesting update but somehow I love your Dev-Tara more than other couples. N they were so less!!! I know their story is on track hence the lesser presence. But still .. Want to see how they now behave with each other while having a sizzling "office romance" 😆
Loved Geet's innocense and found Maan's otherwise sharp brain a bit fuddled in guessing who his love reeally loves!! N he broke Nakul's heart in the process. Hoping for a rocking update soon!! :)

😆I can't win.. everyone wants Maaneet now, so am going to give more of them.. Dev will be back to his naughty self soon..
Thanks for the support.

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