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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Annleo92

Avi I can't read chapter 53...where I can see the link...???? 😭 😭 😭



When i see one comment each from you for thread 1-11, i will pm it to you.

Reading comments from readers is the only compensation I get for sacrificing my time and sleep.

Please do comment, all readers have done so. I can't make exceptions for anyone

Welcome to my story. I hope I live up to the expectations.


Avi
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 53-while reading the first part i was like- i have heard this some where( baad mei batti jali 😆)
loved dev and aisha conversation.
unknowingly dev thought geet would be perfect for his brother,if only he knew that his brother granted his wish
i don't want to reveal much about devtara because it is password
protected.i just want to say loved each and every bit of it.the death of suraj and his dad also played an important role in the way tara is able to open up now.
excellent song choice for the update.1 of my fav song.

part 54-maan's pain was heart wrenching.felt very sad when he ripped all the pages in his diary.

to cover up his hurt,maan is trying to
be indifferent and rude.felt sorry for geet when she controlled her hurt infront of nakul.
my fav lines in this update-
"Dekha Babaji, dekh rahe hai na aap! Kitna gussa, kitni akkad hai!
Kyun na ho, foreign return jo hai! Videshi sho-sha dekh lo inke!
Hmmmph. Main bhi toh Mukheriya aur Amritsar ja chuki hu.
Par maine kabhi aisse kiya? Sach Babaji, kiya maine kuch?
College mein toh bol bhi nahi sakte thay ab dekh lo."
(only our bambi can think that london and amritsar are same)

"Haiye! Savitri you were born to be a matchmaker.
Kitni khush hai ladki! Dono saath saath rahenge office mein,
pyaar, mohabbat will bloom and who knows by next year tu bhi
Great grandmother ban jaayegi. Advance mein mubarak.
(lol dadi and her nautanki)

part 55-omg brij and pummi are monsters,they left chandan and poonam in a desert 😲
poonam rialising her flaws as a mother was heart touching,but i did not like the fact that she imposed her decision on chandan again about leaving him.i felt very sad for chandan,he just want acceptence and love from poonam which he never got.i have a feeling that megha is poonam and chandan daughter(may be i am wrong 😆)


kabir and megha part-finally kabir got the break he deserve.he went through a lot at an young age.i am very happy for both.they both deserve happiness.loved the simple roka part with the family.

geet and tara part-lol geet indirectly named dev as a mosquito.it's good that naintara is planning to talk to geet varna our maan is going to have a hard time on his SR.

nakul and maan-i always love the bond they share,but i think in his own grief maan is being unfair to nakul.excellent song choice for the update.
thx for the updates,loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww maaneet in office.. perfect matchmaker savitri ji 👏
pammi n brij are the devils.. left poonam n chandan in an isolated desert.. not at all fair!!
uffoo these miss understandings b/w maaneet.. hope they clear it up soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 53 blush blush blush😳...
And finally Naintara confessed! Loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hv comented on all thrds... Plz gv me paswrd nd link of dis updt. Will b waitng
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Posted: 11 years ago
The link isnt wrkng. Plz pm me agn.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am really very sorry 4 annoying u agn nd agn but d link u send me 2wice through pms is nt wrkng... Actually there ir nt any link it is simply written... I dnt knw what s it called... But i thnk k link s smthng u click on it nd u'l b on dat pg haina?... But ye to waisa ni h... Plz do smthng... Me eagerly waitng 2 read ds story further.

I cnt snd pms cz my email id s nt regstrd so i am saying u here sorry agn 4 all my messes.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AAINAPATEL

I am really very sorry 4 annoying u agn nd agn but d link u send me 2wice through pms is nt wrkng... Actually there ir nt any link it is simply written... I dnt knw what s it called... But i thnk k link s smthng u click on it nd u'l b on dat pg haina?... But ye to waisa ni h... Plz do smthng... Me eagerly waitng 2 read ds story further.

I cnt snd pms cz my email id s nt regstrd so i am saying u here sorry agn 4 all my messes.


Aaina, cut and paste the link

when you go to that page you will have to enter the password.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx avi. Thnx 4 d link. I got ur link dis time. But m usng my sadu dabba mobile phone wid dis opera mini app so dnt hv any optn of cut nd paste. But it finally opend dis time nd it was so nice updt... Never imgnd dev-tara as a nice nd lvly cpl b4 dis story... Thnx 4 sharing it. Plz add me in ur buddy nd pm lists. It would be very thankful.
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THANKS A LOT 4 ADDING ME IN UR BUDDY LIST.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bechara nakul! M really feelng sad 4 hin.
And dis megha nd kabir are awesm... Dev-tara too much haaa! Lolz!
Nd i thnk punam shd gv a chnc to chandan... He deservs it nd brij nd pammi shd rot in hell 4 thier 3rd class act...
AND FINALLY
Our angry young man MSK s here... Hope he get clear up wid m.u. soon

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