MG-SS - THE PUNISHMENT- THREAD 7- UPDATED - EPILOGUE/ FINAL PART-Pg104 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



lag rahi hu na ek dum mast ... patakha type😉😆


😆😉 Koi Vishesh Kaaran Patakha banane ka..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi laks,,,,kudi pataka,,,,😉😆



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(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 78


She turned at the source of voice and find Maan right behind her ,, He was looking at her with love and longings ,, she was in front of him after two whole days ,, this panic situation made him more restless and he was dying to meet her. Geet also faced a very heinous and brutal case of her life which weaken her and being a girl hurt her d most ,, both were longing for a support to share their feelings ,, Geet had none and now seeing Maan right there in front of her she wanted to pour out all her heart ,, She didn't realise when she moved forward close to him in trance and hugged him ,, Maan engulfed her instantly ,, they were finding solace in each other soft and warm hug ,, Geet eyes became teary and her inner turmoil started coming out threw hot tears.


Maan didn't say anything ,, he glued her more to him giving her assurance that he was here for her to share all her pain ,, They were like this for long ,, he didn't want to stop her today ,, after few min when she felt light from her bottled suffocation she parted a lil with hanging head ,, Maan cupped her face in his palms and wiped her tears which were still flowing.


Maan: sshhh bas Geet ,, sab theek ho jayega ,, don't hurt yourself like this ,, look at me Geet ,,( geet looked at him with moist eyes ) Geet u r not alone , i'm here to share every pain of ur heart ,, hhmmm.


She looked deep in his brown eyes there was assurance and confidence ,, love and care ,, she nodded in yes and he hugged her again ,, both were remain like this listening each other heartbeats which were assuring them that they worried and cared for each other. When they felt lil satisfection they parted.


Geet: Maan tum iss waqt yahan kaise? Geet looked at him with a lil smile.


Maan: to kahan hona chahiye tha? U didn't leave any other option for me.


Geet: I'm sorry , i didn't reply u , i'm sorry , but i was helpless Maan. We didn't get a single min to think about us ,, U didn't see that girl ... she became teary again and Maan stopped her putting his finger on her lips.


Maan: sshh abhi nahi Geet ,, come let's have some food and then i'll listen everything ,,, come .


Geet caught his hand in her and pleaded ,, nahi kuch iccha nahi hei ,, please.


Maan: thoda sa please mere liye ,, maine bhi nahi khaya hei ,, aur bhukha rahana prob ka solution nahi hei.


He brought her near sofa and made her sit near her ,, Baitho aur thoda sa kha lo. He took a morsel and brought that near her mouth gesturing to open her mouth to eat ,, she took that and eat . Maan forward another but this time Geet caught his hand and molded that to his mouth to eat ,, he smiled and took that.


They had their meal together quietly looking at each other with a soft smile . Maan went to kitchen to keep plate and come back with two coffee mugs in a tray.


Geet: tum ku laye , servant kahan hei?


Maan: usse maine bhej diya ,, aur Ma'am mei itni buri coffee bhi nahi banata u knew it. Servant ne jo banai thi wo to waste ho gai..


Geet took d tray from his hand and kept that on table ,, she held his hand and made him sit near her looking deep in his eyes she spoke.


Geet: Maan ,, tum mere liye itna ku sochtey ho ? Ku meri itni care kerty ho?


Maan looked back in those almond eyes deep like searching any hope for his survival ,, to fir kya karu ? Iss ke alawa aur kuch soch hi nahi pata Geet .


Geet shuddered with his reply ,, his warm and deep looks were filling her heart with a feel of contentment having someone very caring near her.


Geet: Tum apni family aur ghar chodker itni raat mei mere liya yahan aaye ,, ku ? Na khana khaya , na rest kiya ,, morning mei aa jaatey,, tumhari family bhi to wait ker rahi hogi tumhare liye ?


Maan: aur tum ? Tum bhi to itni late aai ho ? Tumhe mera wait karna accha nahi laga?


Geet: mujhe to aadat ho gai hei ,, aur meri to koi wait nahi karta ,, jaldi aao ya late ek jaisa hei ,, tum akele , bhukhe baithey rahe ab tak meri intzaar mei ye accha nahi laga ,, at least khana to kha lete ,, mai nahi aati to?( she looked at him with fake anger)


Maan: tumne bhi to kuch nahi khaya tha na aur mujhe yakeen tha tum jaroor aaogi ,, isliye tumhare sath khane ke liye ruka tha. Dad ko pata hei mei yahan hu ,, wahan kisi ko meri chinta nahi hogi ,, so don't worry about them .


Geet smiled and became serious ,, she looked down and caresses his hand with her.


Geet: u r very lucky Maan having a very caring family ,, her koi itna lucky nahi hota .


Maan sensed her pain and loneliness in those words ,, he cupped he face in his hands.


Maan: tum bhi utni hi lucky ho ,, Geet tum duniya ki sabse acchi ladki ho , The bestest.


Geet: nahi Maan essa nahi hei ,, agar mei best hoti to mere pass bhi sab kuch hota ,, iss tarah akele ... She chocked and looked down .


Maan : nahi Geet , please ,, he packed on her forehead ,, Geet Kya tum mujhe iss layak samjhti ho ki mei tumhara akelapan baat saku ? Kya mei tumhara dhukh share ker sakta hu Geet? Bolo Geet kya mei itna deserve kerta hu?


Sometimes when I say " I am O Key ! "

I need someone to look me in my eyes, hug me tight and say

" I know you are not! "





Sorry for mistakes.




Part - 79


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it graphics
am first Dancing and singing mini graphics

i loved that hug!!!

indirectly hi sahi maan ne aaj bahut kuch keh diya.. .. now waiting for geets reply... wo ishaare ko samjhi bhi ya nahi...


song selection again just apt👏

like is not working😭
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab pataka se dhamka ban gayee ho,,,,badi jaldi scene change ho reha hei...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

ab pataka se dhamka ban gayee ho,,,,badi jaldi scene change ho reha hei...😆



offo ithni khaas bhi nahi dikh rahi EMO_043
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



offo ithni khaas bhi nahi dikh rahi EMO_043

ab cutee,,,,maine kaha tha na quick scene change,,,,😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

ab cutee,,,,maine kaha tha na quick scene change,,,,😆



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Posted: 11 years ago

😭😭 Ye lily mujhe update mei fassa ker yahan maze maar rahi hei..

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