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Posted: 11 years ago



Mona,Lakshu,Priya,Lily and Sona...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😭😭 Don't know d reason ,, but i can't reply with that id
only liking is working...
.. going out for dinner so will be lil late.. sorry..




i was aout to go!!!

dinner... arrey kya baat hain!!! enjoy kar!!

will u come here after that???

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello ji ..

aaj shayad raat me naa aa paau.. mummy thori der pahle aayi hai so guppe maanri hai dher saara 😆

isi liye abhi hi updt de rahi hu.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

hello ji ..

aaj shayad raat me naa aa paau.. mummy thori der pahle aayi hai so guppe maanri hai dher saara 😆

isi liye abhi hi updt de rahi hu.. 😛

okkk enjoy,,,,,😳waiting 4 updttt,,,,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful dear
maan angey on geet for trying to change for him
geet wants to know about maan. she is right though she loves him but dont know anything about him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

hello ji ..

aaj shayad raat me naa aa paau.. mummy thori der pahle aayi hai so guppe maanri hai dher saara 😆

isi liye abhi hi updt de rahi hu.. 😛



u seem to e so slose to ur mom yaar... enjoy...

hum gappe kal maarenge!!





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Posted: 11 years ago


I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 38

Maan', she called before entering in room.

Maan was busy on his laptop when glimpsed her nervous figure holding tray in hands and smiled. "Come Geet, you don't need to ask entering in your own room'.

She did not replied and walked ahead. She stopped near bed and placed tray down. Her eyes travelled the room thinking where to sit, and stopped at couch at far and breathed in relief. Holding her sandwich she fastened toward couch before Maan would object,

"Why are you going there?', Maan interrupted.

"Wo.. I feel more comfortable here while eating' she prayed God to let this excuse work.

"Hm okay'

She smiled in relax. Few minutes passed in silence when suddenly Geet heard a female voice in room, instantly she checked her mouth, but she was not speaking, then who did?, she thought.

"Maan who is speaking?'

"You wanted to know about me right?'

She nodded.

"So here you can see my family, they are on video chat',

Geet hand stopped abruptly and half sandwich piece dangled from her mouth and her eyes became bigger than ever.

"Come Angel'

She shook head. She checked her dress; she was in night dress wearing an old Short pink Kurti and blue Patiyala with red Dupatta in neck, which could never be a formal wear for first interaction with her in-laws. Her hair was opened but little messy and half hanging sandwich from mouth was struggling to climb up inside, she shook head even more vigorously.

"Come on Geet, hurry up'

"No Maan , I.. I will .. later..' she tried to escape but then heard her name, taken by a female in laptop. Her legs stopped. She pleaded Maan from eyes but he shook head.

"I hate you!!!' she mouthed in anger. She corrected her Dupatta and combed fingers immediately in hair to make it look little better. She kicked sandwich inside mouth and gulped down at once and wiped face with towel and came and sat beside Maan feeling so nervous.

"Where is she?'

She looked Maan when found blank screen in laptop.

"I have not started yet', he laughed on her grumpy expression. "That was Mama's pre recorded sound. Now relax okay', Maan pressed her hand to make her calm and when she was ready, he put video on.

Alka eyes filled up when saw her little Geet so grown up and turning into real angel of Maan in every way. They were looking so adorable sitting together like a perfect family. "How are you Geet? Remember me Beta?'

Geet shook head. She greeted her and became silent, what to talk, she was shy. Maan thought she might needed privacy so stirred to leave when Geet held his hand secretly, gestured him to stop. An instant happiness beamed his face and slight smile touched his lips, which Alka noticed but she hid her smile. Later Alka made Geet comfortable with her questions and called SD as well to see her daughter-in-law. SD was so happy finding Geet so beautiful and graceful along with and both ladies blessed both Maan and Geet with their pure wishes.

"Did you like your in-laws Geet?', Ending the call Maan teased her but Geet was feeling so emotional at the time to mind over his any tease. The way Alka talked her she missed her mother at sudden which rarely she used to feel. Keeping tears in eyes she turned to Maan, "Thank you', a drop fell on her palm. Maan was surprised to see her so emotional and he raised her arms to hug her then moved back, thinking she should herself take first move now but Geet hugged him tight sobbing on his shoulder.

"What happened?' he caressed her hairs nuzzled his cheek in her hairs. Geet shook head still thinking how her luck can be so wonderful. She tightened grip surrendering herself completely in his arms. She wished to spend life like this, without moving a bit.

She moved back after sometime but Geet eyes still didn't leave his sight. She wanted to love him the way he did. She wanted to reveal her feeling for him so openly like he did always. She lifted her hand and touched his face. She let her fingers travel over his face all where and then advanced ahead and gave the first kiss on his cheek so softly with all her love. Maan startled with this sudden prize. He looked her disbelieved and when found her so comfortable sitting in his embrace, he smiled back. He kissed her forehead in complete bliss. He wanted to peak her lips when Geet stirred suddenly and her feet hit the laptop, she turned back.

A mansion photo was opened on screen, "it's beautiful house. Isn't it Maan', She cooed.

"Hm, and it's your house Geet'

Geet looked him puzzled then Maan told it's Khurana Mansion. Her eyes broaden when realized it was his house. She always knew he was rich but this grandness was beyond her imagination. She looked him awed. Maan showed some more pics of mansion that truly amazed her. She realized how timid her family will look before his grand family. She found herself so timid in front of his huge personality and suddenly she remembered Mohan words that his Grandfather was against this marriage because of his family reputation and fame. Fear run through her nerve, she felt hesitation sitting beside him, felt inferiority comparing her level with his.

"What are you thinking Geet?'He found her so silent suddenly.

"Maan, did your grandfather agree? I had heard Baba was saying that your grandfather was very angry with that incident. He didn't want you to come here back, in India. That's why Baba never told me about you and your family. Does he know your coming here? Did he accept me?'

She eagerly waited to know Maan reply. His answer was supposed to decide their future. But Maan was hell trying not to show his anger toward the annoyance he wanted to forget. Geet eyes were genuinely staring him, but could he neither increase her fear speaking truth nor wanted to tell her lie. He was in dilemma.



Precap: Panna comes to know about Maan being in Geet house


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


main first aayi...

i loved how maan tried to make geet know more about himself... by introducing first to his family...

and geets effort to show her love to maan by taking an initiative for a hug and then a kiss was fab!!!

budhaoo nahi tho tho uski yaad aa hi gayi ab in dono ke beech!!
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



u seem to e so slose to ur mom yaar... enjoy...

hum gappe kal maarenge!!











hehe so cute,, haa mummy ke binaa mann nahi lagta ..

lakshu pata h mojri laayi di lacknow se itna sunder ki kya batao .. wo bhi ek dam sasti price me ..

n ek kurti wo b beautiful .. n suit ko awesome hai 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago



hi mona lakshu babie lils

main aagayi hoon😃

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