Dark Temptations part 5 pg 130 30/11/13 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

congratz for the new story...
good start...
continue soon...

Originally posted by: saf24

Superb start. Maan and Geet both can't stand each other yet they both end up getting thrown together for a deal that they are yet to sign. Very interesting so far and can't wait to see what is in store next.

Originally posted by: rsusmita

dark tempting jsut like my chocale...
nice concept dear loved the first part

Originally posted by: nottyrain

superbbb...😛 plzz do update soon😉

Originally posted by: darshika121

omggg both r same by nature

so arrogent, rude, selfish
but i think jha hate hota hai vha pyar bhi limitless hota hai so i m wairing

cont. soon

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

well it is very clear these two ppl really do hate each other! Hmm, I wonder if it is all about winning or if something happened back then?? Time will tell.

excellent beginning.

Originally posted by: tanvishri

different concept!! continue soon:D

Originally posted by: LILY111144

<font color="#0000ff">grt str richa,,both r hard enemies bt stuckd wid eachother,loved ur writing...😳</font>

Originally posted by: metromasti

awesome start ! waiting for next

Originally posted by: _lehar_

awesome part

loved it

oh maan and geet both knew each other from scholl days and their competion for being no .1 started at that time only

deal went to both because both coated same figure and now both have to work together where both cant bear eachohter for single second now how will they gonna work together