Bandhan - MG FF #3UPDATING NEW THREAD lnk pg141 - Page 48

hi anu,me back after ages. and its my few lines from mobile so sorry for mostake.as i think main poem likhna bhul gayi hu. waise you rocked dear

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

yaar ki ruswai ko ,uski bewafaai nahi kahte. toh kya hua ,gar kah de woh... ke pasand hai usse tanhai ,phir bhi yaar usse zudaai nahi dete . yeh safar hai zindagi bhar ka , isse pal bhar ki millai nahi kahte . to kya hua , yaar mera raazi nahi a hai abhi par uske jhoote bahaano se hum haar jaaye , is toh pyaar nahi kahte jab ik tere liye , zare se aasmaan cho liya ik tujhe paane ke liye ,saare zahaan se mukar liya to ,tiujhe tujh se haar jaau ,yeh munkin nahi tere jhoot ko sach maan lu ,itna to main pyaar main andha nhi tujhe ,tujhe se jyaada hai dekha ,jyaada hai jaana , kya chahti hai tu ,tere kahe bin is dil ne hai pahcjanaa . toh phor , kaise tere na ko yeh haan maaine,yeh toh bas mera dil jaande

Awesome poem dear...

Originally posted by: Maaneetpuneet

Awesome...

Loving dis naraaz maan.

Uff geet manaane ki jagah aur gussa dilaa rhi hai.

Maan ws abt to confess bt beech mei manish aa gya.

Maan knws geet is lying then y is he unable to undrstand reason?

Conti soon.

Dis part has been intrsting,lovd it.

Lets c wat next geet does.

One request... Evry scene in dis has been done abruptly,it strts n ends quickly, cn u plz slow down pace of moments a bit.

Thank u.

Sorry if you felt so dear... I thought I am giving too much detail and don't want to bore readers... but will try better next time

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

hi anu,me back after ages. and its my few lines from mobile so sorry for mostake.as i think main poem likhna bhul gayi hu. waise you rocked dear

hi nishu really missing u

jyaada stress mat lo poori tarah se teek hojao jaldi

Originally posted by: priya111111

hi nishu really missing u

jyaada stress mat lo poori tarah se teek hojao jaldi

ji mam, but aap ne bataaya nahi maine lines kisi likhi hai. ilikha bhul gayi hu ya ab bhi aata hai

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

ji mam, but aap ne bataaya nahi maine lines kisi likhi hai. ilikha bhul gayi hu ya ab bhi aata hai

oye madam apni poems thread may jaakar check karo ji maine waha post kiya poem aur meri comment😃

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

next part kab milega

ab tu aagayi hona anu bhi jaldi jaldi degi update😉

tang karne keliye main praff aur lakshu haina waiting pic daalne keliye😉😆

Originally posted by: priya111111

ab tu aagayi hona anu bhi jaldi jaldi degi update😉

tang karne keliye main praff aur lakshu haina waiting pic daalne keliye😉😆

love you guys for that

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

love you guys for that

main saari poems tumhari thread par post kiya aur bhi baaki hai tho batado yeh waala bhi daal diya

Originally posted by: priya111111

main saari poems tumhari thread par post kiya aur bhi baaki hai tho batado yeh waala bhi daal diya

tell you one thing ,maine ff raead karne and poem write karni chod di hai. its just that aaj online hui toh bandhan ke update dekh kar dil kiya read kar lu and phir lines apne aap dimaag main aa gah. even maine try bhi kiua rahne de but phir socha chal do line ka comment ho jaayega and in ghe end aal is history and see the result.