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Posted: 11 years ago
dinner ho gaya ...??kya khaya,,,??
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



😆😆

aawse aaj babbie lakshu kaha hai??




lakshu tho aaj late aane waali hai guests aaye huye hai uske ghar

babie ne tho updates dekar patha nahi kaha gayab hogayi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago


hello All..🤗
mei bhi aa gai free hoker...😛
Aur mei Mona se naraaz hu..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



hello All..🤗
mei bhi aa gai free hoker...😛
Aur mei Mona se naraaz hu..




awww naraz kyu..


maine reason do diya tha na nahi aane ka


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Originally posted by: LILY111144

dinner ho gaya ...??kya khaya,,,??




nothing special .. boring si roti sabji🥱


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I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 30


"Papa Maan will never agree for the marriage you want for him', Alka was helplessly stood facing Yash rigid posture. Her status was pitiful, one side she had worry for his child future and another side she didn't want him to break these two people dreams once again. She didn't want Maan to repeat his father act and so desperately trying to make a clear solution but the chaos was turning into cram and in which she had fear for an innocent girl suffering.

"This, you should have thought before you'd sown rubbish in his mind Alka. You knew very well that when we didn't accept my son marriage we, would not accept the marriage you had made my grandson dreamt of. He was small but you were not and now he and that girl will abide the consequences for your wrong decision'

Alka was not saying anything. She knew what she did was not a wrong decision she took, not at least in her opinion. She knew that was demand of circumstances and she faced it rightly. But now when time has come to question over her decision she would not let herself see failure and would do everything which require getting completion. She will fight and win for sure and make her decision and faith win also over the all cynicism, are running right now. She had trust over her doing and the deed of Goddess which she herself had started thirteen years back.

"Had I not taken that step Papa, you wouldn't have your grandchild alive, before your eyes to proud over'

She whispered in such tone it was enough far to reach to ears of the person she was interacting with but it heard by the person who had just arrived looking for her and his legs stopped near the door.

"But why in this all you want to punish Geet, Papa what's her fault in it'

Maan eyes widen. His legs ceased rooted at once on the floor he was standing over and his heart lost ability to beat. His ears alerted to the profoundly and the silence went deeper with lose of noise of his breathing.

"She did nothing but she can do everything which I - disapprove',

Yash replied as sternly as anyone could do. Alka heart shrilled hearing the graveness of his voice and suddenly her eyes fell on Maan, who was stood like a stone statue staring to her. She gasped sensing the nearing danger. She feared what if Yash turn and see him. She did a instant prayer not to make any move by Maan further which could lead him to them.

"I had warned Mohan but he broke his deal. He knew the consequences very well yet selected his daughter happiness over her destruction and that he would see- now!''

Alka found Maan skin deepened its redness. His hand turned into fist and jaw tightened. His steps moved to walk inside and his lips stirred to speak when she shook her head, clued her eyes not to answer back. She feared even God would not able to save murdering of the relationships, she wanted to savor desperately. Her wet eyes begged Maan not to interrupt in this argument and stay silent over there for his Geet sake. Maan tightened his fist yet it was toughest to stop the pressure of boiling blood running inside his every nerve. He squeezed eyes to control his volcanic feeling and before his blood would burst out from veins he left from there, otherwise he could not have taken surety of his sanity.

. Alka signed in relief though she knew, it will stay only for few second and then she had to heal her child's burning heart. She terrified with the decision Maan had already taken to go back India and she doubted, now he wouldn't stop even if she force him not to do. After hearing the truth which she wanted him not to, she was sure he will not stop now and so, she asked in shaking tone,

"But what if Maan left this country and--"

Even she could not complete her sentence she witnessed the raging expression of his father-in-law and his voice erupted like volcano and thundered in this huge hall,

"Don't ever try to make him think this option, because this time, my son will not lose his life but "his lover will!!'

Alka shivered from inside. She was not capable to react what would suit. She was struggling with enormous wave in eyes which wanting to come out in form of repulsive uproar. She wanted to go and check her Maan, she could not trust over his activity now. Excusing from there she straightway rushed toward outhouse but found the door of his room was closed. She knocked and again knocked crying his name but didn't get any response. She was highly terrified thinking what should be done and in middle of her agitation she heard click sound of door opening. As she hastened to enter inside, her legs paused at place. She saw him coming out with two big bags. Her wondered eyes flew up to his face. It had become dark and blank where no expression could survive over it. His eyeball had stopped moving right away and the slope of his cheekbones had got an unshaped tightness which was exhibiting conflict with passed circumstances. He had lost the charm he used to possess and that made Alka fearing most.

"Maan what's --''

Though she had guessed meaning of the posture he was having in yet she tried to ask still wishing for additional reply but question been stopped in midway and his dead gaze met with her panicking one.

"We are leaving India"right now!

"We!' she suspected, and he nodded in certain, turning gaze in distance. "You're coming with me as well'

Her mouth released a cold gasp in reflex..


Precap: 😛 donno 😆



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Thanku...🤗

Accha hoga maan aur Alka India chale
jae warna ye mujhe iss buhdau ko marna padega...
Apni haddiyon ka khayal nati isse ..Bikharne
ko hei..
Sath me bhi bandh laye to chalega ..
Yahan mei haridwar mei Ganga mei fek dungi.. Kissa khatam...
Geet ko marega.. isski to..
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice story dear!! loved it 👏

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