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Part 26
(A good co-incident happened today. In story Maaneet was blessed in a bond by Goddess Durga and today on the first day of Navraatri they found each other and confessed. Isn't it amazing 😛😆)
Happy Durga Puja To All
"Yes?''
A short heightened man asked staring Maan weirdly who was holding anticipations in his look and suddenly he heard him being called Mohan!' he looked him bizarrely, "whom do you look for'
Those shine of Maan eyes dulled in reflex. He said he is looking for Mohan Handa, who lives here, in this house but man said it's his home only and he knew no Mohan Handa who lives in his' home. He urged to close the door when Maan again tried once to ask about a girl who'd come a few hours back. Man looked him little angrily.
"Which girl?''
Maan didn't know her name. His lips trembled with the thought to take Geet name, what if she wouldn't be her', yet he spoke slowly, "Her name is Geet''. His heart thumped with the word pronunciation. He pressed eyes tight once to make himself calm wishing the shortest prayer to lord he eagerly waited for his answer but when man said he didn't know any girl called Geet, Maan heart sank down. He hadn't anything more to ask so left to his car back. "Why did she lie to me'' he wondered. Her efforts of hiding her identity from him were causing him more influenced to know about her. "I have one more hour to leave' he looked watch and thought to do something promptly.
"I can't leave without knowing her. I don't know if again would be able to visit India soon, I just don't want spending years again and again thinking about her. I need to know her now!' He looked up to sky once again waiting for a falling star of his good fortune. He had begun believing on the girl words that God is there. He wanted her word to be true for once, for him "I will not ask anything from you God please hear my wish', he pressed eyes in wish and opened it with good jolt!
He smirked. He had gotten an idea.
In next five minutes the entire colony thrilled with roar of car horn. People inside homes woken up suddenly, covering their ears and holding head, cursing the person, who was responsible for ruining their good sleep. They jumped out running and yelling in disguise and found a guy was bending over broken car probably repairing inside something. In next ten minutes entire colony was outside on road croaking and flinging hands in air.
Geet peeped out from window of first floor of her house just a few steps away from Maan. Her eyes widen in shock when recognized the guy and hid behind wall clutching her heart.
"Ayee what are you doing!!! Stop this sound!!!!'
People shouted in frustration. Maan raised his head out from car hood and caught a glimpse around. He smirked. His plan had indeed worked. As he found people were becoming more aggressive he shouted politely, "Who is Mohan Handa here from Hoshiyaarpur?'', and waited impatiently.
"I am Mohan Handa!!''
All eyes turned toward the voice along with Maan and his breath got stuck in throat. The moment, he had been waiting for since years had come near his legs but he was so nervous to take a step ahead. His legs were frozen in thrill, the belief that his wish had been granted, made him numb. He looked toward the man of honour. He walked to Mohan slowly. It took a fair time to reach to him and then Maan bent down to touch his feet. Mohan was amazed, who this guy was. People had started returning back in their homes cursing Maan but Maan had been lost in another world. The world of bliss, the land of ecstasy, was showering its prosperity on him along with all happiness he had been lacking from decades.
"Who are you?'' Mohan asked yet trying to recognize him. Maan did not reply. His lips were very nervous to utter anything. His eyes were clouded with tears and his whole body was shivering in excitement. His heart was asking question where is she', his life, his purpose of living, his wife, his Angel, his Geet! And then his eyes caught the sight, he had been waiting for. A pair of beautiful hazel were staring him only but when his eyes met, she hid. Maan couldn't believe. He couldn't accept the fact he had found her, he was seeing her. OMG!! He had found her, his Geet was there, hidden behind that wall, just few steps away. She was there with him several times and he couldn't recognize her. How could he do this!!
His eyes became fervent for her one more glimpse but she was veiled. Maan pouted. He wanted to see her again. "How could I not recognize you Geet,'' his mind chided and heart brooded. He was adamant to meet her just once before leaving this country. The thought killed him. His eyes toughly held those tears inside which were adamant to come outside but before he spoke,
"Um uncle, can I have a glass of water please. Actually I was leaving for airport and my car broken in middle. I think I also need to wash my hands so if you having no problem can I use your washroom as well' he was very polite. Mohan couldn't deny. He nodded and taken Maan inside.
Maan heart was thumping so fast. He was nervous like a new groom, shy, blushing with the thought of meeting his bride and hesitated yet having happiness and glow on face. Stepping inside his eyes carved to see Geet but she was disappearing somewhere. Maan watched the house with intense look and got to know she must be on above floor.
"Beta its washroom'
Maan thanked him and went in. when he became sure that both elder had gone leaving him inside and place was empty outside, he sneaked out secretly and took stairs to up. He was not sure where she would be. There were two rooms on this floor but one seemed could be seen outside on road from this. "She must be in this one' he was sure. He pushed door slightly.
Geet was still in same position. Clutching her racing heart standing next to window resting her back on wall she was pouring tears from closed eyes. She didn't know that the partner of her soul was stood just a few steps away from her, staring her with his moisten eyes. She was fully unaware of the fact that how Maan condition was who had gotten the prize for thirteen years struggle. How his childhood was playing before his eyes and how he wished to take her in arms and kissed her till eternity to show his deep love, to show his longing, yet he was controlling his yearn. He stopped before her, silently. And then Geet felt someone presence there, she opened her eyes slowly and found him. She was numb. She felt trouble to breath yet was alive smoothly. Her heartbeats strangely came on halt and became noiseless. The whole world around her became hushed and then Maan walked to her slowly, filling the small gap between them.
Both wanted to speak something but this special moment wanted them to be quiet, not to say a word but to enjoy this integrity with fullest. And then Maan clutched her waist and tugged her near. She gasped in sudden staring him with widen eyes. She clutched his shoulders to keep herself balanced. Her hazels gaped inside his dark one and then Maan gave a deep kiss on her forehead holding her neck and smiled. He whispered,
I love you...
Precap: Maan & Yash Argument
Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
Mona ... for new Dori... 
this was my reaction today reading ur part... 
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