SS: The Billionaire's Unknown Daughter - Thread 1

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#321

part 6
nice part...
poor Geet...
seriously Sameera is so desperate...
good Mani was there...
Maan should do something to this witch...
cont soon dear...

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

still i have feeling maan is again playing with her and all he is doing for custody of her daughter i know this sugar coated ritch people when they will back stab u, u never know.

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

beautiful update...
i love maan's characterisation...
and mia she is sooo cute...
i lovd maan when he askd abt tat barbie with lipstic on his cheeks and lips...
this scene made my lips to cute little smile...overall fantabulous update...

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

I was going to question u till what time of period Maan n Geet were in relationship but then later read u Maan's POV OS n my question was answered there!!
Read all the six parts in one go n also the other 2 separate threads you made for this story!!

Till now m loving this confident Geet n Mia is damnnn damn CUTE like really CUTE!! But yep do hate Maan for what he did with Geet specially him knowing always that he was going to be engaged with Samira then why even made Geet fall for him? and hated him even more when the way he just forced n threatened Geet after he came to know about Mia being his daughter!! But then now i m liking how Geet is making him suffer n hope he does suffer a bit more n Geet doesnt give in easily!!

I like Mani too, she is sweet!!

Dont have any feelings for Samira yet but if she too hurt Geet or even Mia in ur future updates then i might start hating her!!

Over all an awesome SS!!

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Beautiful update. I actually liked the part. Intact I love each part of this SS.

Sam n Geet showdown ... Sam telling her all sorts of thing to her for taking Maan away from her. Geet trying to reply coolly but later break down.

Mani answering her back. Maan soothing Geet. I loved Maaneet part. Maan trying to set things in place n apologizing her.
Geet in her heart accepted him but wants to give him a tough time before saying yes for torturing her.
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geetmerly

@geetmerly

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

beautifully update

well written

pls contd dear

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

nice part. waiting for next update.😊

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

witing...

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music

@music_girl

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: LILY111144
witing...

will do soon. Will start working on it tomorrow.

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music

@music_girl

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Spoiler Of Chapter 7

"I am bored" Mia slurred as she gave Geet a toothless smile.

"Momma?"

"Hm..." Geet muttered distractedly as she flipped through the magazine.

"When is Daddy coming home?"

"He called you last night, sweetie; he said he was coming home today..." Geet answered smiling at her daughter as she furiously scribbled on her book.

"Will he bring ice-weam fa me?" Mia asked.

"Sweetie; you didn't ask Daddy to bring ice-cream for you; you had asked for candies; teddies and Prince Charming"

Geet chuckled remembering last night's conversation. She had heard Maan and Mia's argument for the phone was on loudspeaker mode and Maan surely was not happy.

Overprotective jerk.

A/N: The update will be delayed. I hope that do for now... 😊

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