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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

oyyee late lateef... he already came... babiie ke bane hue chle batoore and jamun khaa khaa kar mast baite honge... actually i think babie made all this so that for some time he wull be relishing its taste... tab tak babiie gf bhraman bhi kar legi.. kyu babie?

ohh .. mujhe 1st ko aayenge

koi nahi acha hai na ek din jaldi aa gaye 😆

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: singh24

Aaj to khana hi chal raha hai...😆
Kahtey hai.. tu boiled bhi degi to chalega..
By God .. bread kha - kha ker unki halat kharab hai..
Cargo Ship mei kya hope ki ja sakti hai..

awww... acha acha khaana bana aur khila... ab kal subah kya aloo parathe?? howz kid?? mummy ko aaj bhaav bhi de raha hain a nahin... i doubt though

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

nice update dear

maan and geet meet each other yet not

liked it

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mona ke dekhne se pehle let me start... nahin tho kuch nahi milega

nazar bhi mat lagana khane ko

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

awesome part

loved it...

maan went to HP to enquire about geet he came to know how geet suffered alot because his act he was in guilt...

he for the last time went to the temple and sat there gloomy priest informed geet about maan being there geet came there and wanted to say thanks for his help

maan was in anquish ...geet wanted to sooth him...

i hope geet listened that line where maan said this maan remember u...

scary precap yash came to know that maan was in india i hope this time he dont do anything part maan and geet again forever...

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: singh24

Aaj to khana hi chal raha hai...😆
Kahtey hai.. tu boiled bhi degi to chalega..
By God .. bread kha - kha ker unki halat kharab hai..
Cargo Ship mei kya hope ki ja sakti hai..

yukk bread for 6 months ???

mujhe toh 10 din bhi nahi khayi jayegi

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

omg loved the update

awesome

and precap is scaring me

do update soon

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

nazar bhi mat lagana khane ko

late ho gayi tu bacha... khaana tho abhi mere pet main hain...

baaki ka jo thoda bacha hain that u take...

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Awesome update

How brillianty u written it

Hats off to u yaar

Ur every like was so beautifully n perferctly written n with deep meaning

The way u potraited maan hurt,missing geet,mistrust for god

Thn geets trust for god star

Thn maan got so angry

Thn saying sorry

Geet got scared but forgave everything

Last part was cute

Hey maan said his name to geet?

Precap: lo lag gayi nazar yash ki!! :\

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

awww... acha acha khaana bana aur khila... ab kal subah kya aloo parathe?? howz kid?? mummy ko aaj bhaav bhi de raha hain a nahin... i doubt though

😆😆 Kiddu to fevicol ka jod laga ke baitha hai..

He missed him so much..

Non- stop bak- bak chal rahi hai..😆😆