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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Nice part..loved it!

Aapne jab story suru ki thi,muje laga kuch naya hai...dekhte hai, kya hota hai?
Story aage badhati gayi...story ki grip...characters ka development...writing skills..sab Ubhar ke aane laga...story ek aise level pe aa gayi hai ki...aapka har lamba update bhi chota lagta hai aur aage kya hoga sochti raheti hu...aap dono ko jaldi na mila kar humein tadapa bhi sakti hai...😉

Maan ki geet ko milne ke liye jo restlessness hai...vo main bhi feel kar rahi hu...!!
Dono milke bhi bekhabar hai...pata nahi milenge to kya kayamat dhayenge!!!
Geet ka duppta kisi aur ko dene ka ...jo maan ka dard hai...vo bahut achhi tarha se describe kiya hai...
Aap roj update deti hai...fir bhi wait nahi hota...!!!!

Ab aapki health kaisi hai? Tc..

awww thank u soo much dear .. ur comment made me feel amazing today .. i felt i got success to get a level in writing.. now i can work harder what have been doing 😃

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Maan ek bar us ladaki ka naam toh jan lo... Khamkha gussa karte ho us par.. But I loved their moments... Nice part..

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

hayeee so wonderful lakshu

liked yellow bg so much

bas ek thora sa modify aur karde it will be awesome one ..

maaneet pic thora clear kar .. mean face n body parts middle se lil fade out coming from edge .. yellow noises ke karan pic ka charm less ho raha h ..

ok... next time will keep in mind... 😳

with this pic i learned to make layers and adding textures and all... am so happy...

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

awesome part

loved it...

maan was angry on himself for giving geet dupatta to a strange girl...

he searched for geet but all his tries gone in vain...

he is very concerned for that strange girl...he couldn't see her in danger and helped her with the procession and get a cab for her he also accompained her to her home ...

geet wanted to give dupatta back to him but he deined taking it saying his angel dont used the dupatta which is used by some one...geet angrily opened the door and gone away

nice precap maan is thinking about geet...

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abirshaheer

@sweetshrenal

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

geet ka duppatta maan vapas thode lega par maan khadoos ko jaldi geet ki payal dikhao hayee me waiting for there famous hug

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

ok... next time will keep in mind... 😳

with this pic i learned to make layers and adding textures and all... am so happy...

grt👏

u know layer kisi bhi edit ka most imp method hota hai n most complicated bhi

now if u want can do one thing.. take eraser tool nd dropped its opacity little .. revove that front yellow spot from mg pic .. see how result look 😛

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

maan kashmakash mein phans gaye...ek taraf geet ki pyar aur doosre taraf geet ki taraf uska akarshan...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

grt👏

u know layer kisi bhi edit ka most imp method hota hai n most complicated bhi

now if u want can do one thing.. take eraser tool nd dropped its opacity little .. revove that front yellow spot from mg pic .. see how result look 😛

wow laks ,,,,,marvlous...