Secretly Smitten#3 (THD 4 link @ Pg 140)

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

awsum

they again meet but maan ka gussa

poor geet

plzzz jaldi say maan ko geet k bare main bata do

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Nice update waiting 4 the time when maan come to known about geet

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Superb update. Aww Maan is so affected by the fact that someone else had his angel's dupatta not knowing that Geet is his angel. Beautifully written update with the emotions very clearly articulated. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

maan immersed in d thoughts of geet though not knowingly its her and
geet too
unknowingly hes attracted to his angel only but still not recognizing her
do cont soon buddy
nd jaldi dono ka intro karwao so thy know tht its thm

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

God I will go insane...or I lost it already

Anticipation is killing me...

Do something dear

God...

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Nice part..loved it!

Aapne jab story suru ki thi,muje laga kuch naya hai...dekhte hai, kya hota hai?

Story aage badhati gayi...story ki grip...characters ka development...writing skills..sab Ubhar ke aane laga...story ek aise level pe aa gayi hai ki...aapka har lamba update bhi chota lagta hai aur aage kya hoga sochti raheti hu...aap dono ko jaldi na mila kar humein tadapa bhi sakti hai...😉

Maan ki geet ko milne ke liye jo restlessness hai...vo main bhi feel kar rahi hu...!!

Dono milke bhi bekhabar hai...pata nahi milenge to kya kayamat dhayenge!!!

Geet ka duppta kisi aur ko dene ka ...jo maan ka dard hai...vo bahut achhi tarha se describe kiya hai...

Aap roj update deti hai...fir bhi wait nahi hota...!!!!

Ab aapki health kaisi hai? Tc..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

part 20
awesome...
they met but dunno who the other one is...
oh the dupatta is with Geet now...
nice...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

learned something new to make...

as am learning mostly on trial and error... when the pic comes out even a lil nice... am overjoyed...

want ur suggessions in this mona,...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

wow they again met and he again rescued her...

geet tried give back the dupatta but ge refused to take back...

geet again felt his anger on her...

he could not stop thinking about her...

alka knew that maan's grandfather offered mohan a job, then how come maan could not find out ..?

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

learned something new to make...

as am learning mostly on trial and error... when the pic comes out even a lil nice... am overjoyed...

want ur suggessions in this mona,...

hayeee so wonderful lakshu

liked yellow bg so much

bas ek thora sa modify aur karde it will be awesome one ..

maaneet pic thora clear kar .. mean face n body parts middle se lil fade out coming from edge .. yellow noises ke karan pic ka charm less ho raha h ..

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