A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! Triple blast!! :D
Loved the updates
Maaneet r now married
But maan said lie
When geet will know the truth of his being khurana god knows what will she do!!
Maan's dad know maan married to handa's daughter
He is afraid of the past :O
He lost his wife here :(
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Posted: 11 years ago

fab updates! Past n present well incorporated! Wt will happen wen her family n she find out abt him being a Khurana? well written

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh man is this due impatient to be with geet or what
awww geet was missing her dad
and you would do at such an occasion for sure right
who was the person
she has his half burnt photo interesting
loved nidha and geet bond
that was so cute right
and maan dude chill will ya you shall get married to her
so now they are married
ahhh but things will go bad from here
he said his full name but she didnt listen then
guess that was lucky but wont be so for long
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wait so his dad found out of his marriage
but what happened
and was maan dad framed but how and by whom
and what will this past bring to khurana now
and of course geet too
oh ho so their sr here
hmmm and geet was all shy shy
while maan was so happy that now she will be his in all ways
awww what he said was so cute right
hmmm so fianlly they are one
he sure took it slow as he wanted to cherish his wife
and wanted to make it a night she would never forget
that was beautiful union of their souls right


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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm so he found out why his dad doesnt come to HP
as he lost his wife here
but thats not it all is it dear
wait so he finally tells her
after 3 months of being married it seems
ahhh so now has it caught up with the prologue on the first page now
i think so but not sure
they still havent got back as his brother wanted the construction work going on
and hence giving him time to tell geet the truth
which he did just before they were due to go back
maan i hope you stick to what you said to geet that you wont leave her if they dont accept her
you better mate
so delhi and all things gonna be going haywire for maneet
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx fr pm
nice updates
maaneet married and going back
wat wil daadi and raj reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

awesome dear

maaneet got married and r living happily
who was behind maan's mom and geet's dad death
i think both incidents r related
maan told geet about his family

thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 18

maan didnt know how to make her assure that , his family will accept her..
Her insecurities were clearly visible.. Now he was understanding that what all meant by betrayal.. Somewhere he had done the same with her.
Geet was lying with her face one side .. Maan was looking at her from some distance she had clearky told him that she needs some time and now she was showing her anger, that too in a cold manner...
Maan st : bhabhi was ight.. Agar uss waqt sara sach bata deta main toh phir itna sab nahi hota.. But somewhere his conscious pricked him that still he was hiding something from him...
Maan went towards her and pulled her towards him.. She was not sleeping but her fear about her future was making her tremble...
Agar maan ne use accept nahi kiya toh.. What will be her future..
Maan softly called her but she didnt responded...
Geet : i wont be able to live maan.. I dont know what is written in our fate... But i am scared..
She mummbled hiding herself in her embrace..
He kissed her forehead making her sure that he will be there..
Maan : geet , kuch nahi hoga.. Please just last time , bhaiyya and bhabhi are also there.. I know what i did..
But i was scared mishty..
Har baar just because of being hailed from a rich and waelty family everyone managed to decieved me.. I didnt want you to think anything of me like spoilt and all...though i was , dada ne kabhi koi kami nahi hone di.. But having khurana tag it was a punsihment for me...
The word KHURANA shook her senses and she immeditely parted herself and asked him making him startled...
Geet : khurana , matlab kya hai aapka...aapka naam toh maan singh hai na..
Maan nodded but completed her..
Maan : maan singh khurana... Industrialist rajveer khurana ka beta...
The words were like poisonous needles for her.. The word she hated most is now in her life...
Geet : maan ye jhooth hai na.. She asked with some lost courage...
Maan : ye sach hai geet..
The next second he was given a nice slap and she had been out of control.. The way he had let out the truth was making her shatter into pieces bit by bit...
Her soft hands were hitting him.. Tears were lowing endlessly...
Geet : why you hide this maan...
Kyun kiya ... Bolo maan...
Maan didnt have any word...
Geet : kabhi maaf nahi karungi me aapko.. Kabhi ahi maan.. Kabhi nahi...
Maan : geet please , dont do this...
Geet : i cant stay with my father's murderer's son.. Samjhe aap...
Maan was numb.. Her words were like molten lava..
Maan : just shut up.. Kya anap snab keh rahi ho.. Are you out of your mind...
Geet : sach keh rahi hun.. I have seen the person who killed my father.. Jisne mere papaji ki jaan li.. Samjhe aap...
Maan : you are lying... And i cant believe ...geet was already not wanting to think anything...
She was exhausted emotionally...

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at KM..
Raj knew that the next day he was going to face off his past.. He was informed by karan about maan and his sudden marrige but karan was shocked seeing his father emotionless...
He hadnt responded.. Na gussa.. Na kuch aur..
Raj : maan , i am greatful to you son. Tumne meri itni saalo ki guilt ko saamne la diya.. I will be free from h
this remorse ...

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papaji.. Aap kab ayenge wapas.. Geet wants to go to farm.. The eleven year old asked her father..
She was the most pampered child of the family.. Cute bubbly , doll like appearance.. Just an innocent doll..
Apne papaji ki ladli..
Her father took his daughter in his arms and kissed her rosy cheeks..
Mohindar : bas thodi der me gudia.. Phir me apni geetko apne saath lear jaunga...
Geet : sachi..
Her father kissed her forehead and left unknown to her that this was the last time she felt her father's love.. The last demand..that was never meant to be fulfilled...
Her father left ... Never to return and fulfill his promise...

Naina khurana was coming to HP , she was called by her in laws as their was a wedding of a close relative and she had to come all alone leaving her sons back at delhi with her husband she had asked him to come along with kids on the day of the wedding..


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geet got up in a jerk and saw maan packing their stuff but when she saw that he was doing hers too she asked him to leave hers , she is not coming ...
Geet : i am not coming with you...
Maan: and i am not leavin you.. Apni marzi se aaogi warna i wont mind forcing you...
Maan was changed in a night when she didnt respond he carried her on his back just like a sag and made their way to delhi...

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next : face off.. N truth..

See below
Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 19

geet was carried by maan.. He hadnt even gave her time to protest.. Neither he can leave her.. He was now having two important possession of his life at stake and he will make sure that he will not leave any..
One side is his father , whom he can never consider wrong and other side is his wife geet who will nevr lie to him...
He had seen her longing and craving for father's love and care..
He knew he cant be partial.. But the truth was he was scared to loss his family...
This kashmakash had left him speechless and helpless...
Geet on the other hand was having no clue how to believe him...
Geet : babaji ye kya kiya aapne... Aisa na karo.. Please sab kuch theek kardo babaji...
Duniya main aur kitne khurana's ho sakte hain.. Please babaji maan ko uss insaan ka beta mat banana who is responsible for papaji's death...
Maan was listening to her talks.. He knew that she was also talking the same thing...
Maan : babaji, geet ka aap par kitna barosa hai.. Uska bharosa mat tootna dijiye...
Maan : geet how do you know that it was dad who was responsible for your father's death..
Geet all coldly..
Geet : i have seen him...
Her words were seriosuly dangerous...

Maan's car reached the huge mansion.. All royal and he first thing was to shout on the poor gatekeeper to open the gate for him..
The poor watchman.. Was shocked too see the younger khurana and he was just in his old form..
Geet giggled seeing the poor man seating and maan's glare was all she received...
Geet : itna , gussa.. Babaji kaise rehte hain yahan log...
Maan : geet ...
Geet pouted and turned her face...
Geet : dekhiye babaji sab kuch ye karte hain.. And phir gussa bhi ye hote hain..

Meanwhile inside the mansion.. The atmosphere was tensed.. Karan and nandini had got a nice scolding from daadima.. Though raj had already told her the same day but still when the two told them.. They had to bear daadi's scolding..
Though raj was mum..
Now everyone was waiting for maaneet.. And when maan came with his better half.. Daadi stopped them...
Nandini knew why as she was already instructed by daadima.. She did the aarti and after completing some rituals she asked maan and geet to come..
Geet was clucthing maan's hand tightly she was still waiting for daadima or his father to say anything..
But the cold treatment was making him scared..
Maan : daadima...
But he was cut off guard the next moment...
Daadima : maan , humne aapko mana kiya tha... Ki aap shadi mat kijiye.. Boliye.. Aapka saath diya pehle bhi aur aapne kya kiya...
Maan was not able to say any word.. While nanadini had taken geet with her leaving maan to solve the matter.. Geet's eyes were searching for his father but he was not in sight...
Daadima : aur ye aapka nalayak bhai.. Isne bhi kuch nahi bataya..
Maan smirked seeing karan and he was right now not in a postion to say anything..
Karan : sun le maan .. Kya kya sunna padh raha hai.. Sirf teri wajah se.. Aar daadi aur dad ko bula leta toh kya hota..
Maan st : shayad shadi hi nahi hoti bhai.. He thought seeing at geet who had been given her a mean look all the times...
Daadima: boliye aap dono chup kyun hai..
Maan kneeled down to his dadi..
Maan : daadi i am sorry sari galti meri hai...

The family had accepted geet but geet's eyes were stiill waiting for his father..
Geet and maan were in his room .. Geet : i want to meet toyr father.. Kyun wo mujhse kyun milne nahi aaye boliye maan.. Agar wo guilty nahi hain toh...
Maan : chalo mere saath...
Before maan could take her.. He had to leave with karan for some important document signing and asked geet to wait till he comes back...
Maan : geet shaam tak ka intzaar kar lo...

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meanwhile..
It was only two hours since maan had left and only geet was left in mansion but she didnt know that she will face off rajveer khurana..
She was going to kitchen for water when she looked at the open door and someone called her inside...
Rajveer : mujhse milna chahti thi na aap...

Geet didnt said anything but when she saw his face she was shocked..
Geet : aap...
Raj : beta, i know aap bhi wo hi samajhti hai jo sab ke saamne hai.. But beleive me i am not responsible for your father's demise...
Geet went without saying anything..
Raj know that maan loves her and he had to make her understand but he was having no evidence for his begunahi..

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next : see below..last part
Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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LAST PART

it was almost evening and maan hadnt seen his father nor his wife.. There was a strong possibility that whatever geet was saying can be the truth..
Maan didnt saw on the dining but he was shocke to see her packing that had unpacked.. It was all unexpected.. But she didnt knew why she was leaving..
Maan : what he heck is this geet.. Kya kar rahi ho tum..
Geet : please let me go, i need my space n time maan.. Please her pleading didnt let go from him he knew she was disturbed he slowly gathered her teary form in his arms and comforted her..
Maan : kya hua mishty.. Why are you so hyper.. How can you even think to leave me...
Geet didnt said anything but she was weltered in his arms.. Her sobs were wetting his shirt.. He kissed away her tears only to see new set of tears making thier way.. He felt guilty for guining her peace of miind..
Maan : its all my fault geet.. I should have told you everything.. She nodded.. But still hide herself in him...
Geet : agar pehle sab kuch sach pata chal jata toh i would have not been this much gulity maan...

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the next day , maan and geet were surprised to see geet's mother and her tayaji , taiji there.. Though they were still in shock about the lie.. But tha forbidden past and most wanted truth needed to be out..
Rano hugged her daughter who sobbed still not telling anyone anything...
Rano : geet bacha bhul ja sab kuch.. Tere papaji ki maut ek hadsa tha...
Geet : mama..sob.. Maine sab.. Sob..apni aankhon se..sob.. Dekha tha uss din...
everyone was shocked ..
Raj : beta maine apke papaji par goli nahi chalai thi.. Uss din naina aur main HP se wapas aarahe the.. Hamare saath kuch aur log bhi the. Par raaste main kuch logon ne hame rok liye.. Apke papaji bhi wahan se ja rahe the.. And he tried to help me .. They were misbehaving with naina .. Aur it was a mistake..
Geet show him the picture and asked him..
Geet : ye kon hain.. Inhone mara hai mere papaji ko.. Bataiye kon hai ye..
Rano and all saw the half burnt photograph.. , it was not any khurana but he was a common friend of raj and mohindar..
Raj : ye toh amar hai... How come he was there.then he remembered that he was indeed there that day..
Rano : ye tumhare papaji ke ache dost hai geet now he is no more.. Kuch saal pehle he died in an accident..
Raj : uss din.. Pata nahi tha that i will loose naina .. But you too lost your father geet.. They were the local goons that day.. But why did amar did.. He was never like this..
This time daadima spoke..
Savitri devi : amar was lusting on naina raj.. And that was the reason she nevr went alone where amar was concered and uss din bhi shadi me he was trying to force her.. Wo toh humne unhe bacha liya..
Geet's tayaji: mohindar ne uss din mujhe bulaya tha and geet was also with me iss liye is ne sab dekh liya tha but when i came i saw her sleeping in the jeep.. Mujhe laga tha ki uss hadse ko sirf maine hi dekha hai...
Shahyad ... The goons were also sent by amar .. And when mohindar was trying to save you all he had shoot him aur wo geet ne dekha...
Geet didnt tell anyone anything but the truth was clear now but how did it was a rumor that khurana's were behind the murder..
rano : wo bi amar ne bataya tha and he spread it all over HP...

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though maan was not to forgiven but eventually all had.. Geet had been accepted whole heartedly and now maan was on his mission manao mishty..

There were no grudes for raj not for geet not anyone.. Even the truth or lie had came but the events that undergo were still not to be digested...

It was after a month..
Maaneet's room..
Geet had been again angry on him this time he had been late for their dinner date which he himself had planned ...
Geet was in the balcony grumbling when maan forwarded one red rose.. Followed by another .. Now teddies.. And last was the chocolate..
He had already peeled it and now he was enjoying it himself making her to glare at him. He teased her ..
Maan : want some..
But she was all ready to pounce on him.. Maan was all on the floor cold and hard floor an she on him.. Nibbling and sucking his lips taking the delicious chocolates from his mouth...
Maan gasped when he felt her sweet lips now rougly davoring him and he was busy exploring him with his hands.. Her kurti was already given its way. Maan titled her to return her sweet gesture .. Geet gasped with his sudden withdrwal and when she came to her senses.. It was all cold.. The cold wind was biting her.. She made a cute face only to be loved by him..
That passionate love that always makes them forgive and forget everything...

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finally over..
So how was it.
Try and give the last feedback dearies..
Hope you enjoyed..
Love you all

suhana
Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago

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