A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maaneet ki marrige foix ho gayee loved it thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic updates. Time apart makes Maan realise that he was wrong and he can't live without Geet. Really glad that he rectified his mistake but then he hides his identity and doesn't inform his dad and dadi of his intentions to marry Geet. Looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 15

it was same place and just a day away than she will be his.. Maan was just holding himself.. Knowing how close he was with sam and that closeness is now hurting him.. He really wants himself to be pure..
Though he is ..
There is no harm in kiss but his self consious was hurting him...
Maan : if i had met geet that time.. Then it was her who would be the one and that kiss...
Geet was quite excited and somewhere maan and his closeness had made her forget all her revenge..
It was after so many days when she opened that cupboard and caressed that half burnt photograph.. It was only having some of the features of the person who had killed her father..
Geet cried and cried , today she was missing her father , she had seen how a father will pamper their girl when she gets married, she had seen when her best friend got married ...


geet : papa i am missing you... Please come back... Today the tears were not of pain but the carving and the loneliless that you feel when someone important leaves you...
Geet : please papa...
Geet was crying when nidha came and saw her sister crying.. She knew how much geet misses their father..
Nidha sat near geet.. And wiped her tears .. Her eyes were also wet seeing her didi crying...
Nidha : didi , please dont cry .. Papa wont be happy seeing you crying... Dekho even i am feeling like crying...
Nidha's words made geet to embrace her little sister .. Nidha engulfed her sister making sure that her didi stops crying...
Nidha : didi , please mat rao... Dekho kaisi lag rahi ho...
Geet was not listening to nidha and then nidha looked at her sister ..
Nidha : didi , jeeju will get sacred dekho aapki eyes are red and kitni moti moti ho gayi hai...
Geet registered her words and she after glaring her and biting her cheeks (pyar se)... Making nidha yell..
Geet : kya kaha...
Nidha : aah.. Ek toh bite karti ho upar se gussa..
Geet smiled and kissed where she bite and made a cute puppy face , she will miss this a lot.. The tom and jerry fight a lot.. Nidha was her doll.. And her doll is getting naughty she will miss this moments a lot...
Geet : choti i will miss you... Tu karegi na mujhe miss...
Nidha : pata nahi didi but i cant live without you...

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nandini : maan theek se baitho...
She show her eyes to maan who was denying to appy the haldi...
Maan : bhabhi please dont apply this yellow and sticky thing on me...
Karan who was also there.. There was munshiji's family too..
Munshiji who was quite shocked knowing that maan and geet were goin to get married.. He didnt know that raj and savitri devi were not aware and how did handa's agreed .. He was still in a fix...
munshiji : ye kya ho raha hai.. Agar sab kuch theek ho gaya hai toh phir .. Bade saahab aur savitri deviji yahan kyun nahi hain...

Nandini : devar ji.. Itne se dar gaye..
Maan : bhabhi apne shadi ke side effects nahi bataye the... He made a cute face...
Karan laughed and he too applied some...
Karan : maan , side effects toh abhi aye hi nahi hain... Aage agenge ..
He was smacked by his wife and his little champ also applied haldi and chandan pate on his chachu...
Maan : champ , atleast you should be on my side ...
Aksh : kyu... Chachu loks like a clown..
He clapped his hands and maan made a face indicating no more chocolates from bhabhi se chup chup ke...

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they were binded in the seven vows.. It was looking like two people made for each other were takin the sacred rounds...
The priest was chanting the mantras and maan filled her parting tied the balck beads around her neck..
The shining golden and diamong nuptial chain made her his for ever...
Maan whispered in her ears making her shiver.. He was already holding her hand that was covered within her red chunri...
Maan : welcome to my world mrs maan singh khurana...

Unknowingly he blurted out the truth but fortunately geet skipped his words as someone called them...

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the words were simple but they didnt knew that why and how his one lie will almost shatter their lives...
Everything will be fine until that dark truth will remain in the dark past..
If it will be out then the lovable paradise will be broken...

The following rituals were followed with geet's bidaai and the grihapravesh...

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next : see below...
Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 16


it was after twelve years he is missing her very much.. Though time has reduced the pain ... But the hurt of aloofness was very much today...
He knew that maan had got married today without his notice or anything.. Munshiji's call made him startled first but when he got to know whom he had married he knew that now the wounds of the past will not hide anymore..
The past was horrible , it made him loose many precious things in his life...
His better half and now that past will continue to haunt him... Raj knew the sooner he confront , sooner he will be rid of this guilt that he was holding since last twelve years...
Raj : naina i lost you that day... That day how much i tried to get rid but it never let me.. Us din ke baad i never went to HP...
I lost you that day. But not i had lost the pride and honour thatwas the soul of khurana's...
Papaji ki banai izzat uss din khatam ho gayi naina... Par tum hi batao kya meri galti thi.. Maine bhi toh tumhe kho diya...
Kisi ko sochi samjhi saazish ka nishana main ban gaya...

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geet was sittin just like any other bride.. She was also waiting for her husband.. And maan was eagerly waiting to see his geet.. Finally he had made her his.. The feeling of contentment was making him so elated...
Maan after paying the entry fees and after all the teasing went to his room.. His bride.. Not only bride but the most beautful wife was sitting waiting for him..
The lights were there but sab kuch pheeka infront of the heavenly sight.. He could see her blushing.. She was looking so cute and somewhere scared.. He could easily guess..
Maan looked at his room , it was smelling amzing fainted jasmine mixed with the fragrance of candles... Geet's eyes looked at maan.. She couldnt believe he was standing still gazing at her lovingly.. She was already mushy and blushy with the divine feeling and now his eyes made her t hide somewhere...
She without thinking went towards him.. She touched his nose and kissed his nose..when she was about to go , Maan didnt let her.. His hands went around her petite waist.. She was staring in his dark brown eyes.. These eyes made her forget everything and now she was all lost...
Geet : what are you staring at...
Maan tunred her a little and kissed the hollow of her neck.. She was so high with the temptation that he was creating...
Maan : heavenly beauty.. Jo sirf meri hai...
His hands were on her tummy.. Maan kissed her eralobe.. The sensitive spot behind her ear.. She gripped his hands...more tightly.. More ...
Maan : geet , why do i feel this feeling for you.. Kyun khud ko tumse alag nahi kar pata... Why this one week for like several ages...
I just cant stay without you.. I am in love with my mirchi mishty..
His words were like honey that were having the spicy and tangy taste...
Geet felt him kissing more thoroughly.. And the next second she found the heavy dupatta on the floor.. Maan savouring each and every feel made her free without any jewels.. She in his embrace and looking quite shied.. He took her in his arms.. And gently laid her on the bed.. She kept on staring him.. He was just living the dream ..
Slowly he took her rosy lips in his.. She was lost in that first sensation that made her his.. He was the first one to touch her this intimately and now the last one.. She let his hands wander on her.. He felt her heaving chest.. Maan kissed sucked and nibbled her lower lips slowly and enjoying himself.. Making her feel same.. She was lost in him.. The kiss was gentle and passionate ... A strong shiver ran down her spine when she felt his hands freeing the barriers... But only after seeking the much needed assurance from her..
She was his better half and he cant impose anything on her.. Absolutely nothing.. Not his needs not his desires unless and until she wants..
Geet felt like she was blessed , she just blinked her eyes just like she does every time.. Making maan to smile...
Maan : i want to love you today mishty...
Geet was in no postion to say anything.. He freed her upper portion and kissed above her heart.. Her cheeks and chin.. She felt like she will burst any moment.. He was extremely tender..
Maan kissed and sucked her curves.. He cherished her feel. She was all warm.. And when she felt herself and him all bare.. Geet couldnt see in his eyes.. He neither except .. Maan dimmed the lights...
Maan : please just once look into my eyes geet..
How can she not.. The full moon witnessed the union of two individuals into a soul.. He vry tenderly he kissed her navel and slowly penetrated her.. Though she felt pain but his love and care didnt let her that sharp gasp to be a pain..
It was a pleasure that both of them cherished...

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finally i wrrote my imagination.. I so much wanted to see something like this in GHSP.. That encounter of maanet..
I still cant forget..

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Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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PART 17
there are some changes .. Maaneet know each other since eight months.. Three months of their married life...


karan along with his wife and son had returned back to delhi after two three days.. But he had given the ultimatum to maan that he will return to mansion as soon as the present cons of univ will complete even asked him to tel the truth to geet...
Geet was scared when karan and maan had a fight but nandini assured her that everything was fine...

Now it was almost three months and maan's work was complete ..even karan had called him back.. And maan didnt know how to say the truth to geet..

It was almost evening geet was waiting for him, but today a hidden truth had reached his ears.. He had learnt the worst truth of his life...
He never knew that he lost his mother in HP that was the reason his father never came here ...
He didnt knew that one more truth was there...

Maan was withdrwn from last some days but geet couldnt do anything he was not comforting her.. She was worried seeing him..
Geet came towards him and to calm him. To know his problem.. She asked him..
Geet : aap theek hain..
Maan just went away.. How can he say.. Somewhere he also knew that she hate him when she will know that he lied to her.. Today he had to tell the truth...
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The mist was covering most of the place of the outskirts of punjab.. It was the early morning maan was standing in the cool freezing air that could freeze the people regardless of the moisten laden winds which were going on and were biting his body he was looking in the vast horizon.. Suddenly he felt two soft hands caressing his front.. A soft and supple kiss was experienced by him in the vast emptiness of his life.. When he was clueless how to cope up with the situation there she was still there with him...

The lady behind him came in front and looked at him with her deep hazels boring into his self guilty self.. The enormous wide questions were making him to drown in the self hatred that he was right now feeling for deceiving the angel in front of him.. She was always with him her presence only makes his life a living dream ... His conscience was making him to regret and to apologise to her... He held her hands a small smile played on her lips.. She was like a light in the darkness of his life..

She was geet..
The only one he choose to love and she was the one who chose him to spent her life with him...

Geet looked at her husband despite of having married for last some of the three months and knowing each other for eight months he was still an enigma to her.. He was extremely lovable and she dearly loved and now she worship him.. He was the only reason of her existence...

Geet : aap theek hain..
The geniune care and concern in her eyes made him to tell her the truth of their life.. He was her guilty and she only proved to be his angel his saviour...

Maan first wrapped a warm cloth around her it was biting wind and she was still there supporting him...

Gathering his all the words and his words he finally confessed her ...
Maan : geet will you forgive me if you find that i lied to you... Kya tum kabhi mujhe maaf kar sakogi gar hamari zindagi ka meri zindagi ka sabse bada sach hamari zindagi ka sabse bada jhooth ho..what will you do if you will know that i am not the same person whom you think i am ... What will you do then... Will you ever forgive me geet...

geet didnt knew how to believe him...
Geet : aap kya keh rahe ho maan... Kon sa jhooth...
Maan : geet , ek aisa jhooth jiske wajah se shayad tum mere saath ho.. Kya tum me
ujhe maaf kar sakogi...
Geet : saaf saaf boliye.. Maan please dont let me hate you...
Maan : my family.. I am having my father and daadima too geet... Par ye maine tumhe kabhi nahi btaya.. Bhai ne kaha tha ki sab kuch bata dun.. But i was scared ki agar dad ko hamare rishte se problem hui toh... I didnt knew what to do..
Geet was not in senses.. She just went in the room only to be followed by maan...
Maan looked at geet sitting in the room..he went near her but she was all cold to his presence..
Geet : aur kya jhooth bola hai aapne...
Maan : main ghar se bina kisi ko batye aaya tha.. Coz mujhe pta tha ki dada yahan kah
bhi nahi ayenge.. I was so hurt when i broke up with sam...i lost my mom here geet.. Islye dad yahan nhi ate geet...
I didnt knew this.. Kal hame delhi jaana hai.. I dont know how they will react... But beleive me i will try my best..
Geet : kya try maan.. Agar unhone mujhe nahi apnaya toh kya karenge aap.. Will you leave me maan...
Maan hold her hand...
Maan : never everthink like this.. Samjhi.. I know dad aur daadima will never deny me.. They knew that i love yu and they will love you the same way they love me...

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next : tomorrow...

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Three again today...
Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
i will read later
exam time
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan ko jhoot nehi bolna chahiye tha...agar handas ko pta hota dat he is a khurana...toh geet ko shadi toh durr ki baat...apna jaan bhi kho dete...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome parts... now Maan Geet engaged & going to marry soon.. but handa's still unwares that they r khurana's

thnx for pm..waiting for next part
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part 13
nice...
so Maan is realizing the way he did was wrong...
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part 14
awesome...
why is he hiding from the elders?
cont soon dear...

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