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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

OMG OMG OMG
wt a last part n epilogue
aww me so so much lvd it
u made me love prem
honestly whenever i read any ch who is responsible for maaneet separation, pain or mu bt here i lv prem which i thought was third person in maaneet bt still i liked him seeing his devotion n lv for his friends n ya only after my maaneet as i love my maanueet more
finally aalll set😆😆
n all happy happy
geet's remark on their gender n maanu's reply awww🤣
prem teasing geet n making her angry n maanu's way to calm her ahemmm ☺️
the little jorney from their kids to the marriage of their kids just awesome
their aitbar won
i just lvd it so so much
for u👏👏👏

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

fab ending..both pairs were affectionate.

n kids get engaged with their acceptance

loved it

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deepthich

@deepthich

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

hey read AITBAAR in one go...

ahhh... trust me it was very emotional n also a sad one... but a good one... worth reading...

i know writing stories like this may also be diificult in ur part as to bring all those emotions n feelings of all peole... n u have done very well... but im just sad that it was totally an emotional story...

i have never expected MAAN to be like this... but he changed in the last... n what has GEET gone through was horrible,,,,, only good n positive character in this story is prem... bbut he also suffered a lot... i didnt mention GEET bcoz she wasnt happy anymore after marriage till prem return... but prem was strong...

n as u said ur main aim is to portray friendship more n to show prem's character... then i can say u have perfectly portrayed it... but still i cant digest MAAN tried to kill prem... kash ye nahi hua hota... even after these years... what MAAN did still haunts them though they have all happiness... i felt so...

but anyways im happy everything ended well... n amy n pari are also together,,,,

but after reading ur story... muje bi laga aitbaar... trust is very necessary in love... its like a strong pillar... if its not there... love will soon come falling down!!!!

pls write more n more stories... from ur wonderful imaginations... will be waiting for them,,,,

but im in love with IN LOVE WITH MY WIFE of urs 😉

do update it soon... 😆

Edited by deepthich - 11 years ago

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

simply awesome part 10 and equally superb was the last part and the epilogue 😊 such a roller coaster ride of emotions,pain,jealousy and happiness...in the end geet's aitbaar won and so did maan's😃I am really going to miss this story a lot😭 thanks a lot for giving us such a wonderful story,full of emotions 😊 eagerly waiting for a new maaneet story from you and hopefully a very romantic and passionate one 😉😆 i am already dreaming 😆😆😛

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deeps_aga

@deeps_aga

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Hey dear... I jst love dis work of urs... dis ff is very close to my heart... as I feel a very strong connection between it n my life...

I too had a frnd like prem in my life... who cld hv done anything to see me happy... but the insecurity of my love took him away frm me... nw we r nt tlking to each other... we do keep a chk on each other not directly but indirectly...

I hope d way in which all d things ended on the happy note... my life too will see such happiness... in some days I'll be getting married to my love... I wish my frnd can too attend it... but i knw dats nt possible..

While reading dis ff I hv felt tht every pain of Geet was potraying my pain... I hv cried along wid Geet while reading it...

Really a masterpiece of urs... n will be very close to my heart always...

Love

Deeps

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

amazing ending

luvd it

luv the frndshp b/w maan prem nd geet...

thanks for the pm

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

dear just ;loved this story
loved to see their friendship maan prem, geet prem,
boding between the four
really mind blowing👏 epilogue
loved the
the way you the story ended

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krithi12

@krithi12

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

superb updates.loved it.really loved the friendship between maan geet n prem

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Superbbb update di...
Epilpgue toh was toh just amazinggg...
Hehehe.bechara Armaan...Prem ne toh uski jqan hi nikal di thi...
But loved thr way Armaan & Pari were ready to marry the choices of their parents...
Hmm...Pari & Armaan finally going to marry...
Loved the whole update di..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

part 11
last part
awesome dear...
lovely...
excellent...
finally everything is fine and Geet is happy and Maan too...
good...

epilogue
awesome...
Armaan and Pari...
lovely...