hmmm... update in page 143 😉seriously im not getting what to type... its such a beautiful update,,,, trust me i loved it so much... so much trust,.. so much care... so much understanding... so much love ... hayee...
i always love ur writing n portraying... n i will miss that with milan...
in this also... afetr ending previous update... u showed MAAN searching for GEET in KM!!! not typically like waiting in conference n feeling frusted... then coming home... i love this small small things in ur writing... 👏
n sach me maine socha he would shout on her... seeing the way he was thinking ... he ws there with her... n she just have to come... but after seeing her state... how he understood her turmoil... i loved that part...
n GEET cutely saying Sorry... wo mai. She pointed behind her. So gai thi.
n him silently showering her... 😳
and and and i loved this... so much
Agar sona tha jaan toh bed pe soti, bathroom nahane ke lie hoti hai na. 😳at that time i remembered something... u know when we have someone who loves us so much... their reaction would be exactly like this!!!! first understand us n not ask anything abt that... though we want them to scold us for our mistake...
loved him telling he is also not perfect like her... aweee... 😭 n i hope GEET ka wo burn marks kisi bi tarah chali jaye... or she keeps remembering those incidents
oh my god !!!! a school!!! the idea for that school was amazingly awesome... tera aisa koi sapna hai kya??? waise u showing ur love for music very well 😉
wowww... she even played guitar!!! thats fantastic!!! n that blind boy part was also good ...
finally she agreed to come n maintain her company!!!
loved their punishments they were saying for each other... specially GEET saying I will tell Jia to ask you for shopping. 🤣 MAAN would never want that... n visiting acu-acu also 😆
waise in all those GEET was saying normally... but MAAN naughtily... humesha thought ek hi disha par 😆 😳 hiding clothes... n making her awake whole night 😉
u know when i read ...a week later... i thought u gonna end... n i felt so so sad,,,, im still but its gonna end ... n it will in next part
pehli baar dekha hai jia disliking someone... but he is so naughty boy irritating jia!!!
actually u gave shock writing abt prem!! me totally forgot abt him!!!
wo shadi kisse ki???
after seeing prem... i have this wish...
i want to see even GEET's all friends also... puleejjj... ak aur update likhogi to kuch nahi hogana (making sad puppy face)
waise bi tumne GEET aur meera ke baare me likha hi nahi!!! wo dono kitne ache dost te!!! actually to say GEET got MAAN bcoz of meera... as she went to ujwal academy... now u seperated them so simply n phir milaya hi nahi!!!! n wo sab NY friends ka kya hua!!!
taking the name ... i want to visit ujwal also once again in ur writing with MAANEET... possible??? hope it is... pls dont leave anything...
waiting for next so so so eagerly... update soon...
hmpphhh!!! dekha... pehle comment karne ka mood hi nahi ta... ab itna bada hogaya
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