Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 16

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Mere joote hain Japani lalalalalalalala
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Was the last line Dev speaking? I felt it may be.
Maan and Heer are funny in a way. Mutual annoyance and hate for each other.
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I am saying this to seemingly everyone these days so don't take this as anything but naughtiness on my part...
I wish you would write a novel, so I don't have to wait so long for updates..😆😆😆
Thanks for updating Zarin.
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awesome update...
maan n heer poor they both are annoyed from eachother
loved it...
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part 35 - maan & heer are really hate each other ..loves so much to annoye each other..
who said last line...dev or nayantara..?
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Haven't read the update but read the note. I think you are not aware there is a Fawad Khan rage here in our group. 😆
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When boundaries disappear, when shackles that held you down with responsibilities, expectations, come free, when you are at your own without that attached surname that tied you to another person, when you are still in the vicinity of the other half but start living as two whole persons instead of half...
After years of togetherness, there comes a day where love is not enough. There are rough edges, cracks and patches in the relationship, and by untying them, by making them be their older self, they slowly let themselves heal. The ties haven't entirely disappeared either. The pull would always be there. A moment of Something felt when you get to know her routine doesn't have you, that beat of silence is all that was needed to make me smile fully.

The cracks are healing, a person needs refugee from things that hurt them to energize themselves, be a stronger person, and I so love the way they are so close yet so far, growing as individual persons, yet not growing apart.

Did I say I adore this story?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

When boundaries disappear, when shackles that held you down with responsibilities, expectations, come free, when you are at your own without that attached surname that tied you to another person, when you are still in the vicinity of the other half but start living as two whole persons instead of half...

After years of togetherness, there comes a day where love is not enough. There are rough edges, cracks and patches in the relationship, and by untying them, by making them be their older self, they slowly let themselves heal. The ties haven't entirely disappeared either. The pull would always be there. A moment of Something felt when you get to know her routine doesn't have you, that beat of silence is all that was needed to make me smile fully.

The cracks are healing, a person needs refugee from things that hurt them to energize themselves, be a stronger person, and I so love the way they are so close yet so far, growing as individual persons, yet not growing apart.

Did I say I adore this story?

You've left me speechless... taken me back to the older days of the story when we were all stumbling through their relationship together, trying to understand what and how and why...
They need to grow separately, grow as individuals but not grow apart... how beautifully and completely you've put them into words. I'm humbled, S.
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Thank you for your comments, everyone. I'm sorry I can't reply properly - it's exam season once again.
Avi, your naughtiness is noted and well appreciated 😆
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Hi Zarin.. glad to see u back with updates .. when I visit this thread on IF, I feel like I have actually travelled to Nainitaal... Living in that ancestral guest house with some amazingly unreservedly handsome beings ..
😆 😳
The previous two chapters or so feel like fillers to me .. cushioning the main scenes coming up.. but I like them .. the Perera flavour is esp tasty...resembles rather quite like the peri peri sauce ... Except in this case the tandoori chicken in question is Maan .. Peri peri's wifey's husband 😆

Such prime examples of family disloyalty is featured quite often amongst my family of friends .. friends who have no guilt in setting me up for grilling with chilli sauces; which Dev quite nicely does to Maan.
Its nice to see this almost youthful/childish banter between all ... I guess behind the depths (Gehrayiyan 🥱 ) and the complexities of their relation lies a primitive instinct of affection in their personality,connecting them all in ways they may not even consciously acknowledge.

No matter how many rounds of fireballs are exchanged between Geet's hubby and wifey. Heer knows Maan is the only One for her best friend and vice versa..

Waiting for the next Ji ... Hope you do well in your exams and come back here soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Hi Zarin.. glad to see u back with updates .. when I visit this thread on IF, I feel like I have actually travelled to Nainitaal... Living in that ancestral guest house with some amazingly unreservedly handsome beings ..
😆 😳
The previous two chapters or so feel like fillers to me .. cushioning the main scenes coming up.. but I like them .. the Perera flavour is esp tasty...resembles rather quite like the peri peri sauce ... Except in this case the tandoori chicken in question is Maan .. Peri peri's wifey's husband 😆

Such prime examples of family disloyalty is featured quite often amongst my family of friends .. friends who have no guilt in setting me up for grilling with chilli sauces; which Dev quite nicely does to Maan.
Its nice to see this almost youthful/childish banter between all ... I guess behind the depths (Gehrayiyan 🥱 ) and the complexities of their relation lies a primitive instinct of affection in their personality,connecting them all in ways they may not even consciously acknowledge.

No matter how many rounds of fireballs are exchanged between Geet's hubby and wifey. Heer knows Maan is the only One for her best friend and vice versa..

Waiting for the next Ji ... Hope you do well in your exams and come back here soon
😃

Thank you for this, Mishti 😃 I'm sorry I could not reply earlier. I'm so happy to see you here.
Hehe peri peri sounds about right! What's life without a bit of spice and family disloyalty, right? ;) They bring out nice flavours in each other, this lot. I'm having fun cooking up new recipes 😆
Still a while until exams are over but a new dish isn't that far away... keep your eyes posted! ;)

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