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Pihu Its Specially For you this Update...😳 How much i have waited u😆
Sana Tere Bolne se i have a twist 😉
Part -3

They Say every morning You get It's a new day. A new Start. Maybe Its actually right. Maybe This Morning Is gonna be new start or maybe end of something.

Geet got up but unknown to her that today is something on store for her which is unpredictable. Its only God who knows whether its good or bad.

As usual Geet got up early As per the rules of d hostel. She does her daily routine and leaves for the college.

Co-incidentally Maaneet enters the college together unknown to themselves but many Pairs of eyes were watching them...

They went to their friends n now they saw eachother but as usual geet made an excuse n left from here Leaving Maan Upset. As everytime whenever he would be around her or watch her she runs or hides Which gave him a bad report. But as he promised to propose her farewell time he shrugged his thoughts.

Maaneet friends know eachother via pinky n adi. N now they have being together to make this new blossoming love to its peak. In short It Was ADI PINKY who made a way for Maaneet to atleast meet but here They never talked as geet would run or hide.

Here Pinky Tried All Ways To tell yash meera n armaan what she heard last night. But some or other reason Geet would come in middle n she had to zip her Mouth.

Geet was trying to figure out her feeling as last night Armaan made her understand.

Geet is close to armaan than Meera. She need not have to express as armaan understands his each action. Armaan simple words made her think over n over.

~~Flash back~~

Armaan Called Geet to their Favorite Spot. Geet went over there n asked what's the matter. To which Armaan gestured her to sit near her.

Armaan(amy) : Geetu I know Ab jo mein bolunga tumhe shayad samjh nai aayega ya phir tumhe wo accept nai karni hai but Dhyan dena Princess.

Geet : Amy. Kya hua tum aise kyu keh rahe ho.?

Amy : Geetu just listen me once n yes no stopping in middle ok.?

Geet : OK

Amy : Dekho geet Its Almost 2 years u have been having Crush on MAAN(geet saw him n somewhere understood whats in store) crush 1 ya 2 months or week tak ho toh its good. But here its damn 2 years. Geet u are a baby still (geet shows a pout face)

Ok adult baby (geet little ok wid it 😆) ok where was I . yea geetu maybe u somewhere lacked in realizing ur feeling. Tuje nai pata or puri duniya ko pata hai geet ki u just not have Crush on him . But You LOVE him.(geet sees him wid shock face) But u always shrugged off saying its MY CRUSH n we had to stop. But not today geet. Its high tym u need to decide wat u need in life.

Geetu Uska Last year hai college Which means From next u cant see him. Socha hai how would it stab u . how much it will give pain to you. Geet tumhe jo b karna hai Iss farewell tak karna hoga. Geetu Don't get scared of rejection. We have seen the love for you in his eyes. ( geet does an open mouth which amy shuts) Yes geet. Try to remember he tried so many to talk to you but u always run or hide( geet nods showing ya ya I remember)

Geet just try to find ur real feeling for him. Geetu once for an all think over it. " Accept ur Love Before its Too Late"

Geet : Amy. I'll Think of it.

~~Flash back~~

Geet was wondering from the time she left from there. All his words were haunting her. Trying to figure out her feeling. She started to think over it. And each n every thing came as an Movie infront of her. She realized it.

Yes.Yes. Yes..She screamed In her mind . Yes I am In love wid Maan. I never knew My CRUSH would be my first n probably last love of my life.

Geet was so happy. She was in ninth cloud after realizing she do love him really. She just couldn't handle the happiness. She just ran away to say it To Amy. As his words made her realize.

Amy : guys I have tried to speak To her. I guess she does but have to realize it.

Pinky : wohi toh I wanna Say from morning

    • Meera : uff..Pinky wat happen.?? From morning u saying u want to say something but then u stop

      Pinky : Arey tum lo ne jo ne kaha to find feeling of Maan wohi I wanna say

      Yash : oh Wow..Tats great. Kya haal hai hai waha

      Pinky : Aag Bar she was about to say when they heard Geet Shouting while Seeing on the Entrance.


    Precap : What dis she see..?? Is it an end or start of her story
PART 4

i wanna Say here I'll take a twist which could be bad as well Good. You will love it for sure😳

Guys I am Sorry for being late. Actually had Sports day cuming up so had practices which made me hell tired n so I couldn't . Hope you like the way I showed her feelins indirectly . I tried Good To express the Update. Sorry for the spelling mistake.

Hope u like it. Do LIKE N COMMENT :D

Luv

Vanshi 😳


Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet






<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">Hasshhh..!!! finally u got tym...😆waise loved ur Commentt VERyyy MUCH😳</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">Lubbb U BAsu😳</font>

luv u more :p podi :p
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Originally posted by: ShadiaKhurram

the concept good

hiddiing love
waiting



Thankyuuu 😳
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Luv u most :D :P Poda :P
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AMAZING THANKS 4 THE UPDATE
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hiddiing love
I LOVE IT A LOTTT
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update finally geet also relize her felling
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Short bt ws nice😊 ..
Chalo Geet release her love for Maan😳 and nw its Maan turn
But what she hs seen😲

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