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Hello Mona...


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hiii babbie
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Part 14



India,

One day Mohan got call from Savita that Jagan is seriously unwell and she pleaded Mohan to come for once. Mohan agreed. He took five days leave from office and taking Geet along with he departed to village hiring a car.

He was visiting home after around two years and everything started coming fresh before his eyes. His village, his home his people everything was making him emotional whereas Geet had almost forgotten the place. She was sitting neutral on next seat.

As car stopped at his house, neighbor started peeping out from their windows, that who has come. As they saw Mohan with Geet who was looking no more like any village girl, wearing elegant frock with short hair cut and tied it in a pony with beautiful flower design rubber band. Her personality had changed entirely.

Savita came running hearing car horn and she was awed looking luxury of Mohan. She eyed Geet who was not recognizing her and was hiding behind Mohan. Mohan greeted her and made Geet also do same. Slowly Geet started remembering everything in house. Savita took Mohan inside and when she turned to follow him, she heard people whispering,

"Look how Mohan life changed''

"oh you don't know anything. It happens because of his daughter Geet! One she got married to a rich boy and I have heard that her in laws is providing him all expansive in Delhi''

"Really!!''

"Haan ji, bhagya ho toh Geet jesa!!''

Savita was fuming inside hearing their random talks, she glared them and hastened inside.

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Next day, Mohan thought to meet Vyas. He took Geet with him though Savita insisted her to stay with her but Mohan was not ready to leave Geet alone anywhere. He went to Vyas home. Vyas felt delighted to see Mohan and Geet. He made him meet with his wife and then Panna,

Panna came running to see Geet, Geet took some time to recognize her but then after she became mix up with all and they went out to play while Mohan and Vyas started their talk.

In their chat Mohan came to know that Jagan had sold out his side of property and now living life like a beggar. Mohan got shocked, how he could not know about it!! He started thinking over it and realized that's why Savita was insisting him to come back village leaving Delhi. Vyas advised him to return back Delhi soon looking its property issue, somewhere he was scared knowing many other rumors about Savita and Jagan. After spending quality time there Mohan came back but his mind had been interrupted with various thoughts and he decided to return back tomorrow morning itself. At night he was packing his things and Geet was in kitchen with Savita.

"Geet Beta.. Which school you go?''

Geet told school name.

"Achha Geet. do you know how much money (Fees) your Baba pays there?''

Geet stared her and shook head, putting a piece of biscuit inside mouth.

"Achha what do you take in lunch Beta?'' She was trying to get how much Mohan expenses on her, mean what was his income there and what lifestyle they were enjoying.

Geet said sometime sandwiches and Maggie and cutlets and another various things which Savita even didn't know the name. and in term Geet told that they are leaving tomorrow which amazed Savita.


"Mohan going tomorrow and didn't even tell me!!''

Immediately she washed hands and rushed to talk Jagan who was lying weak on bed. She told him that Mohan is going back,

"Now it's time to talk him!!''

But Jagan had no strength to speak a word.

"You are useless!!''

She cursed him and went to talk Mohan herself. She said how he can go leaving his helpless bhai and Bhabhi like this. Mohan did not want to argue he remained quite but Savita poked him to speak up and matter turned into big argument. Savita started cursing her fate and cried for getting husband like Jagan, and this family who doesn't care for her. She started threatening that if Mohan leaves she also would go back her brother's home leaving Jagan alone here to die. This teased Mohan. He glared Savita with wrathful eyes but still controlled. He asked what she wanted.

"We also want to come with you!!''

And this brought his anger on extreme. He denied abruptly. Hearing their quarrel neighbor started gathering outside. Mohan decided to leave home right there but some old people stopped him and suggested to not to take decision in anger. Mohan himself calmed down thinking what he was doing, it was his personal matter, why he was letting others involve in it. He nodded and returned back home.

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At night, Savita talked to her brother Brijmohan and cried, she complained against Mohan and asked for his help. Brij who was a criminal minded person advised her something and Savita smirked.

##

It was midnight when Savita sneaked inside Mohan room. She found him and Geet both in deep sleep; she lifted Geet slowly and came out. Outside Brij was waiting for her, Savita handed over Geet to him and Brij runs away. Savita locked door from inside and slept back in her room.

It was early dawn. Mohan felt lack of something beside. He stirred, tossed and turned in anxiety. He turned to touch Geet if she was sleeping, when found place was empty. His heart thud!

He sat up, tried to see in dark if she would be somewhere else in room, may be on sofa but there was no existence of her. He hastened and switched lights on. Geet was No Where!!

"Geet Beta!!'' he went and checked in washroom, in others room in everywhere and then darkness sunk deepest in his heart when found her Not In Home!!!

"Bhaiyaa!!!! Bhaabhi!!! Open the door!!!''

He banged on Savita room. She kept faking her sleep but Jagan woke up. He patted Savita to wake up and see why Mohan was shouting. Savita made face and open door when Mohan came running inside and tried to look for Geet.

"Bhaiyaa Geet is missing she is not in home not anywhere!!!'' his voice was shivering. Jagan also got worried and Savita tried to show she was worried. All three started searching for Geet and hearing their shout all people from outside started coming and asked what happened. They also started looking for the child but there was no clue of her when someone informed police. Looking police Savita started sweating but she tried to be composed and that Mohan noticed. He jumped on her screaming she had done something to Geet!!

People tried to remove Mohan hand from Savita neck but he had gone mad, even didn't listen what police was saying.

"I know she had done something to my Geet inspector, I know she never liked my child. What she did ask her please someone ask what she did to my Geet!!!! Where is she!!!!''

Mohan was crying bitterly that any heart could have blasted seeing his condition. Police started to get any clue or ask everyone but nothing came out as certain when all heard a sweet cry,

"Baba!!!''

All head turned into the direction where they found Geet, in Vyas arms. Seeing her father Geet jumped out from his arms and runs to Mohan and hugged him crying and scared. Mohan felt like he had got the going breath back in his dead body he hugged her protectively and kissed her face being drenched in his own tears.

Seeing them every single person presented their signed in relief leaving one face alone and that was Savita. She was shocked how Geet was there!

"Mr Vyas where did you find the girl?''

Police questioned Vyas. He said he was going for morning walk when heard a child cry in deserted field. Somewhere he felt voice was familiar he rushed to see who it was when found Geet. She was badly shivering and scared and crying bitterly. She had few rashes on her body due to wild plants and she was standing alone there with no one around so far. Hurriedly Vyas rushed to her and looking him Geet rushed to him and clutched his leg tight looking him with begging eyes. Vyas took her in arms and hugged her keeping protected from cold wind. He hushed her down somehow and came here.

Mohan could not thank him enough, he was so obliged to him.

"Mohan wo sab baad me , first look after her she is badly scared''

Mohan immediately carried her inside and took care where outside, police started investigate about this weird case. Who could be that monster who left that 6 yrs old child alone in wild desert?

But no one had answer.

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Mohan was making Geet eat food when he heard some whisper coming from Savita room. She was highly scared and talking to Brij on phone, shouting on him how could he do this mistake to leave her alive when she told him to kill her, so that Mohan would become mad or could lose his sense and harm himself and they could empower on his property.

In her fright she even did not notice how much her voice was attracting Mohan attention and he had heard everything. His eyes were burning in fire and his nostrils had become stormy in fury he shouted her name. People from outside rushed to see what happened and found Mohan strangling Savita throat and she was struggling badly for her breath. All pushed Mohn and taken him away from her. Vyas lifted Geet and rushed out, away from that sight.

Mohan told everything to police and Savita accepted in fear that she did everything for his property. Her brother Brij also helped her. He left Geet far away from there that she could go missing. So Mohan would not return back Delhi and after that they would influence on him and his property.

All were awe hearing her plan. They hated her for her deed and police taken her to the jail and also called for warrant for Brij.

Same day Mohan returned back Delhi along with Jagan, not to come here back ever again.

##

6 years passed,

Geet was now 14 yrs old, studied in class 7. She was a brilliant student and came out so beautiful that every boy wanted to do friendship with her. She was lively and cheerful teenage along with obedient as well. Father Mohan and uncle Jagan was her only family and her world. She had forgotten her past, her village and even didn't know about her family history. Jagan had changed entirely after coming here, in fact he was shameful with his wife act and always used to keep himself in cover of remorse but he loved Geet much. She was jaan' of this small family.

One day Mohan got call from Vyas that he also got transfer in Delhi and was coming to meet him. After so long years Mohan found something from past, he was more than happy to see him again. Panna also had come. She sees Geet but both could not recognize each other.

"Geet beta did you forget her? She was your best friend in childhood''

Geet smiled looking Panna and tried to remember her, still could not but she took Panna in her room. Slowly they started chatting and very soon became friends again with fresh memories. In conversation Geet came to know that Panna is going to join Geet School, she was more than happy knowing it. After sometime Vyas left.

##

After a week, in school. It was Panna first day here and Geet was helping her in class. Both were in same class and Geet was introducing her with friends. Entire day they spent together and after school also Geet brought her house. Both Jagan and Mohan were not at home. Geet took her in room and both started chatting about the first day in school. After sometime their talk changed into gossip. They started chatting about which boy Panna liked most in their class. She said she didn't notice anyone,

"do you know Panna whom I like most ?'' Geet said blushing,

"But how can you like another boy Geet, you're already married!!''

Without warning this sentence came out from panna mouth making Geet eyes widen in shock!!!


Precap: Geet asks Moahn about Maan & Maan's dream life with his Angel'



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
[nice dat geet got out from that environment
accha hua that lady went to jail how dare she do something like dat with geet
hope maan soon land in delhi start his lovely dovy moments with his wife :p
waiting for further updates :D
-RAVALI REDDY
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the part...this is one thing about ur stories which i love the most, u never give very negative things...thanku 😊
Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WONDERFUL PART.. GREAT WORK.. I AM WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE.. GEET KNOW ABT MARRIAGE AND MAANS ANGLE. WOW YOU ARE TOO GOOD... THANKS A LOT FOR THIS UPDATE..
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Posted: 11 years ago
how greedy become people savita
thank god geet mil gye
paana told her about marige
kiya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
good for that witch savita that she got her punishment
now again geet going to hear about maan & her marriage with maan
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

loved the part...this is one thing about ur stories which i love the most, u never give very negative things...thanku 😊




Thank you dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Thank god geet is safe
Precap...interesting

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