MG FF My Perfect Bride Thread 5 [Completed] - Page 54

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@laks, lils: workload dear... feeling so tired at the end of the day..
an idea is there for the story, but dint get time to develop it!!

Originally posted by: LILY111144

lage reho remsipie idea aa gaya to develp ho hi jayega,,,,,

aur sunao smthing new ,,,wt about Diwali prep.??

Originally posted by: deepthich

have i ever said i love you to u??? if no then im saying now... i love u so much...

yaar tum fabulous ho... tumhari stories ... hayeee... i just love them...

u r just too fabulous darling... n a very wonderful writer 👏

u have been sending pm to me though i wasnt commenting... n im sorry for that... i decided to read story after u complete it... i know its not nice to hear... but i cant explain... i thought to read after u complete it...

n now i read it!!!!

OMG!!! this is too awesome than i imagined... i loved it thoroughly 😳

u know i started reading ur work with MY HOT PROFESSOR ... i know its ur first ss... n then THE STARTLED MAID n now MY PERFECT BRIDE... n every story is unique in its own way... n u portray so good... i wanted to read more... but u never drag it... thats good... but u should keep wirting more n more 😉

though i was never ur regular reader... but i always wait for ur works... u r one such an fantastic writer...

n this story... initially i thought when i read the proposal... it wont be that good as ur previous works... but trust me its the best among ur works... though all are best 😆

aweee... kya kya dala hai is story me... every part has its own importance,., n a own way to make us laugh n feel curios... n feel romantic 😉

waise maine dekha hai tum romance jyada use nahi kararhi hu... aisa kyo??? now i wish u write some romantic ff also...

i loved everything abt this story...

MAAN's entry in his sasural... him choosing or say hunting bride 😆

n GEET's mystery... MAAN declaring his marriage without even proposing... one day in wales... party crashing... their pranks,,, MAAN irritating GEET... 😳

n i loved when GEET's mom asked abt how was their proposal... n each explaining...

Well dad u noe the night I came back. I was in my room when I saw a shadow trying to attack me. so in defense I kicked him in the butt and he sprawled out in the floor moaning in pain. I thot he is a thief. But then again I kicked him in his leg without giving him time to think. He is such a

I vl take it from here.

He gave me deadly glare and it was my time to smirk.

And then when she realized that she hit the wrong guy she was begging for my forgiveness literally falling my legs and then I forgave her. Then she realized hw amazing and sexy I am, so in between our talks we realized hw much perfect we r for each other. Then the rest is history.

🤣that was too funny...

then ss story... everything was cute n lovely...

pa is really very cool 😉

waise kya dramtic proposal hai... aise bi koi karta hai kya!!!!

but i loved humour in this story... very lovely...

im actually getting short of words to explain... mano... i loved every part... even the bomb diffusal n hijack!!!

but alas missed PG punishment from MAAN... 😆 koi na... he would soon get a heartattack 😆

n now i wish n hope u write more n more stories on MAANEET... u are truly an amazing writer yaar... keep writing more... n dont limit it to OS only... if time permits do write a ss or ff ... plsss...

will be waiting for ur further stories...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

missing u remspie!

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Missing u guys...

tomorrow one of our project is going live.. I hope there will be no gadbad!!