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Posted: 11 years ago
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31. Heaven Interrupted




We were standing in our living room with heads down like a culprit. Dad was giving us a disapproving glare, whereas others had amused faces.

That was so childish and irresponsible behavior!!

Suddenly dad gained all attention and he looked so serious that it frightened me.

How could u guys ruin someones wedding party!! Maan!!

I can feel him stiffening and I glanced sideways to see I m so dead look. Pa was trying to control his laughter. Hw Pa end up here?

Wo.. mein.. It was Geet's idea!!

What??

Ya.. she wanted to have some fun. So may be I kinda suggested that.

He sighed.

U all disappointed me!! And may I noe what he is doing here?

He gestured towards Samrat who had a look meine kya kiya!! Sweet boy tumne pyar kiya!! Hey that rhymed!!

Dad rubbed his temples and looked towards Pa.

See.. This is what I m saying. It was a luck that Mr. Sinha took their pranks lightly. Otherwise tomorrow's newsflash will be Handa family crashed a wedding. Papa, aap hi samjhao ese..

Okay. But first of all I want a sweet hug from my beautiful princesses!!

My di and I gave him a wide smile and hugged him. Oh god!! I missed him so much.

Aur mujhe?

Bilkul chup Mr. irresponsible Idiot. I told u to take over the responsibility, not to mess it. Mohinder is right.

See. Papa too agrees with me. That's y we decided to conduct ur wedding soon.

What?

U heard me!! Before Maan take over the responsibility we want u to get married. I think after marriage u will behave more like mature adults.

But..

Don't interrupt when I m speaking young lady.

I shut my mouth seeing his intense glare. God!! he is damn furious!!

And u Shraddha. The guy I selected for u is coming day after tomorrow. So be prepared!!

Then he stormed out of his room while we stood there with shocked faces.

What was that?

Guys.. I m going. Now I hav to find ways to get rid of this new property.

Samrat whispered the last bit and waved us gdn8.

Pa!! when u came back??

Mr. Sinha is a very good friend of ours. I decided to give u all a surprise but u surprised us by giving that prank shock. By the way I m telling u son, ur ideas are getting pretty old. Agar mein hothi na, then I would hav definitely rocked

Oh pls Pa. that was the best prank!! Aap budde log ko budde ideas hi ache lagthe hain..

Oye Budda is ur father in law. See how he lost it!!

Pa!!

Sorry beta. But still he is!!

We all burst into laughter. It feels so good to have Pa back once again.


I felt a spank on my butt and my head snapped up disturbing my comfortable sleep. I was having a wonderful dream where Me and Zac Affron was having a wonderful date in a small house boat deck. His blue eyes are so mesmerizing. I opened my eyes lazily when I felt another spank to meet with the most beautiful chocolate brown eyes I had ever seen.

Come on lazy bum. Time to get up. Tumhara hone waala pati parameshwar is waiting for u.

That did the trick and now I no more felt sleepy. Wedding! I sat up straight and blew my har from my face.

Maan was standing there with a goofy grin on his face. He was half naked. Ie from waist upto top. His body was glistening with sweat which made him even more hot.

Gym?

Tai chi!!

What r u doing here?

Oh I forgot!!

He then crawled over me and placed a deep passionate kiss on my lips.

Damn!! I missed this lips more!

Surprising him, I blushed suddenly making his grin wide. Seems like wedding hormones are getting kicked in. He then planted his lips on my neck and jaw making my legs more jelly. But he dint proposed me, not even said those magical words. I frowned realizing the fact that I m going to marry a person who is my fake fianc.

U dint propose me!

What?

Yes Mr. Fake Fiance. I want a nice proposal before u marry me.

Oh I forgot. Get ready. We r going for a date.

What? but I want a proposal?

Geet..

I want all the normal things happening btw a couple. Date, Kiss, romance, and then proposal.

Okay baba. But we can do it one by one. First lets concentrate on our date. Get ready and meet me near the beach, Okay?

I wore a strapless summer turquoise and brown dress. And I curled my hair at the ends giving it a wavy look. I dint bother to make up and decided to give a natural look.

I stepped out of my house and felt the chilly air hit my face. Its so dark here!! I looked down at my watch seeing its just 5.30 in the morning. I saw a familiar silhouette of my man facing the sea. He was wearing a white crisp shirt with a jacket and blue low waist criss cross jeans looking quite dashing. I realized that the early hours of morning sets a quite romantic mood.

So where are we going?

I felt his eyes devouring me. Man!! He know how to make me blush!

Hermoso!!(Beautiful)

What??

Its Spanish, meaning Beautiful.

Je suis flatte

What?

Its French, meaning I m flattered.

Come on..

He took my hand and stepped into a small raw boat.

Boat?

I m in a romantic mood sweetheart. Don't question my plans.

He whispered with his seductive husky voice. Damn!! Where is the sherni Shri when I wanted her!

Fine.. Fine..

Controlling my erratic heart beats I followed him. I decided to sit down and watch him raw. Dark hair fell on his face, his arms reflexed and rowed very efficiently. Sensing my eyes on him he met my eyes and winked.

Checking out your future pati parameshwar?

Haan.. Haq banti hain.

He chuckled and shook his head as he picked the oars back up. After a minute or so we stepped onto an Island. I never saw knew such thing exist here.

How did u find it?

Sshh.. Come fast.

When we walk past I saw large maple trees giving an enchanting feeling. The leaves blew in cool breeze and I shivered lightly. Maan placed his hand on my lower back giving me the required warmth.

I was so caught up in scenery that I dint realize when Maan stopped and I bumped right behind him.

Ouch Geet..

Oops sorry.

Now close ur eyes.

I obeyed and was curious to find his next surprise. He led me the way for some time and I suddenly sensed his presence behind me. his breath fell on my bare neck and his lips grazed my ear slightly giving a ticklish feeling.

Open ur eyes bunny

Its house made of maple leaves and other bushes and there is a small lighted lantern at the entrance giving it a golden look.

(Imagine a house made of maple leaves in an arch type)

wow!! Its so beautiful.

Andhar chalke taarif karo bunny.

There were candles around and small lanterns at corners giving it an enchanted feeling. There were small cushion sofas and a small basket full of fruits at the middle.

I was stunned.

How did u find this maan. its so incredible.. i..

Without completing my words I crushed my lips into his showing my immense happiness. Maan smiled into the kiss and we began to move lips in a synchronized manner. I brought him closer and he enveloped his arms around my waist. Fire burst through my veins and I pushed my tongue into his mouth seeking for entrance. He too deepened the kiss and I ran my other hand through his chest and stopped at the button of his shirt.

Stop.

Disappointed I stopped and stood back.

Aww.. don't frown baby. I want my reward more strongly but after my other surprise.

He licked his lips and smirked making me blush. He looked at his watch and then his smile widened.

Time for the other surprise. Look there.

He stood behind me and pointed outwards. OMG!! Sun was slowly rising between the willow trees and the whole house was lighted with sun rays. Heavenly!!

Maan stroked my arms gently and Imy eyes teared up out of happiness. I glanced back at Maan and he wiped the loned tear escaped my eye.

Thanku

He stroked my cheek and kissed it slightly.

Was it romantic?

I dunno Maan. But one thing for sure. With u, my life is going to be a roller coaster fairy tale. I love u Maan.

And my life is going to be a bomb filled fairy tale. I Lo..

Sudden ring of his phone brought us out of our moment. He cursed and picked up the call.

What??

Geet.. we have to get back soon. Evil forces ki entry hogayi!

Evil forces?

Yeah. Poor Shraddha!!



Note:

i noe I m so damn late. i m so sorry guys, But i was busy with sumthg personal issues. But thanx for the constant support. I vl be ending this story within a few updates. Coming to this update i had tried to make it romantic. i hope u guys enjoyed it.


I started a twitter account. if u r interested u can follow me there. Love u all Guys..

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@deepa and Stinna Sam : This update is dedicated to u guys. My Belated B day gift.😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
My good Mr. Handa was like a hitler and he even ordered saying tat they are getting married

but Paa you were too good... loved it

And than the surprise by Maan so sweet na

he made it so special tat geet got teary

and than her confession but poor maan could not even say it

but now shraddha... how will they get out those evil forces from their life
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
update dad having fun with all marriage going to happen phone before confession



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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesum and lovely part. It was truly romantic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Very nice and romantic update

wanted it to continue more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
awesome update
mr handa has lost it
nd pa is too good
maan's surprise fr geet was awesome :)
do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
So romantic 😳

lovey part,
cont soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
ek taraf mr handa
or ek taraf pa
hw opposite😆
wow they r getting married😛
oh my god wht a sight
i was in my dreamland reading their date and the place
their kiss☺️
awe geet confessed😳
at the climax point tht shardaa broke the moment
maan was abt 2 say😡😡😡
couldnot he switch off his phone
😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Wow lovely update pa is so good mr. Handa is angry poor sidrath hope ushe bhi apna pyar mil jayee waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
awww what a cutie update di
It was sweet yet romantic..I said this many times but again I LOVE THIS MAAN endlessly☺️ he is just...chooo cute n romantic😳
why u stopped at I lo...?koi twist hai kya??bol diya hota maan I love u😆
waiting for next

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