MG FF My Perfect Bride Thread 5 [Completed]

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Wat ab update yaar

Hijackers in fight sequence killing arrest proposal and than finally the kiss

must say you have written is so beautifully tat i love it

the whole sequence of hijackers was beautiful.Geet fighting and killing and than finally her family knowing who is she.. but last everyone accepted it

Maan' part was too good the way ..the way acted but poor fellow would have been arrested but god sent an angel n got saves but in all this the proposal was mind blowing.

i mean who would ever think of such a cute lovely proposal after such an action sequence

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

hi dear rocking fab update! Maaneet save the day! Mr. H finds out thet Geet is in the navy! Maan abt to b arrested 4 murder bt saved! Maan proposes n she accepts! update soon, well written!

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hemangigazal

@hemangigazal

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#373

awesome superb lovely update dear

too good

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Maan so can he propose geet in natural way n situation ..loved the update

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Cute part
Proposal after action sequence...lovely 👍🏼

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Happy Vijaya Dashami to u too.

That was as perfect end to a joy ride.A Highjack rescue operation by Maaneet and then d proposal.

Superb end.

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

omg super cute update hun.. lol mission accomplished.. woohoo cont soon hun

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

ending ??

😲

cute si love story which i read in one go yesterday ending ..

what next story from u ..

i know that too will be amazing one like others ..

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Awesome update
Super action by our duo maaneet they are great as always
Aur arrest warrant ne do pal ke liye ek dum surprise kar dia but now end is super dreamy
Super action ke baad awesome proposal by maan
It's cute
Continue soon