LOVE FOR YOU(MG) Thread 2_ Part 95/Pg 127 (20july2017)

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vrinda22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#641

first of all thank you for typing my favourite lfu first

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vrinda22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#642

2nd thank u

welcome back

missed ur writiings

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vrinda22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#643

rudr came with kids

geet kept quiet supporting maan

n kids happy to be with maan

geet scared to tell her bros about kids

but finally she initiated about it

maan came with kids shocking them

nice part

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swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#644

Welcome back dear...

Awesome update..

Plz update other stories..

Waiting for next update..

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maanshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#645

great to see u back dear

welcome back

awesome update

maan n geet coming closer n now with new understanding liking rudra too...

maaneet n rudra part was nice SPL maan with rudra in music room

finally geet after lot of courage trying to say about her kids to her family

last part with kids entry...lovely

eagerly waiting for next hope we will get it soon...

u r great writer... never stop writing

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abinash079

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Posted: 8 years ago

#646

Nice update after a long time her heart is melting but what about maan he is feeling very happy but what about the pain guilt he has inside his heart which may be only dadi knows will anyone get to know about it or he will just show them that he is perfectly fi e to make them happy is a thing for next time
Let's see what happens

Hope this time ur back fully we all miss u and ur writings

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zariya1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#647

than god u r back after long Time
do finish your stories now
and geet shuld not forgove maan soon let hom grovel for her and kids

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

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Posted: 8 years ago

#648

👏 wow wow wow
You are back that is so great I'm really very happy to see you back n it is a privilege 😉
Welcome back ❤️
I'm so glad
Thanks for the update
Update was awesome I hope maaneet ke bich sab tik ho Jye
Update soon

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#649

Welcome back :D

Finally reading ur update!! OMG someone pinch me :P

Well rudra n maans friendship !! That was too soon :P

Geet also wondered how that's possible :P

So finally geet got the courage to tell everything :|

I guess naina gonna react more 0_0

BTW seriously 20 glass.. that was too much :P amake diye to 1 glass o hoi na :v

Well it's going too fast.. don't forgive maan that easily -_- get has already started to break the ice around her :/

About writing style .. ya a lot of change :|

Going too fast.. I guess the only thing is missing is you aren't writing the shifts of scenario.. :| like from office to home to studio.. it was jumping from one to another.. just correct that other things will be OK :) I doesn't matter of there's less drama :v