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Posted: 12 years ago

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Woh Pehla Ehsaas..

PART 6

Maan and Geet stood at the entrance as simran took their aarti with soft smiles on their faces and the friends teasing them..

Then Simran asked geet to kick the kalash inside the house explaining to her the importance of the rituals, after that geet kept her feets in the red coloured liquid and moved inside the house imprinting her footprints to bring good luck in the house.. Maan just followed her, looking at her busy listening sincerely to his mom..he noticed her interest in traditions and how her eyes glowed with happiness whenever she did what his mom said..he smiled she was a little bit of child within. cute and getting happy at smallest of things..

Maan came to his room to change his clothes and freshen up after a special yet a hell tiring day and night with all the travelling and functions.. he looked at the clock showing 1 in the morning.. he freshened up within minutes and went down stairs while geet was taken in the guest room, pari helped her to manage her heavy lahenga when pari's little son came to her.. geet smiled at him and pulled his chubby cheeks.. aaron immediately hid behind his mother, looking fearfully at geet.. pari smiled seeing geet pouting.. don worry geet, do din baad ye tumhe itna pareshan karega na... bas!! jab tak thoda shy hai, rehne do.. otherwise he is too naughty geet smiled, shaking her head bilkul maan jaise.. geet blushed at the mention of his name dipping her head down..she couldn't control the tingling sensations in her heart at the mention of his name..

Maan was playing with his nephew while the family members were preparing for further rituals and guests just lazing around..aaron laughed loudly as maan tickeled him..Maan stopped as his eyes went to the stairs, his angel dressed in a pretty red saari looking so simple yet so beautiful.. her face devoid of much makeup, just her sindoor, little bindi and simple jewellry showing her natural beauty and the trademark shy smile glistening her face..

He broke out of his trance as aaron slapped lightly on his face as poor baby couldn't take the lack of attention towards him from his maamu..oops sorry, mere hero!! itna gussa nahi karte..he kissed aaron's cheek to which he made a disgusting face rubbing his cheeks..

His mother called him for the further rituals.. he sat near geet handling aaron to pari.. A large bowl was kept in front of them that was filled with milk and rose petals.. Pari took a ring and dropped it inside the bowl and asked them to search for it..

Maan and geet both put their hands inside the bowl to search for the ring, the relatives cheering for them..maan found the ring at first attempt and took it out.. His friends teased geet bhabhi jee, ab to saari zindagi maan ki hi chalne wale hai to which she smiled, knowing she wouldn't mind his authority..

The second time when pari dropped the ring, geet smoothly moved her hand all over the bowl touching his hand slightly feeling tickling inside but she wanted to search the ring first.. While her contact with his hand had an another effect on maan, he was lost for a moment in her touch, he came out of his dazed state as all the relatives clapped for geet as she found the ring..Maan looked at her grinning with playfulness in her eyes, her eyes shining at her win.. maan smirked at her as if challenging herwait and watch mrs khurana..

okk, this is the third and last time, whoever wins will have an upper hand in married life..pari said dropping the ring in the milk.. Geet kept her hand in the bowl and fortunately for her, she has laid her hand on the ring.. she smiled mujhe challenge kar rhe the..ab dekhna mei hi jitungi..

But before she could do something, maan caught her fingers inside the water..geet was shocked at this babajii, kya kar rhe hain ye.. itne sab logon ke saamne.. she couldn't even do anything as nearly all relatives were looking at them but maan was enjoying her situation, softly caressing her fingers causing butterflies to dance within her stomach..

she clutched her saari not to show any expression on her face and looked pleadingly at him but he wasn't in a mood to let go of her.. She jerked her hand bhaad me jaaye ring, ye pehle badmashi karna to band karen.. babaji..!! in the tussle both of their hands came out of the milk..maan left her hand immediately and the ring dropped on the floor.. the relatives sulked over that none of them won the game while the two of them were least bothered about the ring as they were lost in each others feel..

After doing the other rituals, pari helped geet to maan's room while maan was pretending to be busy with his friends while his eyes followed geets steps..

Geet closed the door of his, now 'their' room and looked around it noticing the striking combination of black and white in the room giving it a classy and elegant feel..the flooring, carpets, lighting, furniture and designing all spoke of the excellence of ideas.. She looked at the big portrait of maan above his bed, again it was in grey scale..

Only his face was shown in the portrait outshining each feature clearly..it looked as if the pic was taken quite a time before..may be college times.. his black jet hairs little ruffled giving him a naughty kiddish look, some of the strands falling on his forehead, completely boyish look..his broad and straight forehead, leading to his perfectly shaped eye brows.. then his eyes..full of mischievousness and playfulness with warmth and calmness, expressing soo many emotions within them..'eyes are a window to your soul' was the phrase written for him.. his straight and sharp nose, always high in attitude..she smiled moving down to his flawless m shaped lips, curved into a sweet smile making formation of small dimples on his cheeks.. his portrait showed something called picture perfect..

She again looked at his face, this man is now hers.. the thought just made her heart flutter..he is all for her to drool,out of reach for others.. her eyes again moved to his lips..how they would feel against hers she thought hugging herself closer.. her mind just got stuck at the thought..she blushed crimson red with the wildness of her own thoughts..

She was completely lost in her thoughts standing near the bed, blushing to herself..this was how maan saw her when he opened the door of his room without making noise, thinking she would be resting by now..

geet.. he said breaking her trance, she looked at him startled..her heart beating fast with the course of her thoughts.. her eyes involuntarily moved to his lips and then looked away immediately kya soch rahi hai geet, behaving like a despo she cursed herself in her mind trying to steady her breathes..

i thought you must be resting, koi problem hai..

she just nodded her head not knowing what to say wo mera bag ka lock nahi khul rahaa hai..i wanted to change..

maan smiled at her confused and qizzed expression koi nahi, mei try karta hun.. he took her bag kept at the side and then looked surprised at her, she was looking dazed yet looking at him with all concentration..she smiled at him

but isme to lock hai hi nahi he showed her bag to her, geet's eyes widened a little.. mumma, lock lagana bhul gaye honge shayad, she said anything that her mind formed

But then looking at his face turning more confusing, she made a cute face pleading..mei change karke aati hun before he could reply, she had already taken a simple suit out for the night and moved hastily towards one of the door assuming it to be washroom.. but sadly it wasn't..

Geeet..

jee!! she looked at him just stopping a bit away from the door..her hand already at the door knob

kya kar rahi ho..?? thats not.. the girl was surely confusing him..

ab inhe kya hogya babajii..!! she thought mei change karne jaa rahi hun..she replied repeating herself not letting him even complete..

But geet wo.. suno.!! before he could complete , she has already entered the other side.. maan also followed her..

Geet stood rooted at her spot looking at the room she entered.. it was another bedroom which was decorated lavishly for their wedding night with red and white colored roses, small candles lit here and there..the fragrance of flowers and candles floating in the air and the flickering light of the candle giving it a romantic feel.. the cool air hitting her body forcing her to squirm in herself..she hugged herself closer

the desirous thoughts, romantic ambiance and the fact that she is now married created a very different and new feel inside her..while maan too was caught in the feel..

He looked at her standing between all those flowers and candles..the different flickering lights falling on her face, making her look more enchanting.. her hairs flowing with the air and she lost in her on thoughts letting her curls touch all over her face.. the desire to engulf her in his arms became all the more prominent as he saw her hugging herself..he just wanted to crush her into his arms and and..

His thoughts came to a halt as geet looked towards him, both their eyes showcasing their overflowing desire, mirroring each others emotions.. she lowered her eyes clutching her clothes closer as maan moved towards her.. her breathes going higher and shallower..

Maan lifted her face demanding her to look into his eyes.. geet looked in his intense dark, desire filled eyes.. he moved his fingers swiftly starting from her forehead, over her eyes, geet closed her fist around his shirt as his fingers stopped near her lips.. his slow and heated breath falling on her face, he softly caressed her velvety soft lips as she smiled giving him the cue to move forward.. he kissed on her eye delicately, if his passionate breath wouldn't have been falling on her face, she would have thought that she imagined the kiss.. he kissed her other eye as she moved her hand over his sherwani..

She shivered anticipating the next as his lips moved towards her own, their breaths mixing, making them aware of each other and taking into an entirely different world just filled with them..

She trembled as she hugged him tight, her arms joined at the back of his neck while maan softly cuddled her closer trying to calm her down, softly patting her hairs.. he pressed a small kiss to her hairs sending a tingling sensation down her spine..

Geet looked in his eyes, dazed with the moment that just took place.. maan bent down lifting her in his arms, geet crossed her arms around his neck her eyes lowered..she was not yet at that comfort level with him and he knew it without her voicing it out..

he let her down on the bed, her lashes still covering her beautiful hazels.. he started moving to other side of the bed but stopped as she caught his hand.. he looked at her to see that apologetic expression on her face.. he smiled and kissed her on her forehead.. he didn't said anything but she just understood.. she left his hand and her eyes followed him as he took his place on the other side of the bed.. they looked at each other and both didn't knew when they let sleep overtake them slipping into sweet dreams of their future with each other..

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Woh Pehla Ehsaas..

PART 7

Maan opened his eyes first in the morning, the fresh and new start of his life..his um noo their life..he smiled and the first closed his eyes and thanked god for bringing her in his life.. though they didn't knew each other too well yet her presence brought a positive change in his life..

he looked at her and was surprised to see that little bit annoyed expression on her face, a frown on her face.. he got up into a sitting position and noticed the change of expression on her face, the frown turning into a dreamy expression and she snuggled closer into the blanket, he looked behind him the curtains were drawn to one side and so direct sunlight was falling on her face..

he smirked thinking of annoying his wifey a little on her first day..he again came into his sleeping position letting the sunlight fall on her face.. he chuckled at her change of expression.. that cute little frown again appearing on her face.. he noticed how her tired yet fresh face glowed in the sunlight and again sat up.. geet again slept peacefully, maan again did the same thing and laughed at her super annoyed expression, at the same time geet opened her eyes and looked at him irritated and confused.. maan's smile fed away as soon as he saw her looking at him threateningly.. she knotted her brows,as asking kya kar rhe hain aap?? he smiled as sweetly as possible and shrugged his shoulders like nothing..

Geet pouted as he smiled pinching her cheeks.. gud morning..

time kya hai..mujhe abhi bhi sona hai..she sulked snuggling into the cover

aww..poor baby ki ninni poori nahi hui..trying to keep his mouth straight not to smile and infuriate her further on her first day in their house..

its only 9..he said looking at the clock and missed out her shocked expressions as she stood up straight from the bed..

Pehle hi din itni late..sab kya sochenge, mere baare mei..meri neend pehle kyun nahi khuli..aap ne bhi mujhe nahi uthaya.. hey babajii she started looking for her clothes for the day..

Geet, relax..its okk.. itna bhi late nhi hua hai.. he stood near her as she tried to think what to wear but her already worried mind didn't help her in anything..

She took any saari which she found first in her bag and.. and looked at maan with a adorable kiddish expression asking washroom kahan hai..

maan smiled..last night ki tarah khud dhoond lo geet..

please.!! looking at him with expectant eyes..

okk.. he took her to the other room and showed the way to washroom..thanku.. geet smiled closing the door and started the daily routine not wanting to make her first day in his house any worse while maan went to the balcony opening the door for fresh and blooming air coming from the garden..

His balcony had few pots of small flowers and his balcony led downwards to the khurana's backyard filled with all variety of plants and upwards to his personal terrace where no one was allowed without maan singh khurana's permission.. he was a man born with a golden spoon in his mouth, everything was brought to him before he could have asked, respect and honour were like his birthright.. wherever he went, there were peoples bowing their head in front of him because he was khurana heir.. he didn't had to do anything on his own because there were lines of servants around him.. maan thought is him being a khurana heir superior than his own personal capabilities.. the persons bowed to him just because he was khurana heir or his abilities, his talent were taken into consideration..he sighed.. i'll prove to everyone that my abilities as maan are greater than my honour as a khurana.. my talent proves me capable of being a khurana not the other way round..

His thoughts halted as he heard the soft tinkling sound of her payal as geet came out of the washroom wiping her hairs from a towel, the deep red saare wrapped around her milky white skin..making the saare look all the more beautiful.. his eyes followed her steps as she stood in front of the mirror drying her long hairs..

maan's eyes were still on her, how her hairs flowed due to the air, those drops falling on her face as she jerked her hairs slowly.. like the dew drops on a freshly bloomed daisy..

He came out of his trance as geet moved towards her bag.. geet thought of taking his clothes out as she thought he wasn't in the room.. she opened his almirah but then stuck on what she should choose for him. she thought of picking a sherwani or a simpler kurta pyjama.. she took out a creamy sherwani and simple chudidar, thinking deeply what to choose..

her breathes quickened as she felt his presence behind her..her breathe nearly stopped as his hand touched hers for taking the kurta pyjama and his slow breathe falling on her cheek umm..ye better hai.. nahii..

geet just nodded her head, without even looking at him.or what he had chosen.. she just stood their waiting for him to move.. letting out her stopped breathe as he moved into the washroom winking at her as she looked at him making her blush red..

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Maan sat there in geet's house with daarji, papaji sitting there angry at the things they were getting to know now..

So what you want to say?? Just because of your ego..meri beti ko kitni pareshani hogi..

Papa.. but

geet.. i'm talking to maan, papaji glared at her..geet kept her head low..

haan maan puttar, aise faisle jaldibaazi me nahi liye jaate.. samajhne ki koshish karo beta, its not as easy as it appears.. i know you want to prove yourself.. but its not the time still..

daarjii aap samjhane ki koshish kijiye..mei

kye samjhe..?? papaji was furious.. meri beti ki zindagi tum se bandhi hui and you.. mazaak nahi hai ye sab..tumhare ego ki wajah se..

mohinder.. daarjee asked him to be calm.. dekho maan.. you may have reasons to take this decision, but now you have to tnhink about geet too.. and from our point of view, we can't let our daughter stay in such conditions when we can provide her better.. i understand your's and raj's difference in view..i think he is right, i have seen my friend 'your grandfather' thinking and developing this thought, he used to dream about completing this.. so raj's possesivness to give the project its best is understandable.. and i understand your stand on it too.. but beta you will have to understand from our side too.. how can we let our daughter go with you.. don't think we don't trust you.. but we have to think about geet's comfort too.. humne use bade naazo se paala hai, use koi takleef ho.. ye hum seh nahi payenge..daarji's eyes had turned misty by now..

papa, bilkul thik keh rahe hain.. you can go, fulfill your dream and whatever, till that time geet can stay with us.. and when you prove yourself, the way you want..tab geet ko tum yahaan se le jaa sakte ho..all people present in the hall were shocked at his statement..

aap ye kya keh rahe hain jee, kal hi to inki shaadi hui aur aap abhi se inhe alag karne ki baat kar rhe hain..samjhane ki koshish kijiye..

kya samjhu rano aur kyun.. aakhir kyun, meri beti inke pariwaar ke jhagde ke beech phas ke reh jayegi..

maan was just a mute spectator as rano tried to persuade mohinder but he was no where to listen and how could he let his daughter stay like that, when he lives in better conditions.. he has always wanted and given the best to his daughter..

maan pressed his hand on daarji who was just sitting there, lines of worry clearly appearing on his face..

daarjii trust me, mei geet ko koi pareshani nahi hone dunga.. i will keep her comfort above mine.. please bharosa kijiye.. aur ye sab sirf mere ego ke liye nahi hai, i would never put geet into such situations for my ego.. its about my self respect, i want to prove myself being just maan..please just give me one chance, and i'm not forcing geet to come with me.. if she wants.. i mean she can be here till the time she wants and come back whenever she feels like..please..maan looked at the two men with expectant eyes..

thik hai.. this time papaji said, shocking everyone.. lets ask geet, if she says no, then she will stay here and you can't force her..

jee..maan was quite sure that geet would come with him when she herself had said it..he looked at geet who was thinking what to say..

geet beta..

papa, mei bhi maan ke saath jana chahti hoon..

geet, tum thoda soch lo.. agar tumhe thodi si bhi problem ho..you can say me.. and you can take your time for thinking over your decision..

papa..i have already made my decision, even before marriage..

matlab??? you knew it all the time.. papaji was little surprised to know maan asked geet's decision before going for his decision..so all the family members decided to be with geet's decision and give maan a fair chance..

The time when they stood out, with maan ready to sit in his car.. to go to KM, papajii came to him.. i'm sure young man, you will prove yourself.. and don't be sad about whatever i said.. it was just concern for my daughter, don't take it the other way..

don't worry papa, i understand..maan took his blessings before sitting in the car, and again he said.. meri beti ka khayal rakhna..guess parents can never trust anyone fully for their kid.. they are bound to be worried whatever you do to assure them..

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Maaneet reached their house to be welcomed by khuranas.. They all sat at the dining table for lunch..and geet stood for serving them..though pari wanted her to sit and eat but geet insisted on serving, so pari let it be according to her wish..aaron and rajveer came from garden after playing for a while.. rajveer took his seat between maan and raj after greeting everyone.. as both were still not in good terms, even if they talked it looked like they were taunting each other.. while aaron stood behind maan waiting for his maamu to notice him himself.. it was a good minute and still maan didn't notice aaron as he was busy in someone else.. while geet was trying to make maan look at aaron and maan wasn't able to understand what was she saying through her actions.. geet sighedbabajii, inhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aa rha hai..kya karoon?? bechara aaron

geet herself came to aaron as maan seemed too dumb to understand who was standing there too sad..maan's eyes moved along with geet and finally landed on aaron and he closed his eyes seeing his nephews teary eyes..

baby..geet said.. while aaron snapped with big fat tears rolling down his eyes..

mamu dosen't love me now.. he said as maan kneeled before him hugging him..aisa nahi hai bacha..maan wiped his tears..

am sorry baby..maan pleaded while aaron was in no mood to apologize him..

mamu, u don't even see me now, aap sirf maami ke shaath rehte ho,u don't love aaron now..turning his face opposite to maan..

all of the members smiled at that while geet blushed.. whereas maan was busy in trying to manofy his cutie..he came the other side, kneeling before him nahi bacha, mamu loves only you.. i was just busy, mamu is sorry, really sorry

Somehow maan managed to manofy him promising him whatever he wanted while geet just stood there admiring their cute bonding, the way maan was so free with aaron, away from all worries and difficulties in his life.. the way aaron loved him and expected so much from him.. with aaron maan was just like another kid.. will he love our kids just as much.. a shiver ran down her spine and she blushed.. geet, tu pagal hai, do din pehle shaadi hui hai n abhi se.. babajii..mera kuch nahi ho sakta..

While geet was busy in blushing within at her thoughts..another important discussion was going on the dining table..raj asked maan about the challange..

so, dear son you have managed to covince geet's family, i'm impressed but remember son.. it won't be going to be easy in future..maan just nodded, trying to show that he still was angry on his dad..

kab tak ho tum yahan par?? simran looked shocked at raj, was it a father asking that..

just few hours.. i have already rented a house from my money.. so we'll just pack and leave..maan said focusing on his words and went to his room

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Woh Pehla Ehsaas..

PART 8

Geet tried following him when raj stopped her..

geet..jee papa..

beta, i heard that you want to go with maan.. i am very happy with your decision but if you have any problem, you can always say to any one of us..think of us as your parents and tell without any hesistance and about my challange with maan, don't think i have any doubt on my son's talent, i know he is very talented to carry off the whole buisness on his shoulders but i want him to be experienced and ready for any responsibility coming his way.. i have learnt it a very hard way when i lost my parents at an age when i had that free attitude and it was very difficult for me to cope up with such adversities.. so i want him to learn it all his way, all this are part of our life.. i am hard on him because he needs to learn some things before he takes over this huge buisness empire of khuranas..geet just nodded aggreing with his point of view..

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Geet on the way to her room thought about the situation they were in no one appeared to be wrong, but everything was so messed up..babaji, sab achcha rahe, koi problem na ho..

She was shocked as she entered the room, maan was putting all his dresses in a bag..she didn't knew what should she say, he didn't even notice her..geet stood by the bedside waiting for him to notice her or speak anything, at the time she didn't had the courage to talk to him as he looked a bit too angry and she had no idea what he could do in anger, she looked above at her babajii..kahin sara gussa mujh par hi na nikal de.. so she stood their quietly waiting for him to complete playing with her saaree's pallu..maan looked at her,sighing deeply trying to control his anger and sadness over his dad's approach towards him..maan smiled little bit seeing her fidgetting with her pallu while talking to herself,though she wasn't audible to him but he enjoyed her expressions that changed each moment.. geet..

jee!!

kya baat hai..

aap abhi ghar se jaa rahe hain..his instantly pained face reminded her of what she said.. mera matlab hai hum..hum abhi jaa rhae hain..she said, barely audible..

Maan stood in front of her, looking in her eyes geet..if you don't want to come with me..seriously i don't mind..geet kept her eyes low..babajii mera wo matlab nahi tha.. but ye kya keh rahe hain, inhe koi farq nahi padta ki mei inke saath hun ya nahi.. the thought itself broke her heart..

maan looked at her lost in her thoughts..geet he nudged her..

geet looked up with a defeated expression on her face.. sach me aapko koi farq nahi padta if i come with you or not..though it was only few days of their wedding but she was very much affected by him..his being present in her vicinity created a different feel all around her, him being near her forced her to just think about him, she noticed everything about him to know him better and he wasn't even affected by her..geet lowered her eyes again fearing a heart breaking answer..

maan sighed, at this moment she was the most important person for him and how can she think he wasn't affected by her.. he cupped her face dearly forcing her to look at him and spoke softly.. geet, obviously mujhe faraq padta hai and to say the truth.. i really want you to come with me but that doesn't mean i want you to compromise with anything..it is your wish.. though i want you to support me when my dad dosen't see me worth of anything..his eyes again had that sad look..

nahi, aisa nahi hai..papa ko aisa bilkul nahi lagta..

geet please..abhi mei iss baare me koi baat nahi karna chahta..umm

geet nodded her head..

you can pack you bag..ya mei help karu..maan smiled..

mei kar lungi..she said..

As maan and geet decended down the stairs, they saw pari and rajveer also ready to leave the house for their own and raj and pari standing their with sad expressions..

dii, aap itni jaldi jaa rahe hain..maan said picking up aaron in his arms..

haan maan, veer ko office ka kuch urgent kaam hai, thats why..pari hugged geet and kissed her forehead dhyan rakhna apna..

pari's family moved out to the cars with aaron still in maan's arms..

Till yesterday the house was filled with so many people and today..raj made a sad face..sab veeran saa ho gya hai..

sab aapki wajah se..simran said with layer of tears in her eyes..its just two days, geet aayi hai aur aapki wajah se..thodi baatein bhi nahi kar payi mei apni bahu se..she turned her face to other side, showing her disstisfaction over whatever was going on..

uff draamebaaz..simi please..what will geet think kitni rondu saas mili hai mujhe..geet smiled slightly

raj please..i'm serious simran said, tears flowing down her eyes..simran, its just for some time and mark my words, your son will be so much changed after he comes back.. i don't want him to go throught the adversities, we have gone..at that time, no one was there whom i could have looked upto at that time..but maan and geet have us if they have any problem..haina beta..raj looked at geet..

Geet nodded looking at simran..simran hugged geet.. geet please..apna aur maan ka khyal rakhna..koi bhi problem ho, we are always there..geet took simran and raj's blessings with both of them kissing and forehead and repeating their lines to take care..

By that time, maan came inside and took both his parents blessings, hugged them though still trying to show that he wasn't affected that he has to leave them but geet could see the little tears at the corner of his eyes as he looked at her asking her to come with him..geet looked at his parents who were equally pained by his leaving..

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Maaneet reached their house in a taxi..it was a rented apartment on the 8th floor.. maan was worried whether geet would like the flat or not..her consent mattered to him a lot now..while maan was busy in his turmoil thinking about all her possible reaction..she would like it or not..

geet was still lost in the situation they were in, how maan would be feeling now..just like she felt while leaving her house..nahi why would he feel like that..hum dono to ghar wapas jaayenge hi naa..bas thode dino ki baat hai..

As maan opened the lock and door,geet looked around the flat, she took a tour of the house.. the drawing room was quite big hile the other one was little small leading to a washroom and balcony at the side..while a big balcony was there in front of the drawing room which showed the big garden of the society with little flowers and few trees.. the walls were painted creamy and the drawing room had the small kitchen..she smiled..the whole house is smaller than even maan's room..there was a bed only to be named as furniture.maan looked at geet waiting for her to speak something..

Geet smiled at him and he returned it..kaisa lagaa..??

achcha hai..bas ab hume ise ghar bnana hai.. he smiled.. i was thinking why don't we bring some necessary things for kitchen..and i have no idea about such things..he said giving the innocent look..

geet chuckled..theek hai..hum chalte hain..

Ek minute..geet said as they were moving out of the house..mere pass koi simple saare nahi hai..they noticed her saaree that was of nearly 10 lacs if not more.. he was just wearing simpler clothes..which didn't gave much clue of who he was..

umm..so change into something simpler..

but mere pass kuch simple nahi hai..almost all my saarees are like this only..she made a worried face..

After much spectulations, she changed into the a simple saare that she had..maan was surprised after looking at her, she glowed even more in that simple saare..why are you looking even more beautiful in this saare..he said without even thinking..

jee..she blushed little surprised at his words as maan closed his eyes god maan what were you saying..control!!

i mean, you are looking very beautiful in this saaree..geet nodded accepting his appreciation though that was very much through his eyes..

Maan locked the door as they came out and moved ahead together..maan looked at geet who was busy admiring her saare..geet, what's special in this sarree..

umm..actually ye saare bahut special person ne gift kii thi..

achcha..he quirked his brows..kisne..??

when i was doing my graduation in mumbai, there mrs. d'souza was the caretaker of the house where i lived..and she took so much care of me..that was the first time i was away from my family but i never missed them, any problem i had d'souza aunty was always there for me..like a very good friend a gaurdian..she gifted me this saaree when i was coming here after my graduation..so thats why the saare is special as the person was special..they both smiled and resumed moving to the shop..

While geet was thinking about her life at the college, maan was thinking how she explained the incident to him..she surely was a beautiful person, though the saare was nowhere to the standards of singhania's princess but still she treasured it..he liked how emotions mattered to her more than materialistic things..and a thing for their relation..they have started sharing experiences, which means they were accepting each other in their lives..he smiled..

Geet noticed him smiling..kya hua she asked surprised..

nothing, i was just thinking where are we going..dekhne se lag nahi rahaa that this way is leading to market..he said little confused..

kya?? she asked shocked aapko raasta nahi pta market ka..

Geet mein yahaa roz nahi aata hun..tumhe kaunsa pta hai raasta..he said in a sarcastic tone..

geet pouted..to abhi kya karein..

Maan looked around, no sign board was visible there..kisi se puch lete hain..

gud idea!! aap puchiye geet said immediately..he looked around to find anyone..chaliye, gol-gappe wale se puchte hain..

gol-gappe wale se..he asked bewildered..umm okk..

chaliye naa..geet was getting excited for gol gappe, so she captured his hand draaging him..maan was shocked for a moment becoming little stiff..

Geet stopped in her tracks feeling him stiff..omg what was i doing??babajii..she closed her eyes waiting for maan to burst out..maan came in front of her..geet..abhi se hi..he looked accusingly at her like sayingabhi se meri koi izzat nahi hai..

sorry..geet said making that baby like face melting him entirely..maan smiled theek hai chalo..maan moved and geet followed him just like a kid..

Excuse-me maan said to the vendor, who looked surprised at maan..geet looked shocked at maan..babaji kya ye golgappe wale se bhi english me baat karenge..

jee saab, kya kahaa apne..the guy was confused..actually mujhe puchna tha ki yha aas pas koi market hai kya?? he looked at geet's shocked face who immediately changed her expressions to a smiling face..

jii.. yahan se sidhe jaake chowk se left market hai..

thank you so much..maan said and the vendor smiled idotically at him clearly showing maan that he didn't understood anything..chalo geet..maan said and both moved on the footpath..though geet moved along with him but she so wanted to tell him that she wanted to have gol-gappe but just couldn't say it, she knew he wouldn't say a no to her..but still she didn't expressed her wish and moved along his side..

Edited by -misty--love- - 12 years ago

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Sonakshi Sharma

@sonal36

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Part 6

i loved description abt maan pic

geet maan littele romance was awesome

part 7

maan convincing geet family was so nice

part 8

geet maan shifted to new house

geet want gol gappe

poor geet cant ask maan

nw their real journey will start

cont soon

waiting 4 their beautiful and adventures journey

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

superb updates dear
loved the little maneet moments in between
loved the way how maan lft geet at their suhaag raat as he realized she was not comfortable with him
maan finally convinced in making geet's parent's also agree
so maneet finally started thier life in new house
waiting for more maneet moments...

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Wow just loved the update so maaneet ne apne life suru kar hi liyee hope sab thik hi jaeyaa

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

maaneet started their life
hope this challenge doesnt change maan very much
and what i m fearing is geet was saying we r here for few days if that few days turns out to be more then what will happen

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deejagi

@deejagi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Misty, great going. Waiting for the next part when they do the real shopping. Hope they will not mess up with their purchase. Forget about Geet, now I am cribbing for Gol Guppe, what to do?

P.S. Waitig for the next parts to appear too soon.

Jaya

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#319

nice update
loved maaneet's little romance...
maan convinced geet's family
now maaneet r their new home n started their new life...
loved it

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#320

maaneet married and start their new life..geet is rich but beautiful in look and heart..will maan buy gol gappe for geet😉 hope she ask him...😆😆😆amazing updates..pls cont soon..

Edited by Hanishadevi - 12 years ago