MG FF : A TORN RELATION #3 PART 35/138 LINK TO NEW THREAD ADDED FEB 11 - Page 67

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

mann kr rh h uss kamine veer ko maar dalu...i hope geet uss veer se bach gai ho...kahi veer ne payal k samne geet ko tho galat nai proov kr diya tha jiske wajah se payal ne geet se badla liya h...

maaneet scene was nice...waiting for nxt

thanks nikku
veer toh kamina hai
aur baki badme pata chalega

Originally posted by: gurti30

lovely updates dear

geet is trying hard to fight her fears but isnt able to come out of that nightmare and maan feeling more nd more guilt thinking geet is talking about him

loved the way geet took are of maans wounds and even scolded him

that veer took keys from payal without letting her know😡

thank u dear
yup payal and veer 😡

part 34
nice part...
OMG poor Geet...
damn that disgusting creature...
cont soon dear...

Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story and you are an amazing write.
Thanks for sharing your story with us

suhana marking this story to read ...

i think i missed certain part and dont know what happen about ayes-ha and arohi to geet? so veer also raped her or almost raped her?

A vry heart touching story..
Recntly I cm 2 knw about dis..ORCHID help me through Geet hlp desk 2 find this ff az i hav read its prologue long bck..
I jst finished all 34 parts in a go..luved it.
Geet iz so innocnt but suffred a lot in a vry tendr age..
Maan iz there 4 her though he iz also respnsible 4 her miserable condition.n nobdy gonna 4giv him 4 hiz deeds..bt he iz trying hiz bst 2 get her back wid her slf..
It vll take a lot of tym,luv n patience n Maan iz ready wid all dis..
I m vry cnfuze about Veer..iz he a Khurana..Maan's brother or couzn?
Wht he did wid Geet?
I m luking 4wrd 2 coming parts..
Update soin plzZ..

just came across ur ff
lovely and very differnt story
pls update soon

just came across ur ff
Awesome story...
Please update soon