MG FF : A TORN RELATION #3 PART 35/138 LINK TO NEW THREAD ADDED FEB 11 - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pvejani

ch.27&28

very emotional update.




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Posted: 11 years ago
UPDATING

anyone here????


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Posted: 11 years ago
~A TORN RELATION~

part 29

geet didnt listened to maan.. She had just turned her face.. While they were still in the lift.. The way she was mummering and he could easily guess that she was cursing him.. The way her pupils were dilated.. The way still her eyes were moist that made him drown in guilt...
Maan st : agar wo raat me hamari zindagi se hata sakta toh kabka hata deta geet.. This pain, your tears are making me waek mishty.. Aisa mat karo jaan.. Kaise samjahun tumhe.. Hamara baby tuumhe sirf takleef dega...
Maan hold her from her shoulder and she just shrugged away.. Geet was really tensed.. Her fears were again visible...
Geet : i knew aap sach nahi bol rahe ho... Aap kaise mere baby ke baare me aisa keh sakte ho.. Me janti hun.. Main koi nahi hun aapke liye.. Please aisa mat karo..
Her shaken voice made his bachi kuchi courage went in drain.. She was in pain. And was hurting herself just because his seeds are within her.. Wo uske ansh ke liye ussi se ladh rahi hai...
Maan cupped her face and wiped her tears which were daring to flow... He kissed her forehead that made her to cry more.. Geet just let go herself again.. His embrace he somwhere always comfort her and daily she was getting this confirmation...
The way she used to scared was getting reduced.. Maan's effort was bearing its fruit.. Atleast it started but still that lost trust or never developed trust was still to come..
But fate had again played...
Maan : mishty.. Gar aise rougi toh baby ka dhyan kaise rakhogi... You want your baby to be safe .. Toh efforts toh tumhe hi karne hai..
Geet just peeked in his eyes that were still not with her decision yet he was doing it..
Maan st : whay cant i say her.. Maan let her be calm phir aram se baat karna..maybe mom will help as she is not listening to me...
Maan made the lift stopped and made her to some out.. She was with him at every step.. He lead to his cabin.. Sixth floor was only used when it is necessary otherwise his office was at tenth floor.. But right now she was not ready to face his staff as they will be knowing her as mrs MSK for the first time...
Maan made her comfortable on the couch and asked her to be herself.. Maan kneeld infront on her and hold he soft hands ..
maan : mishty you will wait here.. Clients are waiting for me.. Dont step outside i am sending vicky...
Geet was still not pleased and maan could sense her by her eyes.. The panic was rising...
Maan : geet , please try to understand you need to stay calm.. Agar panic karogi toh you will affect baby and your health.. Please geet .. Hum baki baat reports ane ke baad karege.. Now will you stay here.. Believe me i wont do or say anything.. We will go acording to what doctor will say.. And rest is yours wish..
Geet : me baby ko abort nahi karungi.. Aur aap kuch nahi kahoge .. Baby waise bhi aapke liye koi maayene nahi rakhta.. Aap toh maan bhi nahi rahe the ki baby aapka hai..
She said with a painful smile.. It made him realise that not only his actions but his words had a huge impact on her..
Maan instaed of justifying himself just left.. He had already ordered lunch for her since she hadnt when they had left...
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that was the update...
Short tha...

But i actually updated for some regular readers...

Do read and comment..
Daeries your reviews motivates me to write...

Will try to update one more
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is not able to reduce geet's fear so sad may be by showing love and affection geet may start trusting maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da lovely update! Geet still scared! Maan takes her to the office wid him! update soon! well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww geet
for his baby fighting withh him
n maau all hepless bt how can he expect a mother to kill her baby
bn geet ya his words has immense effect on him
babji knows what will happen
n iss ff ka god toh Suhana hai na😆😆
lvd it
waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for update...

it was a sweet update..maan is really caring geet..

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part but it was short😕
maan has try a lot to regain geet's trust
eagerly waiting for d next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor geet she is so scared..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. Geet and Maan's tiff over the baby continues. Geet wants to keep the baby while Maan just tries his best to keep her calm not realising until the end how much his words have impacted on her. Fab job as always and can't wait to see what is in store next.

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