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neethu

@Kartikan91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

nice concept...do continue the storyline soon

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

hey dear congrats on the new story 😊
nice name must say 😊

waiting for more 😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

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oh god starting with bang geet left house because of angry on her parents aisa kya huwa hoga.she boarded the train where she met maan . oh god maan fida on her cute antics and geet scolding him for giving smile their conversation is really cute maan abhi se geet se darrraha hai.

mona id change kiya na yeh bhi achi hai

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

add me dear...my blog id...love2soma.wordpress.com

toh maan n geet met...dekhte hai kya gul khilate hai unke milna...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

lovely II part, why is geet crying

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maanluver

@maanluver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

wow di

that was such a fantastic update

geet hates just the mere presence of her parents

she says they have no right over her

she just wanted to get away from there

wonder what her mom did that she hates her so much

what is this mystery behind the fight

n the hatred geet hold for them

geet just ran away

n her mom sent a driver to follow her

where she just dodged him

n got into a train whose destination was unknown to her

maan was at mumbai

n he missed his flight so caught a train

maan seems of the jovial kind in this story

i don't know y but i kind of felt it like the way he spoke to adi n all

he entered the train

n saw a girl sobbing violently in his compartment

where he remembered there was no one sitting with him

maan was completely blank

as to how to respond

should he just sit there

or should he try n calm her down

till the time he could understand what to do

she put her palms down from her face

n maan couldn't help but stare at the serene beauty in front of him

finally maan asked her if she was ok

after like an hour of just standing there 😆

geet was so embarrassed of crying in front of a stranger

maan couldn't help but chuckle at her antics

which irked geet to no end

n maan immediately stopped chuckling

abhi se hi darr lag raha hai very gud maan babu

maan's consoling didn't work with geet at all

she just got more irritated with him

update soon di

waiting eagerly

muahhh

luvvv yaaa

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turbulence

@turbulence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Wow, awesome.

Geet hates her mom-dad, wht dey did for her to hate dem?

And poor maan misses his flight, quite unnatural for him, still mum. wali local puts lovers togezzr.

Geet continuosly crying, wanna leave her home, hope she's fine on d way.

Wiping nose on sleeve, maan ki smile se glare, oooh! maan needs to be careful.

Maan passing water and geet more angry, maan consoling no use, kya chakkar hai?

Hope it's not dat bad!

Geet says dad has no right to say anything, sounds like some btryl types.

Poor driver, geet fooled him succesfuly.

Just wanna see mannet togezzer, no matter wat.

Beautiful part, w8ing 4 more, update soon pls.

Pls gimme ur pm blog link, me'll see all ur updatez.

Lovely start.

P.S: me'll send u ff links, my frnd shll do dat also, pls read and comment, okay?

Ciao soon.

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

geet omg wt happened wt her parents did that she is that much angry with tem
how tey cheated her
n wow both met at station
n wah kiss codition mai geet crying
n maanu uff poor baby tried to console her bt he made her angry😆😆
first part was too cute
waiting 4 more
wana see how will their lv story start😉😉😉