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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

how did I miss this story??????

Chapter one was fantastic. The buildup was brilliant. You had suspense, emotion and drama.

Chapter two was heart breaking. You wrote it so well that I could feel Geet's heartbreak and trauma.

Can't wait for the next part!

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Wow nice os...
come across it and read it one go...
really marvellous...
Continue soon!!!

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

My quote in your first thread

Originally posted by: _Sanjana_
Read all the 9 parts in one go n i simply loved reading it..!! Loved the build up u had in your every update.!!
Story starting with some awesome flashback(first meet on flight n Maan's dream was a really good one) n then coming back to present n Geet in KM n their Tom n Jerry fights 😳😆 n then Maan getting insecure seeing Geet with Yash n then finally to his surprise Geet working at KC n sigh i missed the office scenes of Geet so much, you got me some awesome memories back of Geet.!!
U really write well Anu!!

Very Painful n Emotional story, loved reading the second threads update too..

Hated Rohit the most n dint like Geet for her foolish decision of marrying Rohit despite knowing he cheated on her before the marriage..!!

But loved Maan's unconditional love for his Geet n also Geet realizing her mistake by the time n breaking off that stupid marriage n confessing her love for Maan..!! ❤️❤️

Waiting for the next n happy wala update now.!!

Edited by _Sanjana_ - 11 years ago

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Anusha

@..AnushaGeet..

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

NOTE

Sorry guys, totally left out this one. 😆 Update coming up ASAP.!! I will update this one before anything else.!! Will be ending it too.. Sorry to keep you guys waiting for so long. 😳 And thanks for the patience too, and not throwing chappals at me...😆

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918644

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

will wait😊 for the update

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

will be waiting for the update!!!!!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

That's fine

We can wait for it

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Nida

@NinnzGm

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Jaana the first part was heartbreaking and so emotional I was crying through out the part !! I don't know, it was just so beautifully written and it really touched me..

the second part was honestly hard for me to digest,, I mean Geet picking someone else over Maan and then insulting him by claming that he is a liar and just wants to ruin her relationship for his own selfishness..It just didn't go down well with mee..

and the fact that she only remembered him when bad things started to happen just makes her look "matlabi"..

Maan is no ones backup plan, He IS The Plan !!..

and then the whole I want you back thing just pissed me off..

Honestly I would never want Maan to end up with someone like this.. he deserves better... and no I'm not at all saying that Geet deserves to be with someone like Rohit and that she got what she deserved,, no woman deserves to be treated or abused like that...

But this is Maan and Geet - the only time I can see them hurt each other is when they are ready to sacrifice themselves for Their Own Love towards each other... not for someone else like Geet did for Rohit...

I don't know.. I'm not liking this Geet and I'd honestly not want Maan to end up with someone who couldn't see his value from the start...

I know I'm sounding so harsh but for me Maaneet's love is divine something so pure and when Geet rejected Maan it just killed a part of maaneet's love for mee.. cuz in my world Maaneet are not shallow they feel for each other and they always have..

Naa... Jaana what did you do to mee :P just 2 parts and you made me goo through so many emotions... if this is not a sign of a brilliant writer then I don't know what is...

I don't know if I will be able to read the rest of this ff..

but I'm loving the fact that you are experimenting with the stories and concepts and I can assure you that I've seen you growing as a writer !!

Jaana I hope tumne bura nai mana.. maine pehle see hi kaan pakde hue hain :P

hahah see .. my comment is almost as long as your ff :P

Edited by NinnzGurti - 11 years ago